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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I know I am too soon for the next chapter, but can't help it.😛

This chapter gives us a clearer view on Akbar khan, his past, his personality and his nature as well. So he is of 25 years?😉😆 From the tender age of 19 the started his business from zero and in 6 years he has become the most successful one... (How he invested first? Will we get detailing later?Hope so...) I am sure he has a intriguing past which is related with the present plot😕... Waiting to read when you will reveal him more.

We get different shades of Akbar's personality with his each moving steps in the stable. First and most interesting, he loves his horses from his core. The hardcore emotionless person with firm gestures and less talks is not actually that stone-heart what the guests of Parnagadh thinking. Then, his professional attitude; he does not care about the formal show-off of respect that his men are giving him or not, all matters to him is their service. His whole presence in the stable had changed the environment in a majestic aura, such a regal personality he has... Loved the whole scenario.

The incident of stable with the ferocious horse was goose-bumping one. Akbar's reaction and instinct about horses is commendable. Liked his interaction with Bahadur... Bahadur is as smart as his master it seems.😃

He gave the dramebaz Gahfoor a second chance, which is very uncommon for him... Somehow it made me feel that he has soft corner for him... or maybe he can connect his past with him... and he, who is famous for his unforgiving nature forgave him after he mentioned about his brother, don't know why I feel Abar too has a painful past related with his brother- like Heera's past with her sister... maybe... Most importantly after that he suddenly asked Ibrahim a personal question on family, requested him to pass time with his wife, which was quite unexpected, as if he had become kinda sentimental...🤔

Though most of my predictions goes in a wrong path still.😆

I just hope Bindiya will not spoil the game again. 😆

Heera along with Daya and Mohan has went off to reveal the mystery of the mysterious man.[Daya reminded me Daya of CID 🤣 ]... Liked reading their part. I love Heera's concern and care for her men. She is a sweetheart along with all her intelligence and smartness.

The ladies are tensed for Bindiya for good reason, and are imagining Akbar as a monster. I liked the part when the maid described Heera the incident of stable with the mixture of her wild imagination, and Heera, I feel, got to know about his sentiments towards horses... This gang of ladies are so charming and cordial with each other. And they leave no chance of gossiping with any kind of interesting information.I loved the chit-chatting regarding Bindiya's fate, and how their direction of discussion turned from Bindiya's insult to Akbar's uniqueness. 😆

Poor Bindiya.😭 She is angry on Akbar and quite sure that none will marry him.😆😆 It would be fun to know Bindiya's expression after she knows about his love story with her Baisa.😃

Dhani got a very unique clue about his character, which left everyone stunned as it is quite strange from a typical businessman... that he has no interest on girls of any kind, and he has no addiction other than his work. He is a rigid man of rigid character, there is no contamination in that rigidity.

I hope I will be able to read the next chapter soon. The story is getting more and more interesting day by day. 😃

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#692

CHAPTER:8

Sorry for being late again Diii😳 I know I am too much lazy😭😆

It was just a wow chapter. Bole to ekdum jhakkas!😎😆

The first part of the chapter was damn interesting. So we have another glimpse of the hard-nosed, arrogant prince again; I quite like him, he is another interesting character after Heera and Akbar. Maybe he is the villein of this story, but a classy villein and I like it. 😎 His regal gestures in the arena, the original foresighted agenda behind his ambition of getting Parnagarh back, then the whole calm interaction with Khalil was very intriguing and perfect... The don't care nature of inhumane Khalil is expressed so perfectly!

I liked the way the prince showed his admiration and respect towards Durga and her courage; it again shows that he is a blue-blood! Khalil's act towards Durga was hardly driven by his lust for woman, more than that it was a crude way to fulfill his male ego... it hurts a lot!

Durga again proved why she was Durga...😳 In that grave situation she did not lose her sense and did every possible thing to save the most important farmaan from the hand of Khalil. Now where is the farmaan!😕 She must have given the clue in the last words of her... 😕😲Khalil being transferred to kabul!😲 Something is going to happen before he goes off I suppose!😲

Harka has planned a strategy to fight against Khalil and get justice by using the influence of powerful people... But will her plan succeed so smoothly? 🤔I am totally overwhelmed by the matured, calm and calculative though process of this 16 years old girl... The beautifully written lines those I loved---

I have no money or army... so I'll use the only armour I can lay my hands on -'people's support' she pledged, her quivering fingers unwittingly snapping out a dead leaf from her herbs as she did so 'Jiji, your Harka Bai will use the voice and influence of the powerful society, to get you justice... to make sure Khalil gets his due... and to ensure Parnagarh is spared!'

The third update given by Gokul and Bajrang is definitely a suspicious one. Hoping for the best, and something interesting to reveal.😃

The description of the haveli was very nice and lively.😳 The Persian rug and the vacant hall without any type of decoration and all, which clearly shows there is no woman in the house... I can see the picture in front of me... And then the comparison between Heera's beautiful study room with Akbar's "mishmash of three chambers in one 'Interesting'" was again a phase which made the picture of the scenario clearer...

Heera's entrance in between Akbar's meeting was wow.😃

The conversation between the duo... wow! Should I say more? I fear I will not be able to justify my feelings with my words.☺️

'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he frowned, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a few areas you're skilled at...'

'Skilled?' she acknowledged his sarcasm with similar doses of scepticism 'But, you're not far behind yourself, Khan Sahib...' her gazes trailed around her own crossed palms 'That was quite some display that night, at the canal... I must say, I haven't seen anyone else possess such good aim!' She waited, eager to hear what he had to say to justify himself

'Was that a compliment? Or another one of your underhanded investigations... like the one you've just sent your guard on, Harka Sahiba?'😆👏

Khan Sahib is kindhearted too😳 Heera is impressed by this side of his deep character. And Akbar too was warm and sympathetic while talking about Durga...

The way Harka reacted to his comment of being on the way was👏 Loved the way you have written it.

The heiress had returned his 'You were in the way' comment with a subtle retort - but in a manner very few could have done so. Her approach was civil enough so the reply wouldn't be counted an insult, and yet her words were clear enough to remind him that she was capable of being blunt too.

Their first interaction tells that they are perfect for each other. ⭐️

Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside. As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again! Loved this para!

Waiting...

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

right...and u won't be getting much time to understand, right??? 😉 with so many other things on ur mind..😉😆

Kya Diksha di, you should have specified na what other things...dekho what all Lashy di imagined...😆

And mujhe darao mat, already teachers are doing that 24*7...😒

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: lashy

Wh...w.. what things 😲

What did you assume? 😲

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

AkDha and their dreamland 😉😆

Originally posted by: harshu27

I think she mite b talking about JA where shagun is always preoccupied with JA and related stuff... 😆

Wow...you two know me so well...🤗

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: lashy

Why... o Why...

Disadvantages of being a grown up
Work, responsibilities, work, children, discipline, work, money, mortgage, family, society, culture, more work etc

Only advantage of being a grown up
No board exams

Why do you take that away from me? 😆

😆😆😆

I don't think that's an advantage...Board exams are enjoyable - that's what Stuti di said...😉😆