AKDHA SS- RHYTHM (Completed) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Jodhu

here... i have updated this at your behest Vrindu.

I dnt knw which is other story you r talkng abt, te untitled one or the spl os i wrote for alina. But I am right now working on the spl os update n will resume the untitled one once I finish it.

I may however update rhythm regularly I hope.thanks hon.

This chapter has me feeling very sad for Jalal. First ,to know that his father had to face so much humiliation when the proposal was turned down. Next, when he told Jodha that he would not interfere in her life again. Third, at the salon, when he had to leave a wailing Abhi behind.

But the harsh realities of life hit Jodha hard when she had the harrowing encounter with an animal like Shamser Singh. That got her thinking seriously about her priorities. Swami ji's explanation about life and Abhi's tantrums led her to the eventual realization that she has fallen in love with Jalal.

How the tables have turned - while Jodha is excited and upbeat about the upcoming meeting, our crestfallen Jalal seems to be quite detached.

I also loved how Jalal gave Shamser Singh his well-deserved punishment - by beating him black and blue as well as having him thrown out of the apartment.

An action-filled chapter that I enjoyed a lot. Need I tell you how much I am looking forward to the next chapter, Jodhu? Thanks dear .

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

it was awesome and long chapter ,
really like the bonding of jalal and abhi,
m happy that finally Jodha has realized her feelings for jalal , now make them unite soon and make jalal to say yes only when Jodha tell him that she is ready.
don't dare to make jalal denying the proposal this time
😡 as u have given many twists and I know u , u can even give this twist

Originally posted by: Jodhu

Of course, I trust u with all my heart my crazy Naazy😆. Kanch ki gudiya🤣.Seriously, only u can come up with such comparisons.

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Awesome story dear👏

I read whole story in 1 go😉

Finally our Jo gonna meet Ja saying yes for the marriage proposal😳

Please make them unite asap😳

Update soon