My First Crush.. Akdha ts.. Part 3 updated on 25/7

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PART 1:

Mumbai...

Rainy season..

Lilavathi hospital..

Ambulance came to emergency ward...

Wardboys are already waiting for the patient at the entrance of emergency ward...

A man in mid fifties fighting for his life on the stretcher..

A girl in mid twenties holding her father hands to give support..

She want to cry but she didn't showed any emotion on her face. She was feeling guilty. She is the sole reason for her father condition now. She kept her face straight. The shrewd business woman was trying to compose herself & she did perfectly hiding her tears. Which she is doing for past 15 years. She never showed any emotions on her face. To the world she is a great & cunning business woman. But she is a lost soul. She never shared anything with anyone.

In the same hospital

The famous cardiologist Jalal khan is sitting on his chair in his chamber.. Holding a photo frame close to his heart with closed eyes. Remembering her sweet smile & Green big eyes. His tintin. His life. His wife. His duty is over but still he dont want to go to home. He has big mansion but nobody stay with him. He is alone in the world..His parents died 4 years back in car accident. He saved lot of people lifes. He gave smiles & happiness to lot of people but he forgot to smile. Happiness is no where near to him.

A lone tear escaped from his blue eyes.

Knock knock.

Ward boy disturbed Jalal..

Doctor Doctor..

Jalal opened his eyes. Looks at him with questioning eyes.

Wardboy: Doctor emergency.

Jalal: now?? I can't . Refer to Dr. Surya. He gets up from his place to collect his belongings..

But ward boy disturbed again. Dr. Surya sir is not here. He was on leave Doctor.

He is fighting for his life Doctor. Save him.

Jalal don't have another option he has to attend this case. He don't want to attend any case now he wants to stay alone but he remember his wife Words so he unwillingly went to attend the case.

Bharmal is taken to emergency ward.

Jodha is standing beside him. Holding his hand.

Jalal came to emergency room , saw bharmal & Jodha.

He keep on staring Jodha. Even Jodha looked at him.

They keep on staring to each other eyes for 20 secs.

Nurse disturbed their eye lock. By calling her Doctor.

Jalal came back to senses. & says.. Will u plz go outside.

Jodha without giving any answer she left the place went out & sits on the metal chairs beside the room.

Jalal was facing this situation first time in his life. Nobody leaves the patient that easily. All requests him to stay with the patient but this girl didn't said a single word & left . At this particular stage their close ones have tears in their eyes but this girl not a single tear on her eyes. No emotions on her face. he kept his thoughts aside started his work.. Save patients. That's his motto.

After 30 minutes. Bharmal condition is stable. Jalal feels relaxed came out.

There he saw her again sitting on the chair with closed eyes.

Jalal pov:

Is she in shock. I think yes that's y she didn't showed any emotions. I have to relax her. But when I started bothering about patient relatives . Y I want to give support to her. Hmmm.. Common on Jalal. They are just ur patients. Don't bother about them much. Just give the information about her father & go to home. U want to stay alone. Did u forgot. His inner mind told him. But his heart wants to comfort her. Reason don't know himself.

End of pov.

Jalal went near to her. Wow.. She is beautiful.. Looks so pretty in floral top & jeans. Oh god what happened to me. Why I am looking at her.she is looking tired & Her hair is in complete mess but still look beautiful to me. Yah allah. Y I am thinking about her.. He came Infront of her stares at her face for 2 minutes.

Jodha closed her eyes. She didn't see him.

Jalal did a little scan on her beautiful face & he observed Sindoor in her maang. Oh god.. She is married. what happened to me Y her sindoor is giving stab to my heart. Yah khuda y I am thinking about her. I met her just few minutes back. Y I am feeling suffocated. She is someone else's. He felt restless with his thoughts. He can't stand there for few more minutes. He turns & goes back to his chamber.

Jodha felt someone presence near to her. She opened her eyes & saw Jalal going to his chamber. She wants to ask about her father. But he went to his Chamber.

Jodha stand up from her place go to her father room. Looks through the glass window & he is sleeping peacefully But lot of wires connected to his body. She feels bad for her father.

Jodha pov:

I am sorry dad. I am the reason for ur condition now. But I can't do anything dad. Rubble is my life. My husband. How Can I leave my husband & marry someone. Jodha don't have existence without rubble. I am sorry dad. Plz forgive me dad for opposing ur decision first time.

A lone tear escaped from her eye.

End of pov.

First time she cried from evening. But she composed herself again. She wants to go Jalal chamber to enquire about her dad condition. She asked the nurse for Jalal room.

Unknown to her a pair of blue eyes are watching her from a safe distance. He feels suffocated when she cried. He wants to run to her & engulf her in his embrace. But he didn't do that. He went to his room& sat on chair.

Jalal pov:

Yah Allah.. What happened to me. Y I am so bothered about her. I just met her few minutes back. Even I don't know her name. But y I am feeling that I know her from ages. Her eyes , I know them. But I can't sure & she is married. She is someone's wife.

Knock knock..

End of pov.

Knock on the door disturbed his thoughts. He know who it is. He don't want to talk with her . Reason he don't know himself.

Come in..

Jodha came to Jalal room.

