Akdha FF- Jealousy (COMPLEATED) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww. . Well u deserve all d appreciation . . . Nd u jst md me ur fan wd ds awsmm super cute chappy . . . Really amazing . . Flawless . . . Bt it was really lil. . Sweety plshhh . . Gv biig update . . . Plshhh . . . Nd yup cnt wait for part 3..update soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update jazzy
Very well written
...update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i want part 3..
plz plz continue it further..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls update next part soon. And it should be a big one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg my whole update got deleted\
so i rewrote it plz check it out
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Pls update next part soon. And it should be a big one

yea i am going to try to make it a big one but please give me suggestions
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks! I will try to make it big as possible but plz give suggestions on what you want next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello! I changed my mind and am updating right now! It will be medium sized since I have no idea how my whole work got deleted!
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But wait and now Ruqaiyaa thought when the time comes she will use this plan. When the time comes she thought when the time comes.

One question burned in Jodhas head why did Shenshah agree to come with her to the market? Doesn't he hate shopping?

" Sipahi, put the palki down."she ordered to her soldiar.

And as if on cue her beloved Shenshah also got down from his horse. Jodha then was about to walk into the bazaars most expensive and her favourite shop until Jalals cool voice stopped her from advancing foreward.

"Jodha Begum, we are here as a couple thus you will walk with me and be MY escort." he told her as Jodha moved back a step to walk with him.

As they started to walk into the shop their awam stared at the couple in awe. May god not curse this couple the awam was thinking. Jodha Begum is the one they thought, the one that will change their Shenshah into a human who felt feelings and love to.

The shopkeeper was suprised to see the Badshah out with what the awam liked to call his most beautiful and khaas begum. The shopkeeper was aware that his clothing was specially made like his begums but sometimes they had to come to the bazaar to check stuff out and it was his Badshahs first time so he showed them the best he had.

Jodha was shown the best of the best Lehngas which she all liked and paid for them and had the soldiars take them back to the palace. But for the upcoming Jashan there were 3 beautiful Chania Cholis in front of her, so even not wanting to Jodha had to take Shenshahs advice again and ask him which on he liked best.

" Jodha Begum, why don't you buy all 3 they all suit you." Jalal told her like it was no big deal.

" Nahi Shenshah, I don't want to do all my shopping in this shop. And by the way out of these 3 dresses I want to wear one to the Jashan." Jodha replied like a matter of fact.

" And I was thinking the heavy blue one since the Jashan is for Mirza Hakims birthday and blue is his favourite colour, but the green one with the diamond work is also very nice." Jodha added

Mirza. That name again. Set Jalal on fire since the blue one was Mirzas "choice" he wold not let Jodha buy that one at any cost.

" Jodha Begum, I was thinking the green one since it suits you and it would look better on you." Jalal suggested with urge that she would not choose the blue one.

" Yeah Shenshah, I agree I already have a lot of emerland embroideries but only about 9 or 10 diamond embroidered heavy green lehngas." Jodha then agreed.

" But Jodha begum didn't you like the blue one better." Jalal then teased her with his signiture smirk.

" Jee nahi Shenshah, I bought a new diamond set which matches perfectly with this." she said while handing the chania choli to a maid who was taking it back to the palace.

" Okay Jodha Begum if you say it then I believe it." he said teasing her again.

But inside Jalal was whimpering with pain. He thought she bought it since green was his favourite colour. And there Jodha was dying inside and was thinking why shenshah dont you get it that I brought since it is your favourite colour. But deeply in love with each other but Jodha was completely oblivious about all those little hints that Jalal dropped on her about how much he loved her.

Meanwhile Hamida and Gulbadan begum reached the palace from Salim Babas place with a unknown happiness drawn to their faces. They both descended to Hamidas hojra to talk about it.

" Bhabijaan, Salim Baba is great he told us that his prophecy will come true." Gulbadan happily told Hamida as they drank sharbat and sat on the luxurious couches.

" Sahi kaha, Gulbadan begum I am very happy that slowly they are relizing their love for each other." Hamida happily sighed

Before Jalal and Jodha Marraige
( BTW Salim baba is talking in all of these)

The one who will make Jalal a human again and return his lost and broken heart will be a rajvanshi shezadi, Marium Makani. She will be the rarest of the rarest beauty a true kohinoor of the world. Her name will be carved into Jalals heart and his heart will only beat for her. Everyone who sees her will be mesmerized by her, as your Jalal. But her father won't easily agree since of his high prestige and ego, Jalal will wage a war a huge war between him and the whole Rajputana. He will turn the whole world upside down just to get her. He will love her since he laid eyes on her but she she will hate him to the core of her heart. But as their relationship growes in the first few months of their marriage she will slowly but soon fall in love with him. But remember one thing Mariam Makani, she will be a Hindu.

Now when they went to visit

Congratulations Marium Makani, She is slowly turning Jalal into a human his acts of removing jizia and slavery are proofs. She will give the Mughals their waris soon. Their love story will be remembered till the end of time.Your going to become a grandmother soon in the next few months be ready to welcome your shezada into the world.

" Today I am very happy Gulbadan Begum, Jodha and Jalal are slowly falling in love, may allah bless this day." Hamida happily chattered.

" I am to Bhabijaan, but I wonder when will Ruqaiyaa begum understand that she is just a friend to Jalal, not a lover." Gulbadan Begum shared her thought.
Hamida Nodded her head but they both knew time would tell.


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And today when I saw how many views it got I got 1034 in 2 days thank you so much guys!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Though the chapter was small it is amazing. Love to see a jealous jalal. Pls keep writing such amazing chapter on our mesmerising couple our akdha😳
Edited by divyadaya13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely update
it doesnt look that u r not writing it first timr
thanks for update

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