My First Crush.. Akdha ts.. Part 3 updated on 25/7

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Oh what a comeback Akka 😆
Got to read ur story after long
I really missed ur updates
Anyway coming to ur new story
It's something different
Jodha a business lady and so lonely
Covered up all her feelings bcoz her husband left her
Well well both are married to their respective ones is something shocking for me
Initially i thought jodha is married to jalal and they have been separated for long
But no
Jalal too a lonely soul 😭
Parents wife everyone left him
The final hug was good
Update soon

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wc lakshh Di with bang performance...
Awesome chappy lakshu Di..
Jo is lonely n ja also...
Jo is having two different sheds..
Ja is feeling hurt when see jo crying...
Bharmal want to marry to jo...
First time jo hug ja n ja also comforting her..
Precab in interesting...
Pls update your all story Didi..

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Amazing chapter di n thnxx for pm

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Superb chapter dear
Thxcc 4r pm 😊

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Fabulous update dii
Bharmal is admitted in hospital 😲
jalal is treating him..
Both joja are married to someone else..
Bharmal wants jo leave her hubby and marry someone else but she isn't ready..
Jodha was crying and her tears are bothering jalal..
I Think they both are attracted towards each other..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Congrats for new story akka...

At first after reading d title I thought it must be teenage lovely story... ooh but its nt nd its so sensible story...

Jalal is a Dr nd jodha is a business woman nd its a story where they get 2nd change too love...

Ooh god both have lost there life parents nd r leafing their life in their thoughts but nw this feeling is something new to them nd they don't knw y they r attracted to each other so much. ..

Waiting for next part akka...

Nd thanks for pm...

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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

amazing chapter di

i like this story ..u always come up with different concept

i love the title so much ..its really cute

coming to the chapter

jodha is a bussiness woman who is with her father in the hospital

oh my my jalal is handsome doctor ..oh he is married to green eyes wife

i think its rukaiya ..his parents died in car accident but is his wife died too? he seems really love her i wonder how he will get united with jodha

oh so surya is a doctor too maybe a vilian

poor jodha she cant even shed a tear of pain on her father ..she feels so guilty ..jalal was mumorized by jo who dont😳 he keep thinking about her ..hehe😳 focus on work doctor😃

oh god jodha is married too ..her sindoor stab jalal heart and so as mine

oh so bharmal want jodha to leave her husband and marry another😲 wow that is getting so much interesting😃

so jalal is blue eyes 😳 oh he so much in to jodha ..loved this part di really you well written jalal crush i can see it and feel it

oh this part is my fav ..very touch

jalal felt jodha pain on her father and her guilt for causing his condition as jodha shivered from his touch and she felt relief in his hug ..but she remebereds her love to rubble her husband and cried her love for him

amazing di

i hope u liked my comment

thanks for pm

continue soon

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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

congratultion for ur new story di😃

keep writing more and more ⭐️

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898
RES FOR PART-1😛

Unres soon,,..😊

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
Fabulous chappy Akka
Jo is business woman
Jalal is doctor
Everything is awesome
Their p.o.v r amazing
Loved everything akka
Jalal is married n Jodha too
Rubble married someone else but jo is his wife
Maybe ruks married to jalal but again married to rubble
Update soon Akka
Both are connected to each other by their hearts
Update soon Akka

Thanks kavya...

Glad u liked it..

I will update soon..