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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

OMG OMG , can't wait for next !

she has finally agreed , would love to read how she'll confess & then jalal's reaction to it .

very nicely u hv penned it down . all her emotions , his feelings i realy liked it .

especially that pic of jo , nice put & very apt. 👏👏👏

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Update was good but it broke my heart 😭😭😭
Why can't she accept Jalal
I understand about the Anurag thing but I don't agree with Jodha on this
I don't like neither Anurag nor that Ruk😡😡

It s not that easy dear. Hers n Anurag's wasnt an arranged marriage. She was in love with him.

There are also other factors like the society. Though the liberty in thoughts are emerging gradually, there r still people who bad mouth women if she remarries with another man after the death/divorce from first husband.

And one cant antagonise every person in the society n live amidst it.

But dont worry they r meant to be. Nothing will keep them apart. But love does have a lot of hurdles in its way but the ultimate fruit of it will be sweetest, once all the hurdles have been overcome successfully.

Thanks honey.

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
OMG OMG , can't wait for next !
she has finally agreed , would love to read how she'll confess & then jalal's reaction to it .

very nicely u hv penned it down . all her emotions , his feelings i realy liked it .

especially that pic of jo , nice put & very apt. 👏👏👏

Thank you dear. I wont keep u waiting for the next update of this for much longer.

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: misty22
Sooo touching update it was jodhu . . Btw rell me i shd call u by ur name or diii. . . .
Nd u hv written it sooo brilliantly . . . Nd potrayed every emotion soo well. . . It md me feel dere condition . . .
I know its difficult fr jo to move on. . . Bt she has to. . Evn abhi feels connected wd jalal. . . Jo need jalal nd needs jo. . . Dey need lv. . . Dey need to be healed together . . . Smtimes anurag nd ruku erks me wd no fault od dere s . . Solly fr dat. . Bt cnt help. . .
Jo shd think over. . Nd accept jalal. . I cnt wait to see dere relationship blooming. . . Nd hving a kid of dere own. . . Awssmm update . . . Thnku fr pm nd update asap . . Waiting 😳

Thank you my misty darling... may all wishes come true in the forecoming chapters.

you can call me by whichever way you r comfortable with. That s no way gonna change anythng between us.

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Naazrt

aww Sissy believe your sis na haha I won't crush you my jaanu sissy because you are like my kaanch ki gudiyaa na ..if anything happen to you then what about me haan ..hahahaa..

Of course, I trust u with all my heart my crazy Naazy😆. Kanch ki gudiya🤣.Seriously, only u can come up with such comparisons.

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
This chapter shows how Jalal and Jodha deal with the 'awkward " situation . While Jalal welcomes it , Jodha, on the other hand , has reservations about it. Both can't be faulted for their stand. We are able to empathise with Jodha and understand her POV.

Felt really bad for Humayun when Jodha bluntly refused his idea of a union between her and Jalal. Although it devastated her to hurt him, she had no option but to make it clear to him that she would not even consider such a proposition.

Very nicely written, Jodhu. 👏I cannot recall much of what happened in the movie ( it has been years ), so am waiting eagerly for the next update. 🤗

Thanks for the mature n reviewing comments on the update Rose.

And dont worry, I will make u recall the movie entirely along with my bits of imagination here n there to keep up with the flow.

Thanks again dearie.

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
Update this and ur other story too 😃

here... i have updated this at your behest Vrindu.

I dnt knw which is other story you r talkng abt, te untitled one or the spl os i wrote for alina. But I am right now working on the spl os update n will resume the untitled one once I finish it.

I may however update rhythm regularly I hope.thanks hon.