Jalal: plz take ur seat.

Jodha sits Infront of him. Looking staright to his eyes. She came here to ask about her dad but she keep on staring at his face.

Jalal: ur .. But stopped himself. He don't know what relation she has with him.

Jodha understood him & says my father.

Jalal: oh ok. Ur father is doing well. He need to be in observation for 48 hours. Don't worry. He will be fine. What happened to him.?? Y suddenly he got heart attack. Any fightings between u & ur father.

As a doctor he don't need the information regarding their family matters..but his heart wants to know the problem.her problem..

Jodha just nodes to him. & says My sudden outburst made him faint. & he got.. Her voice choked. She can't say more.. She kept silent.

Jalal gets up from his place & kept his hand on her shoulder.

Jodha gets shivered with his touch. But first time in her life she felt she had someone to support her. Don't know y she felt in that way. She got tears in her eyes , she tried to stop them but they betrayed her this time she cried with loud sob. Hugs Jalal waist with her shaking hands & cried.

Jalal didn't understand what he has to do to soothe her. He kept on patting her back to console her.

After 10 minutes she stopped her crying , realized her position & breaks the hug.

Stand up from her chair. Thank u Doctor. Thank u so much . She went out without looking at his face.

Jodha pov:

Oh god. What happened to me. Y I hugged him. Y I am feeling he is close to my heart. I never hugged any man other than rubble but y I hugged him. I am so sorry rubble. Plz forgive me. I am still ur wife. Ur Jodha only. But I felt so comfortable in his hug. Oh kanha.. Save me. Rubble where are u? Come to me. I need u now. Y u left me rubble. I love u rubble. Comeback to ur wife. I miss u. I can't leave without u. Cries very badly covering her face in her palms.

She is a cunning shrewd business woman to all but she is lost soul in her own life.

End of pov.

Jalal is watching her crying but he don't know the reason. He wants to fight against her tears. But he don't have any rights to do that.

Precap:

Jodha: he is married.. Hey kanha...

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Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago

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Don't expect much.. Very boring update.

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PART2:

Jodha went to bharmal room. Sit beside him. Bharmal is sleeping peacefully.

I am sorry dad. I can't marry someone else. I am married already. I love him dad.

She closed her eyes with pain in her heart.

Mid 40 aged nurse came put her hand on Jodha shoulder.

My dear child ur dad will be fine. Don't worry. Dr Jalal is handling him. He is a successful Doctor. I think he has some magic in his hands..

Dr Jalal??? Jodha asked the nurse..

The one who treated ur father. His name.. He is a nice guy. Said the nurse.

Oh ok. Jodha nodded. If u don't mind will u be with my father I want to go out to get some fresh air.plz.

It's my duty child. U better go home.suggested the nurse.

No. Thank u. I will be in my car only. Call me if anything required. Said Jodha..

She went out & sat in her car. Switched on the engine. Turn on the ac. Closed her eyes.

She wants to cry her heart out. She started crying.

Unknown to her a pair of eyes are watching her. Jalal Is watching her. He wants to go to her , hug her, take out all the pain from her. But he just stands near her car looking her crying.

Actually he went to car parking to go home but he saw jodha crying there. He stopped going home. Watching her crying.

After 15 minutes.

Jalal can't able to see her crying more. He went back to his cabin.

Jalal pov:

Y she is crying. Y Allah..What problems she had. Her father is out of danger now. But y she is crying. Y I can't able to see her tears. Y I want soothe her pain. I saw lot of people dieing Infront of me. She is just my patient daughter. I know her just few minutes back. Even I don't know her name. But y her pain is stabbing my heart.

End of pov.

He is thinking & waiting for Jodha. He never waited for anyone. But today he can't able to leave Jodha alone.

Meanwhile in the car..

Jodha stopped crying. Wiped her face. Closed her eyes remembering her love her husband her rubble..

Flashback:

Hyderabad...

20 years back..

Jodha is 10 years old. Came to her chachu house. To stay with them.

Jodha parents are going to London to settle there. Jodha chachu asked his brother to keep Jodha with them. Because they don't have kids.

Jodha loves her chachu & chachi a lot. She calls them as mom & dad.

Jodha chachu joined her in near by school.

She is studying in 4 th standard.

In her class rubble is there.

Rubble..

School chairman son. Never loved by his parents. They always busy with their office work. They don't have time for their only son. They left him with servants. Because of his parents he became rude with all. Never listened to anyone. He sits calmly. Didn't talk with anyone. Cries when he is alone.

In school also everyone scared of him. Even teachers won't say anything to him. He don't have much friends. He is average student but always teachers give him good marks. They won't correct his papers they directly gives the A grade to him, To become good Infront of chairman. Which He don't like it at all. But he didn't say anything.

Jodha joined in the same school.

On very first day she saw rubble. The moment she saw him she liked him a lot. His eyes always attracted her.

She went near him.

Hai I am Jodha. I am in ur class only. Shall we friends.

Hai.. Sorry I don't like to be friend with u. & bye. Said the arrogant rubble. He went away on his bicycle.

Jodha felt bad. She wants to be friend with him but he refused to be friends.

She observed him daily. He never talks with anyone. Always playing alone. She always have a soft corner on him. She got to know about him from her friends.

