Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed}

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: avika444

Looks like we all like murder mysteries very much...i mean ..look at u ...u r so excited yaar ...now im actually getting nervous ...what if i fail to live up to ur expections Anyways will try my best dear 😳

Yeah I am excited. ⭐️ I know you will cook the mystery as best as possible. It's hard to write a detective story and this is your first trial, and anything for first time use to be the best one.😃

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

mind blowing concept.ACP jodha and a business tycoon jalal what a match?looking ahead for how the story would turned into a love story.because poor internet connection always proxy script opens so like button does not work.thanks for pm and congratulation for new story.

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Dani

@erning_w

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Finally you did it..!!!

Congooo bangaram for your new story 🤗

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

awesome start avika
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm dear
waiting for next part

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

congrats avika di , new story yaaay...

i liked this concept , so jodha is the cop here & jalal would be the business man oops famous business tycoon JALAL MOHAMMAD...sounds interesting .

but what title signifies here MASKED MURDERER ??? am curious...😔

can't wait for next , hope in next part their aamna - samna happens...😆

Edited by cute.manasi - 9 years ago

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

also thanx for pm di...😃

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

avika dii!🤗

amazing!

loved the new genre you tried!

perfect!😃

waiting for the next update!

thanx for the pm!😃

love you!🤗❤️

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: avika444

Lashy 🤗 didnt expect ur comment here yaar ...thanks a lot for dropping in 😃
Hahaha ...even i love murder mysteries ...never tried my hand in this field 😆 lets see how well i can pull it up 😳
Im more glad than u lashy ...one of my fav author is reafing my story ...feeling nervous
☺️ hope i live up to ur expectations 😕

😡 stop saying this... of course, I'll enjoy reading it thoroughly!

Thanks for commenting lashy ...and sorry for not sending pm to u

>>>🥺
runs off to a corner to cry for a while