PBD: The Journey Through Utopia - It's 2 years!! Payal's OS Updated! - Page 34

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

By PBDian Payal😃

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>> Each edit is beautiful in its own way. My pick is Number 1 for obvious reasons 😆

Message

I really don't know what should I say, on this special day.. to a special person to make you feel special. Your friends, readers have already said many things and here I am thinking what to say as many times, I already said all, about my love and passion for this story and your writing.

Let me try to write some more..😉

>> More is the most alluring word, you know.. ☺️

About my dearest author

There are many people who love you and adore your writing and I am one of them- an ardent reader of this incredibly awesome story, Pale Blue Dot, an avid fan of your awe-inspiring writing, a fanatic admirer of you and your work(whether it's your wonderful imagination of PBD or any OS or the way you used to reply to our comments), everything is just unique.. your style to do anything is unique and I guess that's what attracted me towards you and your work.

>> Haye haye.. can anyone speak better of me than this??? ☺️ I doubt!! Payalia...

Not only PALE BLUE DOT, but every OS you have written is a masterpiece!!I really adore you as a person.You never let your mind get disturbed in this fancy life(IF), and you know what is important at a time. The reason I am saying this is, your chupke-chupke aana and then dheere se bhag jana..😛😆 ,when you couldn't complete the update..😈 Though many might get angry for this hunar of yours but I like this quality of yours jhanvi di as many times I find myself stuck in this situation when readers asked me to update, I take their request seriously.. No doubt we should.. but sometimes It happened that I stressed myself a lot for this thing when I have other important work to do so that's why I like this thing in you.. I know sometimes you sleep very late for completing the update for us.. , and I love you for that..🤗🤗🤗

>> Oh, glad you understand the stress part and empathize with me dear. Initially I was very particular about the update dates. Then when I began realizing I was stressing myself I had one question.. will the world fall apart if I don't update on time? I had my answers and you had your delays 🤣..

Others... don't kill me for this attitude!! 😉

About Pale Blue Dot

Such a delightful story with the glorious portrayal of Jalal and Jodha. The reason for my addiction to this story is only and only jalal as I, and needless to say many other girls want to have such a guy in their life.

>> The reason for my NOT giving up even after lamba delays is also Jalal.. I think of him, I get back to writing 😉

He is everything, any girl would desire for. He's one of that rare cases who is that foremost boyfriend, on whom his girl would feel proud when she walks with him and would be the best husband, that any girl having him in her life, would feel blessed.

>> Absolutely!!

Jodha, she's beautiful, smart and courageous. It's her story, how she managed to survive and finally met a man of her dreams who filled the void of her life, giving her back her lost family, which she yearned for, somewhere in her heart, though she always pretend in front of others that she's fine.

>> Totally Agree!!

Also, her character teach us some vital lessons of living a life. She's an inspiring character, one of the reasons for that respect I have in my heart, For you.⭐️⭐️⭐️

>> My sole intention was to keep the characters entertaining dear. Being inspired is, I think, reader specific. And I, as a writer, am more than happy if you say you're inspired 🤗

Her father's words to give respect to people of lower class and the way he gave her and us a very good example of, how we can't change something that we have done wrong in impulsiveness.. so we should think before act or hurting someone.

Gautam-I loved this character more than jodha. I loved the way you portrayed his character. He always guides his lil sis. It's his advice that she should go in architecture. Something very important for teenagers who are yet to decide, what they want to become in life.

Also, the way jodha managed to get normal(though not completely) is commendable.

"Pareshaan aatma😛maina and samyu's mother😆, who used to take tension of their daughters future who doesn't know cooking. These all things looks so natural and I really like each character of this story.😃

Jalal's ex.., his friends, jodha's friends, all these things are just PERFECT and it's fun to read about them(Not about Aliya ofcourse😆).

>> Why not Aliya? Jalal and Jodha owe her big time, isn't it? 😆

One more thing, when I read that chapter where jalal went for dinner for the first time, at jo's place. I was surprised because I didn't expect usmaan ji can be a friend of jo's paternal uncle.😛

>> Chalo.. kuch surprise element to tha.. 😆

oops.. Jada bada ho gaya na.. I should stop now..

I just want to say, I love you jhanvi di..🤗..🤗..🤗

>>Love you too re...
🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Here is the OS, which I have written on your jo-jalal. Sorry for taking so long to complete this OS and I want to say one thing, it's not my best. I could write quite better than this but due to time constraints and some issues at home,I couldn't give my 100%. Also, you know my imagination is dull 😭😭so sorry for writing this boring piece.

>>I first read comments and then the OS.. going by everyone and my own feeling.. this piece is no close to DULL IMAGINATION or BORING.. 😆 I take the above lines as - Expect less, get more- kind of statutory warning 😆😉

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