Even rubble observed Jodha. She has lot of friends. Always smiles. She studies well. She is favorite to all teachers. Every day her chachu drops her in the school. His few friends ally joined in her group. & Rubble didn't liked it all.

She is always smiling. She is loved by everyone. I will make her cry one day. Determined rubble.

One fine day.. After their exams , maths teacher is distributing the papers.

Think exam is for 100 marks.

As usual rubble got 100 out of hundred.

Where as Jodha got 95 marks. She didn't attempted one question. She don't know how to solve that problem.

She wants to clarify with the teacher but soon the bell rang teacher went away..

All started going out of the class.

Rubble is searching something in the bag. He is alone in the class.

Jodha went away but came back to class again. She forgot her box. She came to take it. She saw rubble is searching something in his bag. She smiled him but he didn't smiled back.

Jodha felt bad. She started going out if the class but remember something..

Rubble congratulations.. U got 100 marks. Jodha said with smiling.

Rubble just saw her face without any expression.

Rubble can u plz explain one problem for me. I didn't attempt in the exam. I lost 5 marks. Plz rubble.pleaded Jodha.

Which one. Responded the rubble.

This one. She showed her paper sitting beside him.

This one I don't know how to solve. Said rubble looking at her.

What?? U don't know , then how u answered in the exam.???Questioned Jodha..

Who said I answered that question?? Replied rubble with little angry.

U got 100 marks. How u got??? That means u cheated in the exam. Said Jodha with irritation. U know we shouldn't copy in the exam. That's very bad habbit.

Who the hell are u to say that to me.?? I didn't attempt that question at all. I didn't cheated.

I didn't do copy. He throw his paper on her face & went away from the class room.

Jodha picked his paper & checked it. True he didn't attempt that question. In fact He didn't attempt few questions. Jodha wondered without answering how he got full marks.

She went back to her home but still thinking about him. She decided to ask about this to her teacher tommrow.

Next day morning.

Jodha went to her teacher & asked about rubble marks.

Teacher: Jodha better be in ur limits. Don't interfere in another matters. Do u want me to see as jobless. If I don't give him good marks chairman will dismiss me. He is a chairman son. If I don't give he will tell to his father. So better Shut ur mouth. Go to class now.

Jodha felt hurt.he is chairman son. Then what?? He will get marks without studying. Till yesterday I like him but know i hate him. I just hate him. May be teachers will be scared but I am not. I am Jodha Sharma.. Jodha will never scare. I am first in my previous school. From now onwards I am always second. Cries..

With thinking she went to play ground to play..

Rubble is playing football with his classmates..

Jodha saw him playing.

She went to the court gathers all friends.

She puts the ball near rubble feat. Plz sir kick the ball. U just kick. We will bring the ball again.

Jodha mocked him.

Jodha...shouted rubble..

What Jodha. Shut ur mouth. U cheater. don't u?? Go & tell this also to ur father. May be they will dismiss me from this school. Jodha will not scare. Common friends don't play with him. Stay alone forever. She walk out with all friends.

Rubble felt sad with her words. He got angry on her. He strongly decided to make her cry.

After 2 days Jodha got to know about rubble. He won't say anything to his dad but teachers are at mistakes. She felt bad for scolding him. She tried to say sorry but he didn't talked with her.

That day evening Jodha class teacher told Jodha to keep his files in store room.

She went to keep them in store room.

Rubble saw her going. He Locked the door from outside.

Jodha started banging the door to open. Rubble smiled & went away without opening the door.

After going home he completly forget about Jodha.

In the night..

Rubble is having dinner. Someone knock the door.

Servant went to open the door , talk with them & came back.

Rubble: who is that kaka???

Kaka: oh.. Jodha ka chachu. Jodha didn't came from the school. They are searching for her.

Kaka is saying something but rubble washed his hands ran to his bicycle..

He was praying to God to keep her safe. He ride his bicycle with fast. Reached school in minutes.

Went directly to store room & opened the door.

Jodha came running & hugged him tightly..

She is crying continuesly.. Her face became pale. Hair become messy.

Y u left me alone rubble. I am so scared. She is crying & hugging him.

I am so sorry Jodha. I will never leave u alone. I am really sorry. He to hug her back. Patting her back .

Soon Jodha chachu also came to school. ( Jalal servant informed him)

Jodha run to her chachu & hugs him.

Chachu: thanks rubble. I came to school but I didn't checked in store room. Thank u so much u saved her.

Jodha looks at rubble. & rubble looks at Jodha.

Both didn't say anything.

Chachu took both to his house.

Jodha chachi feed food to both Jodha & rubble.

Chachu: today stay here only . I told to ur kaka. Jodha share ur room.

Jodha : ok dad. She took him to her room.

I am so sorry Jodha. Rubble cried.i only locked the room. Said rubble with guilty.

U?? Y rubble?? Asked Jodha with questioning eyes.

Rubble:Because u always smile. I want to see ur tears. That day u scolded me Infront of all our friends.u have everyone. Ur mom & dad loves u a lot, I don't have none. I am always alone. They always feed u. U know my mom & dad don't have time to spend with me. They always busy with their works. But I promise u I will never make u cry again. I am so sorry. Plz he holds her hands.

