Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed}

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
^^^ in which language are u talking? 😕😆

Hahaha ...we r talking in South Indian language telugu ,stuti 😆

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: avika444

Ayyoo ..Doctor tarika and Abhijeet love story marchipoyava ?? But then ofcource ...no comparison between Akdha and them kada 😉

yes valla love story vundi but criminals ekkuva love kanna n moreover there is puppy love

n here akdha strong n beautiful love story akka

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

yes valla love story vundi but criminals ekkuva love kanna n moreover there is puppy love
n here akdha strong n beautiful love story akka

Agree 👍🏼

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: avika444

Hahaha ...we r talking in South Indian language telugu ,stuti 😆

I am trying to decode your chat from a long time!🤣

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I am trying to decode your chat from a long time!🤣

😆😆 keep trying dear 😉

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: avika444

Agree 👍🏼

😃

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: avika444

😆😆 keep trying dear 😉

she should try in google akka 😆

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Avika akka lovely banner nd its perfect. ...

Nd update to was wonderful it is increasing misty a lot...

But this jodha to was lost in his charm...

Nd nt to forget joja r nt on good terms. ...

Wow so ruks is murdered...

Waiting for next part. ..

Thansk for pm...

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NONIE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Nice part Avika😃

Loved the conversation between Jalal and Jodha❤️

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Shraddha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

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I am genuinely looking forward to see how you take this story ahead, Avvu... haven't read an AKDHA-based murder mystery and this is my favourite genre (romantic thriller) so trust me when I say I am 'looking forward'!

Firstly, I love the fact that you've made Jodha a lady in her early thirties.. because she would have to be a prodigy to achieve all that she's achieved if she was any younger.. 😛

The very opening scene gave us an idea of the kind of 'scientific yet detached' expertise she possesses in the field of investigation and forensics...

Besides, she is also quite tactful... which can be seen in the way that she deals with her bureaucratic/egoistic superior (something quite common, especially in male-dominated fields like this!)

Moreover, after going through so many love stories, it makes for such a nice change to read about the kind of woman who is busy investigating a dead body, rather than shrieking in fright at the sight of it!😆👏

At the same time, I am so glad that she is normal like us... and wants a break from her work too... three cases IS MUCH! I am so glad she's not like the Mahaan ladies on TV who would never say No to work...

The poor girl lost her father? What about the rest of her family? Waiting to hear about it... 😊

Will she be on par with the hero in this story? 😉 Our ACP Vijayashanthi... I mean ACP Jodha Sharma...

Anyhow, the part of the entire narrative that totally got me on the edge of my seat was this (kinda expected, don't you think???😉)

this one is very important as...the famous business tycoon JALAL MOHAMMAD is involved in this case and yes u have to start ur investigation on this case from now itself

This strong lady was all set to make her way towards the one biggest case which might change her future too 😃.

Which might change her future? Really Avvu... only 'might'? 😉

BTW, please please give us regular updates... because it really helps keep in touch with the characters

Coming back with part 2

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago