New Life: Thread 3... Chapter 50 (epilogue) updated

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Amos Sarah

@Roulan15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Tanx 4 D Update
I Just Luv D War Strategy
Is Sujamal Dead
Precap Is A Suspense
Do Update Soonest

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Amazing

Tension is in the air

U are an amazing writer dear

U create an environment of the going on scenes so beautifully..

Wow

Loved it

Hope jalal kills that sharifuddin this time

Update asap buddy

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#303

Hello meri pyaari betijaan...😳😛...

after a long long n long gap today no no now I have finished my favorite story NEW LIFE by continuous reading since 3 days...

Sorry for not being regular from 6 to 7 months and you know the reason very well...😃😛...

And end of my bak bak coming to storyline

You have excellent n brilliant knowledge of taking story forward without any repetitive scenes from other lovey dovey fictions... you have taking very smart move for every character... your filling life in every character...

Kehne ke liye ye tumhare likhi huyi fiction he lekin real history se kam nahi he ye kahani... mujhe ek baar bhi nahi laga ki am reading some fictional story.. balki from chapter one am feeling like am watching jodha akbar serial once again.. I mean its missed phase...

I am feeling very sad for two unfortunate brothers... one is mirza n other is sujamal... between the clutches of cruel fate n within the dirtiest game of politics that too from be loved ones two Nobel efficient lives are brutally crashing down without any mercy... and you have very well portrayed the helpless condition of the mighty emperor and her highness despite knowing every cunning politics playing with their brother life that too in their name itself...

Fakrunnisa... the very important character of this fiction though she was not at all a part of the show you didn't let readers feel that in any of the phase of this story... really hats off for strength n creativity of your mind... a cunning lady as dangerous as mahamanga or mahachuchak begam rather say more than those ladies playing the very crucial n cruel role in development of Kabul's political life n her brothers sinking personality n ranking in mughal empire... I really appreciate her mind game with clean moves... and more than that I appreciate your imagination of moulding her character like that...

Coming to dialogues mujhe lagta he you have to become professional in writing dialogues for movies... you have really strong hold of words which were used in which situation in what emotions n feeling.. the right proportion of words the right time to use them... Everything every little thing am observing... I really felt awestruck ... trust me its not at all exaggeration but its truth...

Talking about love making track... though they have already crossed that very special phase of their life a long back , your portraying of their feelings love desire passion stands differently giving a fresh n new feel for a reader... their pure love after the disaster they experienced a year back blossomed very beautifully midst of thousands of thorns, their raw desires their new passions for each others body n soul have been blended beautifully like new lovers... you never let the reader feel odd by reading love making of old husband n wife but it gives the excitement n freshness to explore the love making of new lovers...

Coming to overall story plot it is a perfect blend of purest love between husband n wife, desire n passions between two lovers, innocent selfless love of brother n sister, dirty politics, light hearted family sentiments...

Hmmm at last I really solute for your hard work darling... and please update the next part soon.. am eagerly waiting for reading further... love you...

Edited by SUSHlovesJOJA - 8 years ago

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karthika

@kattylovestammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy
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Akka... awesome update.. 👏. i missed this story a lot... its has been so long since u updated this story.. i hav been following this story in facebook even before joining this forum... today after seeing the title itself i bacame so glad... and i was not fond of war scenes before.. but i liked war scene in narnia... tats it... and i love to watch war scenes now after seeing bahubali... tat was really an epic film according to me... while reading this update i felt something.. now dont laugh at me..😆. actually samar singh's addressing to troop reminded me of brutus's oration... i know i m not making any sense here.😆.. but i felt like tat... i just imagined tat scene... and while jalal was thinking abt war strategy... it reminded me of bahubali scene in which they will discuss abt the strategy... only difference is.. tat is trisul strategy and this is sandwich strategy... i really dont hav knowledge abt war strategies... just hav seen in films... while reading this it just felt like a film for me... and really u r sooo gud in writing abt historical wars, politics and crimes.. of course riddles too.😉.. i loved jalal and jodha scene.. though it was short i really loved it... their love and concern towards each other...tat was magical... and is sujamal alive? I think he is playing the same game which shariffudin played on him...wat to say more? U r simply superb...👏.. wat is gng to happen next? Only u know for now ... after u update we will know... soo update soon... not only this update ur other stories too.. precap is interesting... waiting for the next update...

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Flawless update

War strategies were really amazing 👏

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Chapter 42:

Samar singh is addressing the soldiers including those of Sujamal and they are so disloyal that except one all are abiding😲😡 Sharif is going to lead them? Poor Sujamal, Samar ke saath uske soldiers ne bhi dhoka diya😭. Nayan singh is killed but is Sujamal alive?😕 was he only drugged? so that he can be blamed for war or killed there? Jalal and Maan singh- kya jodi banayi hai😆😆 dono ek doosre ki baat samajhte hai!😉 Ahah Jalal found out that its Sharif strategy, ab toh yeh marega pucca😆😆 Jalal has soft corner for the tribals😛 and he does not want to kill them. Maan is more sensible than Ratan, Bhagwant and all😆😆

OH precap- Fakhr is back😳😎==== dont kill her😆

So next time its war time!🥳

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cutecc753

@cutecc753

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Posted: 8 years ago

#307

WAR TIME...😃 WILL SHARIFF ATTACK JALAL'S CAMP??? WHAT HAPPND TO SUJAMAL?????😕 I DNT THINK HE IS DEAD...LETS SEE...

UPDATE NXT CHAPPY FIRST PLZZZ

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous
Read ysterday but the net was too slow..
Chappy is awesome as usual..
It's okay dear! 😳 Thank you so much for reading...
Jo's care for jalal was supercute..
😃 😳
Cncernd for Sujamal.. wht will happen next..
Dekhte hay! 😛
Hope the war will not tale place..
Hmmm let's see!
Sharifuddin nd Ratan Singh's end is near..
You mean Samar Singh right?
Update nxt chapp soon..
Trying... 😃
Nd thnx for pm

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: cutecc753
WAR TIME...😃 WILL SHARIFF ATTACK JALAL'S CAMP??? WHAT HAPPND TO SUJAMAL?????😕 I DNT THINK HE IS DEAD...LETS SEE...
UPDATE NXT CHAPPY FIRST PLZZZ

Hold on! 😆 Thank you so much for your excited comment! 😃