My First Crush.. Akdha ts.. Part 3 updated on 25/7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome update
jalal was a doctor
jodha was a business woman
waiting for next update
update s

Originally posted by: moni_06

Oh nice chapter

A major part of the ts has been revealed

Loved it

Both are suffering from some agony

Update soon

Originally posted by: avika444

Good start lakshmi bangaram

Business women and doctor

Whats the connection between them ??

Jalal is married and Jo too is ...but there r no signs of their soul mates .

Did they betrayed Jodha and Jalal respectively or is it like ... Jodha and Jalal r already married but due to some reasons they forgot each other ... u know like partial memory loss and all .

Umm very confusing ra ...but its quite interesting

Eager to read next part

Update soon

Thanks fpr pm

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Laksh, will reply you at evening..

Ashish is still at home. He didn't go yesterday.

I saw ur text later so didn't reply via phone.

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

UNRES DI
Awosom title
Love it
Poor girl saw her father in thus conditions
But can't cry
What ??how can any doughter is soul reason of her own father's this type of conditions???
Ooo the girl is business woman
But not share any pain or emotions with any one
Hey???the great jalal khan is doctor???
And miss his wife
Hehe "tintin" love the name
Ooo he have a big menssion but no one stay with him..
Don't tell me di that jodha leave him all alone...
Awww poor soul save all lives and give happiness to other but himself forgot to smile...how sad???
Ooo jalal see Jo
And both started to see each other
The prov of jallu is really out of my mind
Ofcours he have to heared his heart and ask her
Ooo jodha's sindoor give stab in Hus heart
What ???how can it's possible that"jodha can't leave without Rubbel"????
Ooo Jo cry in jalal's hug awosom
Finally she able to flow her pain
And being in love with rubbel
She felt ja is very near to her heart its so nice
Awosom start of TS di

Originally posted by: shyana3

Lovely part
jodha is married
precap is interesting
update soon

Originally posted by: pinu20

Awesome update
Congratulations for new story
Thanks for pmpm 😳

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Oh what a comeback Akka 😆
Got to read ur story after long
I really missed ur updates
Anyway coming to ur new story
It's something different
Jodha a business lady and so lonely
Covered up all her feelings bcoz her husband left her
Well well both are married to their respective ones is something shocking for me
Initially i thought jodha is married to jalal and they have been separated for long
But no
Jalal too a lonely soul 😭
Parents wife everyone left him
The final hug was good
Update soon

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Wc lakshh Di with bang performance...
Awesome chappy lakshu Di..
Jo is lonely n ja also...
Jo is having two different sheds..
Ja is feeling hurt when see jo crying...
Bharmal want to marry to jo...
First time jo hug ja n ja also comforting her..
Precab in interesting...
Pls update your all story Didi..

Originally posted by: eshalli

Superb chapter dear
Thxcc 4r pm 😊