NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#711

Finished hee hee 😃 Woops!

Hey swara darling... how have you been?

Shagun I knew yaar... ainvayi kheenching your leg

Sojji begum🤗

Harshu 🤗 Manu 🤗

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#712

Read it before editing... 😆

Thank God Lashy dii...hope anyone else didn't assume 'other things' 😆

Twinnieee...🤗...You in this thread after so long na?

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: lashy
Finished hee hee 😃 Woops!
Hey swara darling... how have you been?

Shagun I knew yaar... ainvayi kheenching your leg

Sojji begum🤗

Harshu 🤗 Manu 🤗

But u wrote that u updated.. after that I read the chapter.. you were editing that time??😕

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#714

The chapter was...

Khalil... 🤢

Prince... 😲

Ustaad... 😕

Harka Bai... ⭐️

Khan Sahib...😎

AkHeera...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#715

I know Shagun.. Payal... that's just me being silly lol...

I just noticed a few 'editable' points after that.. but it doesn't change the story..

read the last para iagain... if you want.. 😉

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#716

Shaguniya new style of commenting kya 😆

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: lashy
I know Shagun.. Payal... that's just me being silly lol...
I just noticed a few 'editable' points after that.. but it doesn't change the story..
read the last para iagain... if you want..😉

I had found an editable point as well...I guess it would be okay now... 😆

Okay will do! 😃

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: lashy
Shaguniya new style of commenting kya😆

Lol no it's just new style of immediate commenting! 😆

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#719

Awesome chappy Di

Update soon Di

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#720

Di.. I dont think I'll ever be able to tell you HOW MUCH I LOVEDDD this one... bestest so far.. and my absolute favourite... ❤️ ❤️ God... Was it dreamy or WAS IT DREEAAMYYY!!! Loved it x infinity times is the only thing I can say... Love how they always (lol its just second i know but still) end up being alone and the magical intimacy they share even if they are far apart from the other meaning of it as of now... GODDD This is just one of those beautiful magical rare moments of our beloved Akbar Heera and many are on their way ❤️ I am totally abso-freakin-lutely in a different world altogether... relishing the dreamy land... !

I specially loved the fact that though none of them know each other so well and yet giving explanations to each other (which they wouldn't even do to any other known person if they dont feel the need to)... passing gentle sarcastic comments on each other... the whole moment, scene and the conversation flowed with such smoothness...and had gentle breezy magical waves around it... thats how it was for me! Loved the ease with which they talked to each other... Akbar wouldn't care to give explanation to anyone... and yet he did... Heera wouldn't disclose her problems..her fears to anyone just like that (and specially when her guards reported seemingly suspicious stuff about him) and yet, her faith builds up in him since she can feel the honesty behind his words... God! Lol.. ofcourse He must have known he was being followed... poor Heera 😆 ANDD the best part... he found himself failing infront of Heera's perfection... OH EM GEEE ☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️

You dont know how much I loved it... I am going to read it so many more times... ❤️

I'll be back with detailed comments later... I managed to steal 20 mins out of you know what I was doing.. and read the chap lol... and HAD TO let you know how I felt exactly right now... so just typing this in a hurry n posting it...

And and and... I know I should not but I royally ignore the ..as sojji calls him.. khalil the bitch! For me, only Akbar and heera matter... the first half bitches can f**kin rot in hell for all I care.!!!

LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!! The Akbar heera moment made my day! And I think I was right when I decided to control myself and read it next sunday lol... but kya karein control hi nahi honda... coz its sooo difficult now to wait for next one! 😭