#4 FF:Journey of Passionate love Note on Page 72 (15/1/2018)

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priya

@sweety992

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

its Nice 👏

Ahha Poor Jodha yr😭

Thanku dr 😊

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: dellaakdha
Res Payal..

Awesome update Payal😊

Feelings of Jodha is well written in the way that can be easily connect to her...👏

Poor Jo...she can't live her life as her wish..Her marriage life is not the way she dreamt of..But she has to live with that only for the sake of her father,family...many women life resembles Jodha's present situation..

It's good now Jalal can see her pain and part of him want his wife to be with him lifelong with her wish..

I love the last part... Jo and Ja feelings on their point of view is beautifully written..Now what is waiting for both of them?

Eagerly waiting for the next part Payal. 😉

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ketaki1

@ketaki1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

nicely written !!!!!!!!!!!!
I missed reading so much...
your writing have improved alot...more suttle...
i loved it..

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mama17

@mama17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Payal, plz update the next chapter soon. Don't make us wait for long.

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Awesome update sis 😃 Continue soonest and thanks for pm.

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#416

Finally u updated payal Di.I was waiting for it from so many days. It is beautiful. Loved it.please try to update soon.please frogive ur little sister for late reply.Thanks for pm

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konica.arora.92

@konica.arora.92

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Hey dear when r u updating next chappy

Please dear update soon

Waiting for it

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#418

Hi!

I am not writing for these stories now. I will resume writing these stories later. But nowdays,I am posting few individual snippets on my instagram. If you guys are interested,you can follow me there. My username is: " _itspayalsharma_"

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 7 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Hi!
I am not writing for these stories now. I will resume writing these stories later. But nowdays,I am posting few individual snippets on my instagram. If you guys are interested,you can follow me there. My username is: " _itspayalsharma_"

Take your own time Payal😊

Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago