#4 FF:Journey of Passionate love Note on Page 72 (15/1/2018)

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

to be frank, Payal... when a chapter is written in 2 or more parts, reading just one at a time, feels incomplete..😛

I know.. infact 2 scenes are still missing in this chapter.

What to do.. my writer's block and laziness couldn't let me complete this chapter, like I wanted it to be.

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#352

Fantastic chapter Payal😃

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#353

Chappy feels so short but no complain 😛keep updating regularly dea.

Amazingly neeted their feelings and highlight the issue of girl face socially 👏jo cried out her heart while hiding the truth. like this egoistic man wbo cares,worry all for her behind the mask.

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priya

@sweety992

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Posted: 8 years ago

#354

Thanku dear😊

well now jalal going to do what? is he fell for something for jodha?

jodha bharmal too emotional?😊 niceee

superb chappy👏

waitinf for next update😊

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#355

Wonderful update

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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Keerthi

@Ammulu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#356

Woowww

Awesome update

superbb

thank godd bharmal came on tym

hope jalal will take care of her lyk her family do evn more dan dm soonn

PlzzZ update d nxt chappy soonn

cnt wait to read more

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#357

Amazing

Loved it

Jo trying to control herself

And Jalal admiring her ☺️

Update asap buddy

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#358

Thankyou for all the likes and comments, my dear friends!

I will reply to all comments, soon.😊

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#359

Excellent update..
Love it..
Poor Jo...the love for her family prevented her telling anything..
Update next soon.
Thanks for pm Payal.

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Res will read soon di 😃

Brilliant update di 👏👏

I hate Jalal for doing this to Jo 😡😡

Jo calls him right-A Heartless Monster, that's what he is

Jo is so deeply hurt 😭😭😭

Neirther she can lie to her father nor can she tell him thr truth 😭😭😭

Jalal deserves a severe punishment for this 😡😡

Jo was literally out of her senses when she decided to end it up😲😲

I thought Jalal would save Jo but it was Bharmal never mind🥱

At the time when Jo burt out the truth Jalal was dumb accha hua 😆😆

I don't understand him, is character is so hateful...Arghhh di u made me hate Jalal😆😆

I so wanna bury him alive😡😡😡

He can't see tears in her eyes neither can he let himself lose in front of her chahte kya ho tum Jalal😵

Ittu sa update 😕😕

Isme toh teaser jaisa feel aaya meko

Koi nahi update soon next time😡

U are taking hell lot of time di its is not acceptable😡😡

Sorry for the extremely late reply

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