NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 22- Chapter 27 (2 pts)-9th FEB - Page 11

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Totally agree with you kal di

'Oh... God... no...' She suddenly clutched her chest. Maybe because she did not know what else to do or how else to react. Maybe because she wanted to search for her heart - since it was beginning to feel awfully hollow within.

Just then, her mind went blank. It was too terrifying to face her own thoughts - more terrifying than the sight of the savage ogre that stood in front. A white sheet blinded her vision and her head began spinning.

If Dhani, who was kneeling nearby, had not caught her in time, Heera would have collapsed upon the floor.

When she did come back to her senses, and hold on to Dhani thereafter, the young lady could not make out if she was in Hell or on Earth. Her head was throbbing and the fresh spasms of acute stress had temporarily blurred most of her vision.

Lashyyy!!! 👏👏

Stupendous piece of writing above. Call me crazy but to me this is where the entire story to this point is encapsulated. What a beautiful coming together of and an avalanche of feeling. Is it even just feeling...no, it's more. To think that such a strong strong strong young woman can be this overwrought by the realisation of AMK's true identity gives the love story an intensity that hits hard. If he were just the 'enemy' revealed, she would not have lost her mind and senses. But here, she lost it and I can only be thankful that the bottom didn't fall off her heart and she was able to hang on and use the heart to later tell her mind to wake up and start functioning.

To think that she can face Khalil but not this truth. More also the truth that she could be the one who has inadvertently betrayed her beloved Parnagharis. How she can face these thoughts is unfathomable. In Hell or on Earth or hell on earth...Writer e Khas, I know you will tell it in your inimitable way.

Originally posted by: sho123

Glad u like my review bindu
About khalil torture I agree I suggested less
What u think what more we should do

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Wow,perfect pic and situation,Harshu!!👏

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Me😲

I am very bad in this😆

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Good one Harshu di... 😃

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Not only is the picture perfect to the T, but even the situation in the two cases is similar! Amazing find, Mallika-e-musing Tai Saheb! ⭐️

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

@Harshu di... as Adwi said... both the picture and the situation matches with the story. Great job! 👏

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Harshu dear your musing is simply perfect

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Is this how Akbar carried Heera?😳