Jodha: pakka promise. ???

Rubble: promise Jodha. Will u be my friend!?? Don't leave me.

Jodha: I am sorry to rubble. I got to know about our teachers later. I am sorry. I will be ur friend now onwards. We are best friends. I won't leave u. U don't leave me. I will be with u only. I will be ur friend. I always have time for u. I want to be ur friend from starting onwards but u only said u don't want to be. If u leave me again I will not talk with u. So stay with me. Play with me. U have to follow me. U have to do whatever I said.

Rubble: promise I will never leave u again. He kissed her cheek.

From that day both are bet buddies. Rubble said about his teachers to his father. Chairman scolded them fully. From that day rubble also treated as normal student.

Jodha always helped him in studies. Rubble always made her smile.,they can't able to live without each other. They always argue but in the end both patch up.

He is so possessive towards her. No other boy didn't dared to talk with Jodha.

Jodha loved his attention towards her.

They don't know the meaning of crush at that time but Jodha used to say him u are my crush.

They finished their 4 th standard, came to next class..

One fine day..

Jodha chachi is taking blessings from her chachu.

Jodha: y u are taking blessings from chachu??

Chachi: because he is my husband. We both are married.

Jodha: y u married dad mom??

Chachi: hmmm.. We both love each other.

Jodha: love??? What is love mom??

Chachi: love means.. How I have to tell u.. Yeah.. We can't live without each other. So we are married.

Jodha: if marriage happens then we can't separate ???

Chachi: hmmm yeah. After marriage they can't separate. Inseparable..

Jodha:oh ok. If we don't want to get separate then we have to marry?? Right??

Chachi: hmmm.. Yeah.. Same like that. .

Jodha: how u married dad mom???

Chachi: y Jodha u are eating my brain. Go to school now..

Jodha: plz mom tell me.. Plz..

Chachi: hmmm..ok.. First groom has to tie knot & exchange garlands , see this sindoor in my maang. Groom fills this on bride maang. Sindoor indicates ur dad long life. Every married girl has to put sindoor. It's compulsory.

Jodha: oh ok.. She is thinking..

Chachi: what u are thinking Jodhu. U have lot of time to get married. U are just kid. Stop thinking. Prince will come to marry u. Now go to school, dad is waiting for u. She kisse her forehead.

Jodha : ok mom bye..

After going to school she told her discussion with chachi to rubble.

Rubble: then we will get married. I don't want live without u.

Jodha: actually I am also thinking same. Let's get married.but we have to hide with our parents. Mom said some prince will come to marry me. I don't want any Prince. I want u.

Rubble: yep. Ok. We will hide then. Chalo lets go to temple. I saw in movie hero & herion are doing marriage in temple.

Jodha : ok chalo.

Both goes to temple.

Jodha: how to tie knot rubble??

Rubble: with my gold chain. He showed his chain around his neck.

Jodha: ur chain. What will u tell to aunty?? She will get angry on u.

Rubble: no she won't. I will manage. He took out & gave to Jodha. Tie it

Jodha tried to hook it but she didn't get success. Rubble help me.

Rubble: ok. He hooked his chain around Jodha neck. What next??

Jodha : garlands.. But how??

Rubble: can't we skip,?? How will we get garlands now..

Jodha: no we have to. Mom said we have to exchange. We will do one thing I will make garlands with this flowers.

Rubble: ok.

Jodha made a small garland with flowers. Both exachanged.

Rubble: now what???

Jodha: sindoor..

Rubble: ok put it.

Jodha :oie buddu.. not me. U have to put. I saw dad is filling mom maang.

Rubble: ok. He took some sindoor filled Jodha maang.

Jodha clapped her hands. Now we are married. Nobody can't separate us. She hugged him. My crush became my husband. I won't take bend down to take blessings. I don't like it.

Even I don't like. He kissed her cheek. I like u my wife.

From that day onwards Jodha behaves like real wife. She always brings food for him. He always gave her whatever she asked. Jodha always wear sindoor without anyone notice for her rubble long live.

Like this 2 more years passed.

Both can't separate.

Jodha parents came back to take Jodha with them to London. But Jodha refused to go.

Jodha: I don't want to go husband. Plz tell to my parents. I can't live without u. She hugged him tightly.

Rubble: I already asked wifey. They said just few days. So go with them. But come back. I will wait for u. Promise me u will comeback. I can't live without u. I love u my wife. He too cried.

Both cried.

With heavy heart rubble said good bye to her.

Both thinks that the are departing for few days. Both don't know at that time that is their last meeting.

Jodha parents took her to London along with her chachu & Chachi . She became quite. Didn't mingle with anyone. She asked her father to take back India but her father denied every time.

She stopped asking. She hate her father for separating her from her husband. She always puts sindoor without anyone notice for rubble long life. She never removed rubble chain.

She came back to India after her studies but didn't find rubble in Hyderabad.

She enquired in her old school tooo but rubble father is left his business there went to Mumbai.

She Left her dream becoming Doctor. She always wanted to be Doctor but rubble wanted to be business man. She choose business hope to meet rubble one day. She searched every corner of Mumbai but she didn't succeed..

