Akdha FF- Jealousy (COMPLEATED)

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: avika444
Did u get it ?? or should i explain u again ??

no i got it thx

and my update got deleated again

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Hello Guys! This is the second time I am writing this since my last one got accidently cleared! Enjoy and share your suggestions!

Jodha quickly changed from her normal clothes to the ones she bought with Jalal earlier. She looked in the mirror statisfyed with her chania choli and necklace set, and secretly admitted Shenshah has a good taste. She set her nose piercing and tikka, and then called out to Moti, Zakira (Who is Jodha maid in this one) and all her other maids to do her hair and makeup, in seconds the beauty was effortlessly flawless. She looked in the mirror one last time and turned around to make her way to the Jashan. But before her stood Shenshah Jalaludian Muhammad wearing a green and diamond studded King Coat with his other clothing smiling wide at her.

" Takliya." he said with a wave of his wrist referring to Moti and the other maids not taking his beautiful eyes off from her.

" What is this Shenshah, why are you wearing the same colours as me." Jodha pouted to Jalal.

" Well the thing is that Jodha Begum, I like to tease you and you can take it as a part of that." Jalal said to her still smiling.

" Whatever Shenshah, I don't want to get late for the Birthday jashan of one of my best friends." Jodha icly told him.

Jalal let the words one of my best friends pierce him but he managed to reply.

" I will be your escort today Jodha Begum." he coolly replied.

Jodha tried to protest but she knew it was to no use. She quietly held his hand as they walked down.

Ruqaiyaa burned with jealousy when she saw Jodha and Jalal walk in together. And to add to that all the begums, Ammijaan and Phupi jaan complimented her on how she looked today. And no one, no one complimented Ruqaiyaa which increased her jealousy.

When the time came to announce Mirzas favourite gift, he said it to be Jodha's gift which was an heavy magnificent Bow and Arrows which all had Mirzas name carved into them. Jalal gripped his shamsheer tightly and controlled his temper. The whole night went like this, Jodha happily talking to everyone while Jalal gave death glares to Mirza who kept on looking at Jodha.

Jodha changed into her night clothes and was about to go to sleep when Jalal entered her room with a shahi farmaan.

" Jodha Begum, Raja saab has sent a letter for the Royal Family of Agra and I would like for you to read it." Jalal told her while looking at her on how she still looked breathtaking even in her night wear. Jodha took the notice and opened it.

Dear Royal Family of Agra,

Greetings from Maharaja Bharmal, I am pleased to announce that my neice, Savitri is getting married. Your presence will be greatly appreciated.

Jodha then looked in the eyes of Jalal to ask if they could go.

TO BE CONTINUED

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Edited by jazzxxqueen - 8 years ago

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

lovely post dear...please dont stop it...and send pm in hyperlink...if you need help you can ask anyone in this forum

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

wow
too good
Jalal burning in jealousy
haha
when will they confess
update asap buddy

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

All the way jealously doing it's work.. getting interested day by day.. contribute soon nd do pm

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hello! I am very dearly sorry for this late update. Amer Track is going to start and that will take up a very big part of this SS. I am thinking of them to confess and have their First time in Amer (maybe). Give your thoughts below and hit like. At least 20 before next update!

P.S Jealousy will follow their way till Amer too!

Her Eyes. Ya Allah everything about this women could make Jalal lose his mind, not just him even a saint could fall for her. He heaved a sigh and said

" Yes Jodha Begum I would love to go to Amer, and it is quite late in the night you should go to sleep, and I will tell everyone that is coming to start packing tomorrow and we will leave the day after that." he told her and turned back to leave to his hojra which was the closest to Jodha's.

Jodha was to excited to sleep that night but then she remembered all which meant ALL of her packing must be done tomorrow, and she thanked Khana that she had already bought countless outfits and matching jewellery with them the day before and quietly dozed off to sleep.

