Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed} - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 2

So you started off your story by taking out your grudges... I mean by ending Ruqaiyya's life?😆
Jokes apart, the murder mystery is about the death of Jalal's PA then 😊

Her eyes roamed in all directions and fell on "HIM" .
The Jalal Mohammad ,reowned Business man, with many companies and its brances all over the world . Except on news channels and business magazines she never got to meet this man personally , and for the first she was going to meet him face to face .

Oh la la...😉

For a second ,the hardcore police officer found herself smitten by his charms.

^^^ So, there is a subtle hint of attraction already?😉

Alright ... so we know in a gist the entire team (official) that works with Jalal.. (am I right in assuming that many of them are not friendly figures?
Either way... unfortunately our Jalal is the prime accused in this case!
Interesting... our ACP Sahiba is going to be the one rescuing this dashing businessman then... 😉

By the way, I liked the way Jodha was able to systematically arrive at quite a few observant conclusions at the initial sighting of the body itself...


Padding towards the hotel Manager who bowed her head down as soon as she approached him

she rolled her eyes from his head to toe

^^^ Wah... wah... what style... loved it!

He met his hands with her , and was shocked at the same time to see a female officer handling his case.

U r the officer taking up this case ??Doubting her intelligence he quipped .

^^ Grrr! No wonder Jodha was miffed... 😉 he is a big bad boy, isn't he? Especially from these lines
the man full of himself.
news year ago about u and Rukkaiya sultan ...the same reason why ur wife divorced u ??
many girls were tagged with me till date but that doesnt mean ,im in realation with all those girls ...
me and my wife had our own reasons for separating...and trust me it has nothing to do with this case

With all ur permission ...can i proceed with the case now ,Sir ?? stressing on the word "sir" she smirked sarcastically while he twitched his lips .

Seethi maar!😆

a Man in his late twenties entered. He looked simple like a boy next door.
Dressed in her formal crisp offwhite shirt and black pencil skirt with her hair tied high in pony tail , a lady in mid twenties entered weeping on her loss .
Quite a different description of Shareefuddin and Salima... hee hee..So, Shareefuddin loved Ruqaiyya 🤔 and Salima misses her...

They look/sound suspicious to me, though 🤔 or maybe you've portrayed them that way to take our attention away from the real murderer...



Now, waiting... clock is ticking... 😛
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Atifa is the murderer
Lovely update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the answers that Officer Jodha found for the showdown
Jo & Jalal both are in similar situations in their personal lives
Jodha is a wise and smart officer
Ruks cheated on Jalal and his company by selling the quotes😲
Salim, Jalal's ex BIL and rival was the one to deal with her

Sorry no guesses, not a big fan of CID😆
But I am really too interested to wait for knowing the murderer now. Post soon Avika
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the results..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's superb update Avikaa
Now.. one more new comer..
And more complicated..!!
Uff.. how you can did it.. hats off for you re.. 👏
And I'm too confuse to guessing who's the culprit 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks a ton for the pm re.. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chappy dear..
i think adham is d murderer 😉 😆
please update soon nd thanx for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for pm dear😃
Loving this story, wow Jodha finally solved the case cant wait to read next update and see how Jodha figured out who the murderer was!
As for a guess not too sure but I think maybe its Adham!

Update soon👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is one amazing mystery.😊
I think adham might be the murderer as he too might be involved with her and took all the money for herself😉
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I guess the culprit is shariffudin 😃
Just guessing 😆

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