Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed}

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

awesome update
love the banner
pari is looking so different in police attire
maan Singh is so much impresse with jodha
he is so much happy to work with jodha
rukaiya is dead
jodha is little bit distract by jalal but compose herself
jalal don't like female officer handling their case
jalal is married already but divorce
interrogation is superbly written
I like that most
everybody is confusing
who is the murderer
eagerly waiting for next update
plz try to update fast
thanks for pm

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Story getting interested... loved jo strong character...ja businessmen.. continue soon nd do pm

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madhurima

@Hm1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Very nice update ...😊

Really love this concept off story ❤️

Ty for pm

Up soon

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Shraddha

@lashy

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

I'm so tempted to read the comments but i am not since this is a murder mystery...😎

Avvu, I dont' want to skim through the chapter... so, I am going to read it properly towards end of week... ok? 🤗

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: lashy
I'm so tempted to read the comments but i am not since this is a murder mystery...😎
Avvu, I dont' want to skim through the chapter... so, I am going to read it properly towards end of week... ok? 🤗

Sure lashy 🤗

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Truely a marvellous part
The total interrogation was awesome
The suspect yet is not known
Maan Singh working with jodha for this case
It's getting interesting on how was murdered !!
Who is the culprit ??
Jalal adham shariffuddin salima
Who who ??
Update soonish

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Hmmm... So Ruqaiya, who was Jalal's PA, is the victim of this murder case. And the clues hints that Jalal is highly involved in this murder... Interesting. Did she really had any relation with Jalal like Jodha suspected? Does not seem so (Though I was thinking like Jodha till he put his point)... Jalal's alibi seems true. So there is someone who is backstabbing Jalal and he has killed Ruqaiya only along with a trial of implicating Jalal. Hmm very interesting! (Feeling like I'm watching CID 😆)

Sarifuddin loves Ruqaiya but Ruqaiya was after Jalal... Sarifuddin demands himself as a ideal platonic lover, and this much love is very much suspicious.🤓 Adham is a gentleman going by his words, but only for this reason he can be suspected... (Or it's for the infamous name Adham Khan? 😆) Salima's jealousy is not that much strong motive of murder, unless much information reveals...

Hmm there's a lot of suspense hiding behind. And loved the interrogating session... Jodha's strong attitude and direct smart interrogation was wonderful. Liked Jodha in the role of smart and tough police officer, especially her dealing with the head strong businessman Jalal in the very first encounter. Jalal was too very real in his character sketch, liked his don't care attitude that he tried to keep intact in the whole scenario... The plot is very well crafted; and overall a very interesting chapter it was... Eagerly looking forward to next. 😳

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Superb update..dear
Beautiful banner...
who is the murderer ?
eager waiting..
please, update fast...
Thanks for pm..Avika.

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

very interesting update avika..thanks fr pm..mansingh with jodha s gud..jo bit distractd but composes..the interogation part s nice..jo suspects al but somewht beleive salima and jalal..sharif s scard,adham cool..interesting and difrent..nice story..difrent..make it more than 3 shots with some akdha moments and mysterical story.

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Awesome chappy Avika Akka...
I loved all the line n scenes...
How u do it this wonderfull story??
Ja charm effect jo...
Ja is amaze to see that ACP officer is girl...
Jo is hell irritated with ja word..
Jo start interrogating like true officer...
Ja is divorce n whom he divorce??
Sharif love Ruk n Salima is jealous to her younger sis Ruk...
Very different character u described in this story..
Jo didnt find anything suspicious.. N she feel irritating..
Pls update ASAP..