She tried tried but didn't find him.

Flashback end..

Jodha opened her eyes. Rubble my husband I love u. I miss u. Where are u?? But wait..

Dr Jalal??? Rubble name is also Jalal. Everyone calls him as rubble.. But my rubble this Jalal are same??? Lot of people have Jalal name but but.. Oh my god., is it true. Both same?? His eyes are same like my rubble. May be I didn't recognize him but my heart did. Let me check. I may get any information..

She opened her laptop. Checked in hospital website. But no information. She checked in Facebook hope to get pictures of his childhood. But no she didn't get any success.

What.., he is married. That means he is not my rubble. But I will go to his home & check. I may find any clue.. I feel he is my rubble. I just want to know is he my rubble or not.

She collected his address from hospital. Check for Jalal. He is sleeping in his cabin on the chair only. She Drove to his home.

At 2:00 am..

She knock the door. Feeling very nervous..

A girl in mid twenties opened the door. Wearing nightie. Sindoor in her maang. Mangalasutra around her neck.. Who are u??? She is yawning..

Hmmm.. I am sorry to disturb u at this moment. I came for dr Jalal. My father is in emergency.. Said Jodha.

Oh u came for RUBBLE ??? He is at the hospital only. U can go there. She is saying something but Jodha is not in the condition to listen anything..

Earth under Jodha feet shaking. She felt stab in her Heart. She just stared at her face. & There she caught the picture of that girl & Jalal hanging on the wall..Jalal is hugging her..she kept her head on his shoulder.

Tha..nks... Her words are choking. She run away from there to stop tears.

Ruks didn't understand anything. She went inside & locked the door.

Jodha ran to her car. Tears are betraying her today. She completly broke down.

She cried her heart out. Her tears are mixed with the rain. She cried & cried until last drop of her energy..

She cried for hours on road only.. She waited for him but he is married.

She felt cheated.

Precap:

Jalal: miss Sharma meet my wife. Rukiquia sultan.

Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago

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Sorry for mistakes..

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PART 3:

Jodha crying on the road with her heart out.

Sudden thunderstorm make her shiver.

Rubble hold me tightly. I am scared. She holds jalal chain tightly to her heart.

Jodha always illustrated her husband is around her. Giving advice to her, Playing lullabies when she want sleep, giving shoulder when she want to cry, giving support when she feel down.. jodha always illustrated her rubble with every action she doing.

She cried again remembering his wife.

She remember her fighting with her father in the evening.

Flashback:

Bhar: jodha I am asking from a very long time. I want u to marry my friend son. Plz jodha.

Jodha: dad plz I don't want to marry any one. Let me stay like this only dad..

Not this time jodha. I am listening same answer from past 5 years. I can't wait anymore. I called my friend son Today. He will meet u. Get ready.

I don't like u wait for ur friend. Because of him only u became like this. Stone hearted girl. U don't have any feelings on any one. That stupid friend.. Said the angry father.

Dad.. that's enough. Don't u dare to say anything about my husband. Shouted back jodha.

Husband??? Asked the shocked father.

Yes.. he is my husband.

She removed her hair from her partition.sindoor in her maang.

Bhar just looking at her sindoor..

We are married. Not now. We are married when we really don't know the meaning of love. But I know I loved him that day also. I will wait for him till my last breath. He will come. Said jodha while trying to stop the tears..& She succeeded. She hide her tears.

Did he remembered u??? What if he married to another girl?? Questioned the father.

No way. He won't forget his wife. His tintin. I am sure he is waiting for me. I am the one who left him because of u people. I hate u dad. For separating me & my rubble..

Jodha said with hate towards her father. But she didn't cried.

Jodhaaa...

Bhar fainted holding his heart.

Jodha admitted him in the hospital.

End of flashback.

Rubble y u did this to me. I was so confident that u will wait for me but u didn't..

She cried again. She cried her 20 years of pain..

After an hour.

She went to car. Closed her eyes..

I am thinking about my side only. My rubble will definitely waited for me. But I am the one who came late very late. He deserves happiness. May be he loved her. We married at the age of 10. we don't know the meaning of marriage when we married. May be he got his love. & he married to that girl.

I won't tell I am his tintin. I will move to London again. I will just go away from his life. I love u so much my husband that's y I am going again from ur life. I want ur happiness. I can't destroy ur happiness by telling I am ur jodha. Ur happiness means a lot to me. I can guess at what circumstances u married. She composed herself & Drive back to hospital.

At the parking..

But how can I face him now. Can I control?? I have to for my rubble happiness. I have to. Hey kanha plz give me strength to face jalal. Plz.. She prayed in her heart. She determined to go away from her rubble.

She closed her eyes. She don't want cry but they are betraying her today..

After few minutes she went inside..

Listened the conversation between jalal & nurse.

U don't know means what miss maria ( nurse). Jalal is shouting at her first time in his career. He never scolded his staff.

Doctor. I am sorry.. she Said she will wait outside only. But don't know where she went? But y u are taking tension about her. Her father is completely fine doctor. Said the confusing nurse.

Maria is in confusion. Is doctor jalal concern about patient or his daughter?? he never worried about patient relatives. But y now?? He never scolded her. He always respected her because of her age but today he is behaving strangely.

