My First Crush.. Akdha ts.. Part 3 updated on 25/7 - Page 8

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Fabulous update dii
Bharmal is admitted in hospital 😲
jalal is treating him..
Both joja are married to someone else..
Bharmal wants jo leave her hubby and marry someone else but she isn't ready..
Jodha was crying and her tears are bothering jalal..
I Think they both are attracted towards each other..
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Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Congrats for new story akka...

At first after reading d title I thought it must be teenage lovely story... ooh but its nt nd its so sensible story...

Jalal is a Dr nd jodha is a business woman nd its a story where they get 2nd change too love...

Ooh god both have lost there life parents nd r leafing their life in their thoughts but nw this feeling is something new to them nd they don't knw y they r attracted to each other so much. ..

Waiting for next part akka...

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Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Thanks baby...

Glad u loved it...

Confusing.. Really... Then I think I wrote better this time... Hahahha..

Just kidding..

I will update soon baby...

Originally posted by: lolo91

amazing chapter di

i like this story ..u always come up with different concept

i love the title so much ..its really cute

coming to the chapter

jodha is a bussiness woman who is with her father in the hospital

oh my my jalal is handsome doctor ..oh he is married to green eyes wife

i think its rukaiya ..his parents died in car accident but is his wife died too? he seems really love her i wonder how he will get united with jodha

oh so surya is a doctor too maybe a vilian

poor jodha she cant even shed a tear of pain on her father ..she feels so guilty ..jalal was mumorized by jo who dont😳 he keep thinking about her ..hehe😳 focus on work doctor😃

oh god jodha is married too ..her sindoor stab jalal heart and so as mine

oh so bharmal want jodha to leave her husband and marry another😲 wow that is getting so much interesting😃

so jalal is blue eyes 😳 oh he so much in to jodha ..loved this part di really you well written jalal crush i can see it and feel it

oh this part is my fav ..very touch

jalal felt jodha pain on her father and her guilt for causing his condition as jodha shivered from his touch and she felt relief in his hug ..but she remebereds her love to rubble her husband and cried her love for him

amazing di

i hope u liked my comment

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Originally posted by: avika444

Ur already good re

And pehle batao toh ...mera guess right hai ya wrong 😉

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Thanks dear.

Major part revealed?😲

Hmmm...lets see...

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Wow laksh 👏

You got so many comments for this one 😃 I am so happy because I don't need to give my comments /long comments now 🤣