AkDha OS : That Moment! - Page 8

Originally posted by: lashy

I did

Btw, even before I read your description of his emotions, I'd imagined how RT would have said it 😉 and our imaginations synced to a T!

cute os.loved their marwadi conversation imagining parijat.thanks for pm.

Very cute os sugan...

hey shagun!!!!there i kept ma word...finally am commenting😃😃😃
As usual grt work :)
i loved akdha's indirect confession,,,so cute😳😳😳
Expecting more works from u :) way to go dea😳😳😳 :)

AMAZING OS SHAGUN

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

AMAZING OS SHAGUN

I JUST LOVED EVERY LINE OF YOUR OS

I LOVED THIS SCENE IN SERIAL AFTER BENZ TRACK...AND YOU WRITTEN IT BEAUTIFULLY❤️

I LOVED THE LINE OF JAJAL FOR STARTING CONVO "TOH AAP ISS CHAND KO DEKH RAHI THI HAI NA?"

AND THE WAY JODHA ADMIRING JALAL AND HE NOTICED IT AND THEN HE BLUSHED...WOAH SHAGUN ITS REALLY MIND BLOWING ☺️😳

JALAL'S COMPLIMENT TO JODHA IS SIMPLY ADORABLE😳 ...AFTER THAT THERE SWEET CONVO IS LOVELY

THE WAY BOTH CONFESS THERE FILLING WAS MIND BLOWING

GREAT WORK SHAGUN👍🏼...WELL DONE 👏

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR FOR PM

Res

amazing! their teasing each other,whenever they would get time just lost in each other.And akjane me hi they both confessed their love.Keep it up buddy.(aur tera merwari se dur-dur koi rista nhi h,tab bhi aacha likha ,galtiya thi par fir bhi app ke housle ko salam karte h,jai shagun!ok kuch jyda hi bakwas karli mene par ha!😆

Originally posted by: tanyaraglak

Wow shagu

It was awesome os

Super duper hit

You always bring smile on my face through your stories

The way uhh expressed their feelings was beyond words

The conversation in marwadi was super

I think uhh know marwari

That line was my fav

They all r king 's wives but they could never become their husband's wives

The last lone was like icing on the cake

That night, neither of them could sleep. But then, an unusual and revealing night like this one deserves some pondering over

I just loved it

Your writing style is marvelous

I wish uhh were the scrip writer of ja

Overall it was superb

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb OS dear
loved it
beautifully wriitten ... loved all conversation b/w jajo specially in marwari style ...

thnks for pm