How did u allow her to go out. She is not in good situation. Can't u see her pain?? What if something happens to her.. yeah Allah.. worried jalal..

keep her safe Allah.. jalal prayed in his heart.

Jodha tears started to shed again. She wants to go away from him but there he is worrying about her whereabouts. He understood my pain without telling anything.

Plz kanha give me strength to face this..Plz..

Jodha wiped her tears. Composed herself..

Excuse me doctor jalal. What's going on.

She just stands at the entrance.

Jalal ran to hug her but stopped near to her.

Where u went?? I was so worried for u. I checked in parking area too. U are not there. U should inform me before going. Jalal almost burst into tears but composed.

I am fine doctor. Don't worry about me. How is my father. Asked jodha moving far from jalal without looking at his face.

He is fine. But how about u?? He moved near to jodha again..

Me fine.. thank u.answered jodha moving again far from him..

U r...jalal want to ask his name but before that bharmal opened his eyes.

Miss maria: doctor the patient is gaining consciousness.

Oh ok. Jalal unwillingly moved near Bhar.

Jalal examined bhar but staring at jodha.

Jodha completely avoided him. Neither she looked at him nor she allowed him to see her.

After few minutes.

Ur father is fine miss.. jalal stopped to know her name.

I am miss Sharma.. & thank u doctor. She moved near to Bhar.

How are u feeling dad. Asked jodha holding her father hand.

I am fine. I am sorry my child..Said Bhar with little guilty.

No dad. Don't Say sorry. I will marry ur friend son. Said jodha.

But ur husband ur..

Jodha stopped her father before saying rubble name she hugged her father tightly & whispered plz dad don't talk anything now. Plz dad. Don't ask me. I will tell u all later. Plz..

Bhar nodded his head. Hug her back..

Jalal is staring at them. He was shocked with jodha statement. He felt stab in his heart. He felt someone are taking out his life.

Jodha breaks the hug.

Calls jalal...

Doctor doctor..

Yeah yeah..

How is my father now. When can we go home?? Asked jodha.

He is fine miss Sharma..

I will take ur leave. Saying that jalal exited from there feeling disappointed.

He directly goes to his car to go home.

Jodha watched him going & she burst into crying looking at jalal..

Jalal directly went to his home.

Jalal pov:

Y I am felling hurt. He was getting angry on jodha because she don't want say her name too. She is marrying someone. He felt cheated. Unknown to him he started crying.

End of pov.

Ruks: rubble u are back. She hugged him.

Ha.. jalal replied. He hug her back & went to his room.

Ruks followed him.. are u ok?? Anything wrong??

I want to sleep ruks. Plz leave me alone for sometime. Jalal said while sleeping on the bed.

Hmmm..ok.. u take rest. I am going to hospital. I have operation today. I will come back by evening.. I cooked food. Have it. Plz jalal change ur dress & sleep.. Bye..

She go near to door & turns to him again Forgot to tell u Mirza landed safely.

Ok. Cool. I will have. U Take care. Don't stress. Don't run here & there. U are pregnant remember it. Bye.

Ok sir..I know. I will take care. She kissed his forehead , says love u rubble. & went to hospital..

Jalal trying to catch some sleep to give peace to his heart & mind. But sleep is far away from him. He is constantly thinking about jodha only. He freshen up Sat down to eat something but he didn't feel to eat anything. He just left the food & go back to his room..

There His mobile is continuously ringing..

Oh god..3 missed calls from ruks. Is she fine??

He hurriedly calls back to ruks.

Ruks lift the phone in just one ring.

Ruks how are u ?? Are u fine?? Anything happened??? Asked the worried jalal.

Oh oh..cool I am fine. Give me a break yaar.. ruks smiled at his concern..

U are smiling. I was so worried. Ok.. tell me y u called me?? Asked jalal feeling irritated now.

Actually today morning I forgot to tell u something. Yesterday night one girl came to our house. She said her father had a stroke. She came for u. I said u are in hospital only. I am asking about her father condition but she didn't replied me. She just stared at me. She is not on good condition. She went away without giving any answers to my questions. Said ruks.

So?? Asked jalal not understanding anything..

Actually when I came to hospital I saw that girl & asked her how is father. She didn't replied me. She only said take Care & went away. She didn't allow me to talk with her. But I got to know from miss maria that she admitted her father in the evening only. & u treated him in the night only. But y she came to our house at midnight?? Asking for u...&

She is crying rubble. Very badly she is crying..

Ruks said with little sad.

What?? Miss Sharma came to home?? But y ?? Jalal hold his head for not understanding anything.

He just sat on bed thinking about jodha..

Jalal are u there?? Said ruks with panic..

Yeah yeah I am. U don't worry. Take care. Will call u later. Said jalal

Ok. U too take care. Bye.. ruks disconnected the call.

Suddenly jalal got to remember something

Jalal pov:

when I saw her yesterday She had sindoor in her maang but today morning she said to Ok to marriage. That means..

Oh god.

He almost ran to his car.

He didn't cared he was in just tracks & t-shirt.

After reaching hospital he run to Bhar room but to his bad luck jodha is not there

Doctor jalal...?? U here. Enquired miss maria.