Jalal layed on his bed after ordering the soldiers and chosen maids to start packing. He in his Mind was thanking Raja saab and Allah for listening to his prayers and was finally, finally sending him and Jodha Begum with his Ministers and chosen family members away from Agra to Amer. Away from Mirza Hakim he thought, away from him and close to himself he thought with a smirk. And their he will somehow ask Maharani Mainavati to ask Jodha to stay in the same chamber as him, because then a Chamber will be saved. But then he thought that Amer's Palace is huge they never and by that he meant NEVER ran out of guest chambers. he will have to think of an excuse that made him and Jodha stay in the same chamber as him. He slept that night peacefully with a killer smirk on his face.

Jodha woke up early next mourning and got dressed and did her h eye and lip make-up since she knew it was going to be a long day. She quickly did her aarti and saw Jalal giving orders on where to place his luggage. Jodha laughed and went to her chamber to start packing. She ordered all her bandhis which took care of her needs, 55 in total just for that part and ordered them to pack all of her new and grand outfits with all the Jewellery she had bought. She also added on that take her grandest robes for nightwear and leave 3 of her new chania cholis behind since she will need them on the way. She made them leave her murti here since she has her own gold and diamond murti back in Amer.

Hamida Banu entered her chamber with all due respect when the bandhis went with all of her luggage and Jodha's kaksh was just like it was before.

" Parnam, Ammijaan." Jodha greeted her with all due respect.

"Adab Jodha Begum, I am also going to Amer and Gulbadan, Salima aur Rahim are also coming." Hamida happily told her.

" That is great news Ammijaan. And you came at the exact right time can you please tell me which of these outfits I should waer tommorow." Jodha replied.

" Beshak." Hamida said and started looking at all the expensive outfits laid with their respective jewellery.

After looking at all of them carefully and discussing them with Hamida they both decided to go with the blue Chania choli she bought with Jalal earlier and Hamida told her that it's diamond necklace's and tikka's shine was perfect for her. Jodha thanked her and ordered Moti to put it neatly since she was going to wear it tomorrow. Then the mother and daughter duo went to Hamida's chamber to choose her outfits for the wedding.

*THE NEXT DAY*

Jalal walked down with his Mighty shamsheer and a Blue Kings coat. He somehow bribed Jodha's maid and asked her what colour Jodha was wearing today and the greedy maid immediately told him. Blue. Jodha then walked down wearing what she and Hamida had decided yesterday with her makeup done effortlessly flawless. Ruqaiyaa was not coming on this trip. Everyone reached their and the last one to come was Rahim. All of Jalal's ministers were ready same with Jodha, Salima, Ammijaan and Gulbadan begum. The journey started with Jodha giving death glares to Jalal for wearing the same colours as her, again. Jalal kept on smirking at her with the Idea implanted in his head he will make Jodha realize how much he loves her in Amer. He will, no matter what.

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Lovely updates jazz ...i read both in one go ...hehehe ...i loved the way jealousy is bringing out Jalal's actual feelings for his favorite begum ...the designer dresses ...hair style ...etc etc ...were truly fantabulous ...waiting to read" akdha in Amer" part .

Continue soon 😊

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

loved the update buddy
Jalal trying to grab every chance of being close to Jodha
Hehe
bribed the maid 🤣
that was fun
update asap buddy

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misty

@misty22

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Outstanding update sweety . . . . Too cute nd sweet lk u. . I mean ds sparjy jealousy nd love is soo bfull. . M soo happy atleast sm1 chose ds track nd md it a lively one...hats off. . .

Joja are soo cute . . Dey behave lk kids . . Naughty heads, especially jalal. . . I know he hs found fr a plan to mk jo stay in hs room. . I think he is more happy dn jo to go to amer😆😃. . . . Nd haww he bribed d maid. . Cuter indeed. . . Nd here dey are. . The king queen in matchin outfit . . . Soo romantic . . Nd ruku nt going . . Thank god. . M soo happy . . . Bg music wS awsmm. . My fav. .

Bt soo lil chappy . . Plshhh update a long ine nxt time . Thnku fr pm nd update asap . . . 👏