NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 22- Chapter 27 (2 pts)-9th FEB - Page 10

Originally posted by: harshu27

'Khuda... have I not been a dutiful servant of yours? Have my prayers ever been half-hearted? Then... why? You've blessed me with success in every other venture... but, when it comes to my life's most important venture, I can't see success... why? I challenged Huzoor that I would stop Khalil... that I would find the Sahiba... but...' In a spurt of hysteria, he glimpsed up, questioning Mother Nature for being nothing but a mute witness to his plight 'Tell me... they ARE here somewhere, are they not? In a remote corner of your dense jungles? My men think I may be losing my mind... am I really going mad?'

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG... I'm truly breathless, senseless and now speechless. What a terrible chase. God I'm still in that darkest forest. The Marwari racer... Bahadur... yellow kerchief... Abkar beloved pupils.. their care.. Kahlil and his men gruesome.. helpless Parnagrah people.. fragile Heera and strongest Abkar... amazing awesome. 👏

When I read Akbar carrying his precious possession.. you don't believe I cried. The tears automatically rolling down. OMG the much needed sense of peace. 😭

Chellam.. don't expect anything more from me. It's something beyond my capacity to put down in words. Love you, Chellam.😭

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

After reading this chapter, I'm really worrying for you, Chellam. I'm getting a feeling like you're wasting your precious time here.😭 Your talent should be louded beyond this IF world.

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Totally agree with you kal di

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Gosh,Lashy di..I don't remember being SO tensed while reading a story EVER! What a nail-biting,heart-pounding update!! Hats off to you,Writer-e-Khaas!!👏👏

Though I knew Heera would be safe and Khan Sahib would win the challenge ultimately,there was a constant fear throughout for the safety of Heera and her ppl! I thought all the guards and maids would've been killed while Heera took a nap out of exhaustion..😭😭 Thank God you had some mercy on pour souls and ur poor readers! And I couldn't express how terrible it was to read abt all the physical agony and humiliation Heera was subjected to by those brutes!😡😡

Our poor Khan Sahib was bleeding and so exhausted physically and mentally..😭😭 It was so painful to read abt his state.Tears welled up while reading his pleas to Khuda! 😭

But,his prayers were answered soon..😊And horses making noises when they felt Marwari racer was really unexpected and awesome! I love this Marwari racer and Bahadur so so much!!❤️

Khan Sahib's strategy,his perfect aim from such a long distance in dark,drawing circles near bahadur's ear,the fight..EVERYTHING was fantastic and gave an immense joy! The teaser pic suits to what he did so well!❤️

'But remember...' a vengeful half-smile crept through Akbar's lips "I' deal with Khalil!'

>>What a line..what an attitude!!🤪Here,I was grinning like crazy!!😆

Forced to kneel on the floor as a mark of defeat - blood from open wounds soaked his tunic, his reddened eyes spewed volumes of hatred with every passing blink. But even in that disgraced condition, even as envy shook him senseless, he had to admit - he was taken aback. Taken aback - by how the mentor had managed all this, and more importantly, by what he was currently witnessing!

>>Aahh..how soothing this was to read and imagine!!Khalil on his knees,defeated and wounded..he deserves much more..1000 times more!!And I'm sure you won't disappoint us!

'Not asleep... unconscious...' Akbar soon corrected himself, realising that he'd been holding her for a few moments longer than he must.

>>I know,I shouldn't laugh but I can't help!☺️😆

'Sahiba, there's nothing else that I've been able to recall so fondly, ever since...'

>>Aww..his answer was so ❤️ !! How I wish Heera had listened to this heartfelt confession..*sigh* that's not gonna happen anytime soon.

All of us were very tensed of Heera's reaction since you put up the teaser.We were right in guessing she would make no mistake in zeroing upon who the best officer Khalil was referring to.But,her love and trust overpowered other senses! Should I be happy abt this or sad that she'd be heart broken once the truth comes open?😔

Anyway,I LOVED Heera's sharp senses when she said this..'I was thinking... the Shehzaade must've wanted the Farmaan badly if he put his best men on the job...' she paused 'even his best men couldn't find it... so, one could only imagine the kind of name and fame it'd bring to the man who actually does hand him the original Farmaan!'..I didn't expect such a thing from Heera seeing her almost unconscious just a few moments ago and was pleasantly surprised,di! She's a true warrior and the mind being only weapon..she proves Durga's words right time and again!⭐️👏👏

It must've been very difficult to complete this amidst the holiday packing.Thank you so very much,di! You are the bestest of the bests!!⭐️⭐️

Enjoy ur holidays to the fullest and update ASAP once you return😳..I'm very excited for the further happenings of the story hereafter with UAMK turning into MAMK and fulfilling his rest of the responsibilities!

Love you!❤️

Originally posted by: sho123

It's really difficult to comment on this update but can't help myself from commenting and giving my reviews so here I am to give you my reviews on part 1
From the beginning of the update I was with the mantra of Plz keep heera safe and plz make Akbar came on time I was feeling like reading whole update in flick of seconds
When khalil place his fingers on heeras cheeks I really want to chop his those disgusting fingers and when heera talked about farmaan and Khalil laughed it out Reminding about the painful death of durga I really want to chop his whole body
It's really hurtful to imagine heera expression when she get to know how her jiji in her last breath tried to save their lands and people and within few moments she realised where the farmaan is
She too guessed like her sahib did she too was about to do same what Akbar did but the only difference is that what she was offering to khalil already done by Akbar for her
Khalil mention about the best officers put for search for farmaan immediately made heera suspicious on Akbar just like her sahib heera instincts and brain is too sharp but she not sure about it as her heart don't agree and neither many things that Akbar did conform her suspicions for her he was her Savior
Poor heera got so much filled up due to which she lost her balance I wish Akbar there to hold her but alas he is not but her friend dhani is
Khalil enjoying This state of heera And I will enjoy that state of khalil in which he will be bashed with hunter and then burnt alive
Heera proposal finally interested khalil especially after she mentioned him about how useful or will be and how it will help him to gain more power and position
On no khalil separated heera from other And want to make heera his slave how pathetic and disgustful of him the thoughts which he has in his mind makes me want to kill him
Finally u mentioned about sahib too his state is no better than his sahiba as he feels She need hI'm and so she does
He just don't want to stop like me don't want to until I read whole update

Poor he so tired both physically and mentally still just can't take a breath completely to avoid wasting time even in breathing properly
His men feel like what's there master has become no rest just going on and on they should understand by now that their master is in love so can't do anything apart from searching for his sahiba like madman what I love most is his instincts and brain still working in fact more than before and yayyy he chose right path
Heera dragged how cruel of them and finally when she got opportunity she did what she can she send off her horse with msg or help she too showed how we should react on time of emergency but alas she got caught by the devil but thank god that horse ran off on time
I thoroughly enjoyed the part 1 but was literally holding my breath
Love you di for such an amazing update

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

More than being busy its the lost appetite for writing that's keeping away from IF.

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Good morning 6Bs! 🤗

Have a great day! 😃

@Bindu, thanks dear! 🤗

Where's our Rose?🤔

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Awesome review sherry

And love the most the idea of torturing Khalil

He deserve much more