NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 22- Chapter 27 (2 pts)-9th FEB

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Not khalil's cruelty or harka's helplessness but khan sahib's concern and care made me cry lashy..

What a chapter.. awesome,wonderful,fascinating are not the words because your writing,your imagination are much much more than this..

I am speechless

But here a warm 🤗 for you. I want to say many things yet I don't know what to say..

I don't think anyone could write this story,this chapter except you dear author. Love you re🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

@Bold... How am I going to type a review for this? 🤔

Same here.. I am actually speechless this time🤓

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Bindu.

So TRUE!!⭐️

Why have you become so busy,akka? Not only the update of PBD but I miss you more!😭😭

More than being busy its the lost appetite for writing that's keeping away from IF.

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Source90

@Source90

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Excellent chapter 27 Lashy dear and marvelous writing skills thnx for the PM.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Lashy, this latest chapter was a peach, a masterpiece. What I loved best was of course, Heera's indomitable courage even in the face of such tremendous odds and her never say die spirit. If she hadn't shown the resourcefulness she had shown in her last ditch attempt to save herself and her people by sending the plea for help with the coordinates where they were situated, Akbar and his men would never have been able to reach in time.

Similarly the impassioned plea of Abkar to his Khuda to show him the way before all was not lost was simply brilliant. These two scenes stood out for me. It showed the true resilience and character of the two individuals named Heera and Akbar. After that, the brilliant and masterly handling of the attack and the way in which Akbar took down his enemies was nothing short of absolute brilliance. It was Ustaadesque!

There is a very short scene where Heera is shown to be doubting Abkar on the basis on all the evidence she has seen or heard. However, she quashes it aside in one fell sweep reinstating and reaffirming her hope and faith that her Khan Sahib could do no wrong. I am a bit apprehensive now about how Heera is going to accept or take this whole revelation.

What is Khalil going to do? I get the vibes that he is going to do the mud in your eyes trick and escape from there biding for his time to avenge himself upon Akbar and Heera.

Edited by shailusri1983 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

More than being busy its the lost appetite for writing that's keeping away from IF.

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Good Morning Periamma, Bindu and my darlings..🤗 Happy Friday and have good weekend!

It seems everyone still relishing the my Chellam's latest marvel.

Edited by Kalgi22 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
Lashy, this latest chapter was a peach, a masterpiece. What I loved best was of course, Heera's indomitable courage even in the face of such tremendous odds and her never say die spirit. If she hadn't shown the resourcefulness she had shown in her last ditch attempt to save herself and her people by sending the plea for help with the coordinates where they were situated, Akbar and his men would never have been able to reach in time.

Similarly the impassioned plea of Abkar to his Khuda to show him the way before all was not lost was simply brilliant. These two scenes stood out for me. It showed the true resilience and character of the two individuals named Heera and Akbar. After that, the brilliant and masterly handling of the attack and the way in which Akbar took down his enemies was nothing short of absolute brilliance. It was Ustaadesque!

There is a very short scene where Heera is shown to be doubting Abkar on the basis on all the evidence she has seen or heard. However, she quashes it aside in one fell sweep reinstating and reaffirming her hope and faith that her Khan Sahib could do no wrong. I am a bit apprehensive now about how Heera is going to accept or take this whole revelation.

What is Khalil going to do? I get the vibes that he is going to do the mud in your eyes trick and escape from there biding for his time to avenge himself upon Akbar and Heera.

Yup how Heera is going take this revelation is the million dollar question now. Enjoyed reading your take.😳

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Good Morning Periamma, Bindu and my darlings..🤗 Happy Friday and have good weekend!

It seems everyone still relishing the my Chellam's latest marvel.

Good morning sachu patti , kal di and all my sweet friends

Happy Friday