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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-



Na re mujhe kuchh nhi pta...🤣

nahi pata to rehne de bhool ja🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Lashy, extraordinary beautiful chapter it was.👏

For writing the first scene, phenomenally.

Reading first scene, there was a moment when I realised that I love this character, khalil as I like this Stranger'

The whole arena scene was written fantastically lashy..⭐️

Take a bow for creating each character so imaginatively. Whether it's a Prince, Durga, Khalil, Stranger, harka, Ustaad, Gokul ,bajrang, Bindiya, kakasa, Gauri... I'm loving them all re but Khalil..⭐️⭐️ I like this man.👏.His temper, his ego, that glare of his on his Ustaad.. I loved all these things..👍🏼

And finally you revealed that farmaan is still safe.. I still believe that poem written by durga, just before her death has the address of farman.. and heera knows or will eventually come to know that where the real farmaan is..


Khalil said, he will sniff out the younger heiress but man.. hold on.. She's hiding behind a Stranger..😆😉

That Stranger who don't have any such weeknesses, which you have been bestowed with..

He's not impulsive.. He knows how and where to use his temper.. Women is not his weakness and the one who will be special to her, will become his strength and not weakness(I'm hoping such a relation between the two, author sahiba😛)

No doubt how frightful Khalil is.. but it was his actions which make people scared of him whereas our' Stranger', Akbar Muhammad don't need to say anything.. His just one look is enough to make the other person, petrified if he/she is wrong or not to meet eyes with him, out of respect and gratitude.

As heera thought she needs permission, Khan sahib's face flashed through my mind and I spent a moment wondering, will he give her permission to plant those leaves in his garden??🤔

And finally she entered his haveli.. 😃She knew that there's no women in that haveli but does she know, that after few months she would change the entire place and make it a best place where they can live in."a sweet home", their home'?!

Teaser part---I thought he would get slightly annoyed with her intrusion in their meeting but I'm surprised he didn't say anything.. Ok, he called her but still I felt that he won't like this.

Wait.. what.., rather he noticed her skills'in mathematics..😲

Khan Sahib...' she wished him for the first time by the name that was actually his.

'Sahiba...' he wished her back, and for the first time by the title that was actually hers.

>>> How majestic it is to hear sahiba' in his sweet yet firm voice.

'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he began the conversation, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a few areas you're skilled at...'

>>> Just 2 meetings and he got to know her skills.. not bad.. my sharp-witted Stranger'☺️

Ohk, so he knew that his men were followed by hers, not surprising though but loved the way he apprised this to her, in his own teda way.😉

and she told him the truth about herself, about durga's death😲, now that's surprising. I didn't expect that.. and he felt empathy.. did I read it right??

Aww my cold hearted stranger do feel the pain of others.. yet stubborn to remain aloof from everyone, from all these emotions.

He did feel her pain, or her words reminded him of someone,special to him, someone from his family??😔

'I had to fix the bridge... and you were in the way... that's all...' Akbar scoffed in response, like she were a mere inconvenience to him then

Ohk!! I was reading the chapter, impassively but reading this, my eyes narrowed followed by letting out a faint laugh. This man is so... fascinating.❤️

'And if you let me know where I can plant them... I'll bear in mind to stick to the boundaries...' a formal pause followed 'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!'

>> woah!! 👍🏼That's why I love heera. She's no less than him.😆

she ended her request calmly, with not a trace of annoyance in her voice - making it difficult for anyone to figure out if there was a 'wry remark' hidden in that request at all.

However, he knew what she was doing.

>>> aww, Love you lashy for creating this enthralling character.🤗

The heiress had returned his 'You were in the way' comment with a subtle retort - but in a manner very few could have done so. Her approach was 'civil' enough so the reply wouldn't be counted an insult, and yet her words were 'clear' enough to remind him that she was capable of being blunt too.

Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside. As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

>>> I was like..

@ bold:

This last para fetched a broad grin on my face.😃😃😃 Loved it so much..⭐️


Sara chapter ek taraf aur ye 2 lines ek taraf..



eagerly waiting for next Sunday, dear..

Love you Sweetheart for this wonderful, lovely chapter.🤗🤗🤗


Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my Chellam I totally loved this update!! 🤣
'I had to fix the bridge... and you were in the way... that's all...' It cracked me like 🤣🤣 and then 'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!' Oh my girl 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 not only Akbar but mere this lady me to falling for you Lashy maata!! 😃 Their conversation was crisp and yet interesting!! and so loved it!!

Ok enough of drooling, coming to real business... The brisk tension between Shehzaade, Ustaad and Khalil was very well written dear. That entire scene was a sitting on the edge of a cliff like reading. So thrilled!! Hmm this Khalil is something 🤬 So it meant Harka has 2 enemies on one mission!!😲 One is monster Khalil and Shehzaade someone else. Chapter by chapter you're adding enemies to a poor soul.. Lashy😡 But ok I'm leaving all to Akbar.😉😆 But Party time is... The farmaan is safe!!

So finally our Harka bai on her mission hope her moto will work.😭 But what I enjoyed is her curiosity when she walked to meet Akbar. Again you're so well portrayed it Chellam. It's so nice to read.😳 But what I like it more is the way both understanding each other! His soft heart behind hard Armour and her vulnerability behind her dignified aristocrat... Wanted to read more.. But it's finished!! 🥺



Edited by Kalgi22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


🤗🤗

Wassup, Harshu di?😃


nothing just doing tp... 😉 wassup with u... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Finished hee hee😃Woops!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey swara darling... how have you been?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Shagun I knew yaar... ainvayi kheenching your leg</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sojji begum🤗</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Harshu🤗Manu🤗</font>


lash...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

hey swara..🤗 after a long time... wassup... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.


nahi pata to rehne de bhool ja🤣



Nhi main yaad rkhungi...🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27


hey swara..🤗 after a long time... wassup... 😃

Harshu di🤗
chatting di😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-



Nhi main yaad rkhungi...🤣

to yaad rakh...🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.


Harshu di🤗
chatting di😆


dats grt swara carry on... 😉 😆

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