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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam


Preoccupied with work in life

Well to be honest, I am on Team Fakhr and dont want one sided super power game by Jalal but more like Batman series. Fakhr was clever and capable enough to plan support for herself and for those efforts she deserved a more closely contested game with Jalal- where both sides win and no one looses. It came across as Superman vs Fakhr😆😆😆 Ek hi toh takkar thi Jalal ko, vo rehni chahiye😛 The detailing in the convo between Fakhr and Birbal was too one sided and almost threatening Fakhr. A close contest would have been more engrossing. Here Sharif and Samar story is now coming across as more thrilling.

Just my views😳

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Now it's okay. 😆 Oh I had understood that you're busy. 😔
I know you're completely in Fakhr's team, and want Fakhr to be the winner. But you know na, for sake of story at one point Jalal has to take the control of Fakhr in his grip, else she might turn into another Mah-Chuchak... Fakhr has not lost either, as she at last got what she wanted, the throne of Kabul and the respect of Mallika-E-Kabul, but she needed a warning from Jalal too...
About batman-style convo, well my brain has the capacity of only this much. 🤣 🤣 I wanted to write a convo which you described, but ended up with this one. 😆
Though, many of the readers commented that they fear Jalal accepted defeat in front of Fakhr.😛 Maybe in varies with different perception.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

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Now it's okay. 😆 Oh I had understood that you're busy. 😔
I know you're completely in Fakhr's team, and want Fakhr to be the winner. But you know na, for sake of story at one point Jalal has to take the control of Fakhr in his grip, else she might turn into another Mah-Chuchak... Fakhr has not lost either, as she at last got what she wanted, the throne of Kabul and the respect of Mallika-E-Kabul, but she needed a warning from Jalal too...
About batman-style convo, well my brain has the capacity of only this much. 🤣 🤣 I wanted to write a convo which you described, but ended up with this one. 😆
Though, many of the readers commented that they fear Jalal accepted defeat in front of Fakhr.😛 Maybe in varies with different perception.


Yes there were damn busy days. The convo was good, well written but I was expecting more of tight situation, where we get to know the weakness or need of Jalal too. Toh kya hua Maha Chuhak honi chahiye tabhi toh mazaa hai😆😆 Otherwise who likes SUPERMAN series😆😆 its too predictable. Fakhr should also be in a position of power😛

😳😡 what brain? Didnt the same brain create Fakhr😎 so its very much capable. What is required is detachment from Jalal😆😆

Obviously Team Jalal is HUGE😆😆 why did u make him handsome😡😡 turn him ugly😆😆😆 then u will see😉🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

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Yes there were damn busy days. The convo was good, well written but I was expecting more of tight situation, where we get to know the weakness or need of Jalal too. Toh kya hua Maha Chuhak honi chahiye tabhi toh mazaa hai😆😆 Otherwise who likes SUPERMAN series😆😆 its too predictable. Fakhr should also be in a position of power😛
Aap ka to mazaa hay, but I need to finish the story na? 😆
Yes I understand what you're telling... Let me see if I can write another Jalal-Fakhr convo emphasizing these. 😔

😳😡 what brain? Didnt the same brain create Fakhr😎 so its very much capable. What is required is detachment from Jalal😆😆

No actually the brain is overloaded with so much junks that it is not able to produce quality output. 😆

Obviously Team Jalal is HUGE😆😆 why did u make him handsome😡😡 turn him ugly😆😆😆 then u will see😉🤣

I didn't make anyone handsome. 🤣 It's the imagination of the gurls who see him as the handsomest person of the world! 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
sorry for being extremely late buddy
I don't know how I missed the chapters
chapter 39

Jalal and Jo are building their relationship
a new beautiful Start

hawww
that Samar tried to kill Jalal
hufff
nothing happened to him
Jo saved him again.. though unknowing
Hehe
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Posted: 8 years ago
chapter 40
Jalal is so smart
Hehe
omg
poor suja
swetiii thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
chapter 41...
Atleast Jalal believed that suja is innocent
now what will happen
hufff
update asap buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

sorry for being extremely late buddy
I don't know how I missed the chapters

It's okay dear. 😳 Thanks for coming here. 😃

chapter 39

Jalal and Jo are building their relationship
a new beautiful Start

hawww
that Samar tried to kill Jalal
hufff
nothing happened to him
Jo saved him again.. though unknowing
Hehe

Thanks for posting your instant response. loved it. 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

chapter 41...
Atleast Jalal believed that suja is innocent
now what will happen
hufff
update asap buddy

Thanks for reading. Don't know when I will update next. 😔 Stay tuned by then. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous chappi stuti.. Thank god jalal believe that suja is innocent. Now what will happen in war.. Plz save jallu... Update next plz

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