AKDHA SS- RHYTHM (Completed) - Page 12

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Awesome chappy

Wrong timing of her MIL

Hope they can be one

Jo loves him

Update soon

Plz patch up them

Originally posted by: misty22

My jodhuuu. . . . Ur sooo awsm. . . Nd ur writing skills are damn perfecto. . . . I was amazed at how deep thinking u hv. . . Dat mks me immersed into it. . . . Sooo ebchanting. . Nd d way u hv described the turmoil inside jo. . . Her fears nd hidden emotions . . Hats off honey. .

Think i hv to start takin classes frm u. . .

Nd abhi. . He is a cuddler . . .

Nd jalal. . . Awww he is sooo sweet. . .

Nd dat man. . . Eyed jo. . . Nd niw jalal is nt gonna leave u brat. . . I lv u darlo. . . He is soo caring nd sweet. . .

Woah. . . Jo is realising her lv fr ja. . . M soo happy. . .

I wanna see a perfect family . . .

M soooi damn excited . . Lv u again . .

Thnku fr pm nd update asap . . .

Oh misty thank you so much sweetheart. But I am not that great writer that you take classes as u r best in your own way. But I must really take classes from u on how to give comments that makes the reader blush abt it for days together like u alwz do it to me. The feeling is so overwhelming. Thank you hon. Love u loads.

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Awesome chappy

Wrong timing of her MIL

Hope they can be one

Jo loves him

Update soon

Plz patch up them

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Awesome story dear👏

I read whole story in 1 go😉

Finally our Jo gonna meet Ja saying yes for the marriage proposal😳

Please make them unite asap😳

Update soon

whoaaa...in one go?? I am surprised that you didnt get exhausted as they were very lengthy. Anyways thanks a ton Saachi di

Originally posted by: Naazrt

hehe yup I know sissy and you know my father always said to me that puri duniya me mere jaisa koi bhi nahi hai hahahaaa iam one piece hahahaa my stomach is paining hahaa

Originally posted by: Naazrt

omg yippeee she is agreed wow beautiful I know that she will surely agree and now she is agreed muaaah fantastic update sissy can't wait more here to read further you made my excitement doubled this time love you alot my sissy what a update muaah muaah muaah ..i really cant wait aah when jodha is confess and my jallu's reaction ufff you made me going despo and despo marvellous marvellous marvellous update plzzz i request you continue soon sissy plshhh.. thank you bohat saara bohat bohat bohat saara for pm me my sissy muaaah,.

oh naazy I think we wud have made a perfect couple had either of us been a boy. So many MUAHHS but we r not committed.😆

it was awesome and long chapter ,
really like the bonding of jalal and abhi,
m happy that finally Jodha has realized her feelings for jalal , now make them unite soon and make jalal to say yes only when Jodha tell him that she is ready.
don't dare to make jalal denying the proposal this time
😡 as u have given many twists and I know u , u can even give this twist[/QUOTE]Thanks Vrindu.