Akdha FF- Jealousy (COMPLEATED)

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Hermione Granger

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

awsome dear.. plz continue it further..

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Jasjeet Gill

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thanks! Never thought that in 1 day I will get so many likes and relies most likely updating today or tomorrow!

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Avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: jazzxxqueen
Thanks! Never thought that in 1 day I will get so many likes and relies most likely updating today or tomorrow!

Will be waiting 😉

Updaye soon 😳

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

hello! Never did I ever think of having this many likes and replies in 1 day! Thank you guys so much!

P.S next time u guys can also give suggestions on what to do next.

Ruqaiyaa sat on her luxurious cushion while biting an apple and her bhaandi Hoshiyaar massaging her legs. Ruqaiyaa was thinking , thinking very hard on what could have hurt Jalal to the extent that he cut himself and was looking out that window. Wait that window she thought, that window that showed the view of angoori bagh, maybe a scene from there has something to do with it. Maybe she thought maybe. With a wave of her wrist and takhliya Ruqaiyaa put on her dupatta set her make-up and walked out to Angoori Bagh.

Meanwhile in Jodha's hojra, Jodha was talking to Salima begum and discussing the current events of fashion in the Agra Bazaar and how they should go to should go shopping before it runs out of stock.

" Jodha begum, I think that you could go with Shenshah to the Bazaar and maybe he could help you pick out some new dresses." Salima suggested to Jodha with a small smile

" But Salima Begum, can't you come with me why Shenshah." Jodha whined to Salima like a child.

" Because I have Rahim to teach and other works to do, and if you are wondering you can go with Ammijaan. That is also impossible because she has gone to Salima Babas with phupi jaan (Gulbadan Begum)." Salima then told her back in fits of laugher this time.

" Then i will not go Salima Begum." Jodha replied with a pout.

" Jodha Begum, you have my swear if you go then i consider it that you consider me as a older sister if not then so be it." Salima said with fake attitude this time.

" Ok Salima Begum you win, I will go with Shenshah if he agrees." she said to Salima begum.

Salima then smiled a victorious smile and told Jodha.

"Before I came to meet you I already told a bhandhi to deliver this message to Shenshah on my behalf, and he immediately agreed." Salima Begum told her in chuckles.

Jodha then pouted and said you proved to be very smart. Which sent Salima begum into even more fits of laughter while she exited the chamber.

As Salima went out Jalal came in with an announcement. Jodha told him to be seated .

" Salima begum told me that you wanted to go to Agra's Bazaar." Jalal asked her

" Yes, that is true and you can go get your horse ready and I will be down there shortly." she replied.

" No Jodha Begum, I will be your escort and you will walk down with me this instant." Jalal replied trying not to get mesmerized in her curves and flawless skin.

Jodha turned around and saw Jalals hand in front of her. She hesitantly grabbed it and started to walk with him. While they were walking down thoughts pained Jalal. Why Jodha, why don't you hesitate to talk to Mirza or even Rajkumar Shaurya at Amer, but here you hesitate to talk to your own shauher. How don't you know how much this is killing me on the inside Jodha begum.

While Jodha sat in her palki and Jalal on his horse they were then leaving the palace with 50 soldiers with them in the 30 minute journey to the Agra Bazaar.

Angoori Bagh

" Tell me Bhaandi, who came her in the past hour." Ruqaiyaa pleaded the bhandi while slapping her receiving a huge blood stream to flow from her lips.

" Hu-Huzoor, Jo-Jodha begum aur Mirza Hakim came here in th-." the bhaandi started to tell her before she got cut of by ruqaiyaa throwing her out of her grip and storming on to what looked like her hojra.

Ruqaiyaa was super mad today so mad that her whole Hojra was a mess before she calmed down and sat in her now cleaned Hojra thinking of the previous incidents of the day. Jalal is in love with Jodha Begum, that thought swirled in her head. And he is getting jealous she added to her thought. She then got up with a perfect idea implanted her head.

Who wants a part 3?

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Anjali

@Annie15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

welcome buddy...🤗

and congrats for your story...🥳

amazing story...😊

loved your concept...❤️

Jalal loves Jodha... 😳and jealous of mirza and Jodha's relationship...😛

hmm...now ruquiyaa...too know that Jalal loves jo...😃

jo and Jalal are going for shopping together...wow..😳

please do give a 3 part...😃

eagerly waiting for next part...👍🏼

resume soon...😉

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Yaar ...this is very short update *pout*

I want long part next time 😉

Now coming to chapter ... so jo agreed to go out with Jalal and hahaha ...now rukkaiya is jealous of Jodha ...

Interesting ...😉 continue soon plsss as i do want part 3

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Me Me... I want part 3!!😆😛

OMG AkDha going shoppingBut I would have loved it more if they had gone as common people... that would have been fun!😉

Anyway, waiting for more.😊

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 8 years ago

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

nice chappy but very very short...so next time hoping to get a bigger one😉😛

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

AWESOME

WELCOME TO JA WORLD OF FICTIONS

UPDATE SOON THE THIRD PART DEAR

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: jazzxxqueen
Thanks! Never thought that in 1 day I will get so many likes and relies most likely updating today or tomorrow!

welcome to d beautiful forum of JA hope u will enjoy here...

please update soon and pm me from this time

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