Where is miss Sharma?? Jalal is taking deep breath due to running.

Miss Sharma. I don't know Doctor. I think she went outside..

Without listening her completely jalal came out & thinking about jodha..

He went to his cabin & finds jodha there holding his photo.

Jalal felt relieved. He took a deep breath before knocking the door..

Miss Sharma.. U here. What are u doing in my cabin. Questioned jalal while coming near to her.

Jodha was horrified with sudden entry of jalal. But she kept his photo back & she turned her face to another side to wipe tears. Composed herself.

Oh that. I am sorry Doctor. I ..I came I..Actually I for. I came to take the prescription of my father jodha lied.

U came for prescription?? But I already told the medicines to maria. When u will go home I will give the prescription. Still ur father is in observations miss Sharma.

Said jalal casually.

I am sorry Doctor.I... sorry..

She started to go out.

But jalal caught her hand. What's hurry miss Sharma. Come plz sit. I want to talk with u. With that he dragged jodha & make her sit on chair. He sat on table in front of her. He didn't leave her hand.

What doctor. We don't have nothing to talk. Protested jodha to leave her hand.

Jalal left her hand. Really we don't have nothing to talk. Said jalal enjoying her annoyed face.

Yes. Said jodha firmly..who are u to me to talk ?? What's there between us..

Hmmm.. I want to talk about ur father miss Sharma. Not about US.. stressing on the word us.. do u want me to talk about US.. if yes we will talk miss Sharma..

Jodha wants to run away from him. She will expose the truth if he stay with her few more minutes. She is trying hardly to stop calling him as rubble. Hiding her tears & her beautiful green eyes.

But she determined to keep him happy. He will be happy if she goes away.

What's it?? Say it fast. My father needs me.. Asked jodha not looking at him.

Where as jalal is trying to see her face.

Dont worry. Maria is there to take care of ur father.

He passed for few seconds & asked again..

Y u accepted ur marriage with ur father friend son miss Sharma. Questioned jalal.

It's non of ur business doctor. Jodha Replied harshly..

I want to know miss Sharma. As a doctor I need to know. Said jalal with little smirk.

I love my father. I can do anything for my Dad. Fine now. Can I go. Jodha demands.

Oh really. U know even I love my wife a lot. She is very beautiful. I love her sooo Much.. Said jalal with smiling..

Yeah I know..Said jodha. Controlling her tears.

U know .. how miss Sharma?? Jalal Asked with confusion..

( He is just acting)

I .. know.. I.. jodha stammered her words. She don't know what answer she has to give him.

It's strange miss Sharma. How do u know about my wife? But wait let me introduce my wife. Said jalal.

Jalal understood clearly now that jodha thought that ruks is his wife.

I don't want to meet anyone said jodha & she got up to go but jalal caught her hand.

Wait miss Sharma.. don't u want to meet my lovely dear wife.

He called to ruks to come to his cabin.

Jodha don't have another option she had to face this. But she determined to control her emotions.

Meanwhile ruks came to jalal cabin.

Rubble u called me.?? Ruks entered with questioning eyes. Saw at jodha.

She is about to say something but jalal stopped her.

Come baby..my darling my love my wife. He went near ruks hugged her kissed her on the forehead. I miss u baby.

Ruks was in confusion. Y jalal is behaving like this. She is just staring at jalal & questioning what's all this mess with eyes??

Jalal whispered to ruks just act ruks. Plz. She is tintin.

Ruks understood everything.

She hugged back.

Jodha is controlling her tears.

It's its so nice to.. nice to ...meet u..Mrs Khan.. She didn't dared to look at ruks.

Miss Sharma even my wife is pregnant. Won't u congratulate us??

Said jalal observing jodha face.

He felt sting in his heart with jodha tears.

Con..Con..gra..ts.. I will take leave. She almost run to door to exit but jalal no where to leave her.

Wait miss Sharma. He again holds her hand tightly.

He turns to ruks & asks.. ruks she is the one came to our home yesterday night??

Ruks nods her head.

Jalal signalled ruks to go. Ruks went out.

Y u went to my home miss Sharma?? U know I am in my cabin only. But y u went to my home?

Jodha didn't gave any reply. She is just holding back herself.

Y u went miss Sharma?? Jalal asked with little high tone.

I.. I.. went...I.. I am.. so..sorry.. jodha stammered with her words.

Actually miss Sharma..I want to say something. Just now my wife came na she is not my first wife. I am already married. But she left me. I waited for her but what to do she didn't come back so I married to my love. She is my life. My wife.

Jalal said with little angry.

Jodha don't know what answer she had to give. She just stands there.

Now tell me miss Sharma what i had to do with my first wife.

Questioned jalal.

This time Jodha gave answer

U have to forget her. She is a cheater. She left u. Didn't came back. So forget her.

Yep. I have to. She is a cheater. Do u want to see her ..

Jalal didn't wait for her answer he dragged her near to cupboard.

He opened cupboard took one pic..kept photo in jodha hands. She is my first wife. I have to leave her. Right miss Sharma. Jalal questioned back jodha.

Jodha just staring at the photo. It's their photo. They took picture on their first Diwali after marriage. Both hugging each other.

Miss Sharma..where u went?? Should I leave her.

Ye..yes.. U.. U.. le..leave her..

Jodha replied with heavy heart.

Yes. I have to leave her. She cheated me.I am still alive & She is going to marry her father's choice.

Jodha looked at him with shocking..

Yes miss Sharma. She left me long back. But still I love her. Only her. I searched everywhere but I can't find her. Still I am waiting but she is ready to Marry someone. She is again ready to leave me.

Y me?? Y again & again. This time he shouted Y u are leaving me again tintin?? Y tintin??

oh Sorry u are miss Sharma na.. so tell me y miss Sharma?? Y again??? Jalal Said with sarcasm.

Jodha can't take it anymore she hugged jalal tightly. She let her tears fall down.

I am sorry rubble. I am sorry. I searched for u everywhere. But I can't able to find u anywhere. I came to Mumbai only to search u. I went to ur home to know whether u are my rubble or not. I am still ur wife. I love u jalal. I love u sooo much. U are my life. My everything.but I don't want to be the disturbance between u & ur wife. I want to go away from ur life. I am sorry I am sorry.. She break thr hug & tried to go away from him..

Jalal grabs her hand & jodha fell on jalal chest with thud sound. He hugged her tightly.

This is wrong jalal. Leave me. Plz leave me. Jodha pleaded but she didn't tried to move away from his hug.

She is not my wife. U ARE MY ONLY WIFE..MY LOVE..I am not married to anyone. U are still my WIFE..

Jalal stressed on the word wife..

Really????

with a little hope in jodha heart.

Yeah.. She is my best friend mirza wife. Jalal smiled.

But but. She is in?? Jodha looked at him with confusion..

Mirza went to USA. He had conference. Ruks is pregnant so he left her in my home. We are friends from college. U assumed her as my wife right??

Jodha just nodes.

My poor wife. How can I marry someone if I have beautiful wife. But I have to give punishment to u.

Jalal tap on her forehead..

Yes. I will accept any punishment. I came late..

Not just late. Very late. I am almost reached to 30+. We are married long back. Not even a small kiss.. if u want to marry ur father friend son then plz go & marry. I will marry a beautiful doctor. Not this arrogant business girl. Jalal breaks the hug.

Bye jodha..sorry sorry miss Sharma. Attitude girl.U didn't say ur name tooo..I hate u. I don't want u.

Jodha kneel down on knees. Holds her ears. I am sorry. I came late very late. I don't like any boy holds me. I love only my husband. When I got to know the meaning of love I started loving u rubble. U are the only one in my life.I love u soo much hubby. Will u accept me as ur wife again jalal sorry Doctor jalal Plz..

Jalal got tears with jodha confession. He kneel down & hug her. I love u too. & u are the only girl in my life jodha. I will accept u as my wife but on one condition.

Jodha breaks the hug & looks at him.with what's the condition.?

Will u marry me again miss jodha Sharma..??

Yes I will marry u. But Not miss jodha Sharma. I am always Mrs jodha jalal. My company name is j&j..jalal & jodha rubble..

Tintin u joined business for me??? Jalal said with little proud on her wife.

U are working as doctor for me na hubby so i... Jodha said with smiling.

Can I kiss u my wifey??? Jalal asked.

I am always urs hubby. Not now long back. I am waiting for this kiss from past 29 years. I can't wait more.

She kissed him on his lips.

Both enjoying their first kiss..

I love u tintin.

Love u too rubble..

Hug each other.

The end...

If u people want epilogue I will give but little late..

Thank u all..

Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderful start laksh👏👏👏

I could see improvement in your writing. Better narration than Mr and mrs angel and Last mistake..

Also, the storyline is very intriguing.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Ohk so now about the chapter.. very nice chapter dear..

Both jo and jalal are married yet they are single, alone...

Why do I feel that rubble is jalal only and his wife is jo..😆

As they both get attracted towards each other when they are so in love with their partners, so I felt so..

Also, they felt that they know each other, on their very first meeting..

Don't tell me they both had a plastic surgery 🤣🤣🤣

or it's inspired from movie, 'Na tum jano na hum', bina dekhe pyaar aur jab mile to pehchaan nahi paye ek doosre ko..😉😛😆

Anyways, interesting chapter it was.. and very nicely written..⭐️⭐️⭐️

Will be waiting for part 2!!😊

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Res 😆

Hahaha...

I didn't started..

U did res...

Love u baby...🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Hahaha...
I didn't started..
U did res...
Love u baby...🤗

oops..😛

I thought it's a 2 shots and u already res for 3 so I also commented😕 Sorry

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

Btw title is awesome laksh..

Congrats for new story dearie🤗

and I love you more❤️

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

oops..😛
I thought it's a 2 shots and u already res for 3 so I also commented😕 Sorry

That's ok baby..

Plz don't say sorry...

I thought it will fit in 3 parts..

If May become 4 so I thought to put one more res...

Hahha...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

That's ok baby..
Plz don't say sorry...
I thought it will fit in 3 parts..
If May become 4 so I thought to put one more res...
Hahha...

oh ohk.. wait I need to tell u something.. check ur pm..