NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8 - Page 42

Originally posted by: lashy

Shagun is baisa

Manu is Guru

and Catty is Catty di

now that's it for anymore namkarans, you'll have to come up with your own titles or I'll go

😆

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

And Namsika is GM Guru or Nancy Rani😆

Originally posted by: harshu27

Originally posted by: sho123

yaay first
😳 😃

Originally posted by: sho123

Yaay finally i read the update

first of all sorry for being such late

plz forgive ur lil sis

now about update its fab di

Akbars aroma is really authoritative and dominating

the way u described him as horse lover and his acute knowledge regarding horses really impressive

the way he worried for of ill horse really impressive

His has built himself in five years with gaining respect and wealth and most importantly trust worthy persons as his companions

The way all did salam to him with respect really admirable

and his one of trusty is ibrahim

he has soft corner plus rock hearted too and ya of course Cunning

The way he firstly kicked that stable boy i felt pity for him when he said he has three mouths to feed and begged infont of ibrahim but ibrahim too jerked him as he well knows his masters temper but then seeing his begging akbar finally gave him at chance but not with sympathy I guess as seeing the way he hold him through his collor doesnt shows he did it with pity but with as a challenge and seeing that man's real worth

then Akbar too agreed to ibrahim for going to his home as his wife needs him thats good and ya that again increased my admiration for akbar 😳

and ya in that last part whose that maid and why akbar got angry seeing her

Then scene turns towards heera who at last prepared herb for her wounded solider

All r suspecting akbar heera do have point when on Mohans suspicionregarding akbar about not revealing his identity and not telling he is owner of the haveli she says right how can a stranger in an informal and unfriendly meeting can leak his info

but what i loved most in this scene was the care of master and protector even on rest bed both guards were worried regarding their sahibas safety and there heera worried regarding their safety that's why trying herbs to give them some relief

During all this heera is worried as their real journey is getting delay due to guards poor health

then ladies calling heera for showing akbar and bindiyas live commentary comes

Heera could not able to see the view clearly due to her partial eyesight but she could see Akbar saying something to bindiya but seeing the facial expression and seeing bindiyas condition all could comprehend that its not a pleasing convo and at last bindiya comes back but ya after crying hearing not so pleasing words from akbar

all start asking her what happened what he said or did and make her more tense and discomfortable but our heera tackles the situation by making all silent and giving time to bindiya for relaxing and comfortable

finally bindiya narrates whole convo in which she reveals she just went their for an apology and for clarification of not being the sahiba but his reply shocks all of them as he reveals he already knew that bindiya was not the sahiba and what made them annoyed was they called all made ilmannered now that's vwry rude of akbar and shows his attitude he should not say this

then All accusing akbar with one major opinion on being his so egoistic and rude as he is a mughul and also says him incapable of marrying any girl as he is not worth it but alls opinion receive a blow when Dhani reveals her info regarding him according to which its akbar who rejected uncountable proposal and also mentions him as handsome merchant now how can someone refuse our akbar 😳

then heeras last statement about she too wants to know how he knows that heera is real sahiba is left us with curiosity of how heera will get this question answer and ya also curiosity regarding akbars unrevealing shades and ya most importantly further cute encounters of akbar and heera

And i think heera will treat the ill horse which will help in development of heera and akbar relationship in positive way

thanks for pm

can't wait to read further

continue asap

love u

Originally posted by: lashy

How sweet! 😆 No Zhanna... di... is the short form of 'didi' which means older sister. You would find some others using the term 'akka' too which means older sister in a few South Indian languages.

If you would like to use 'dear' or 'darling' the terms (at least, commonly used here) are 'Chellam' 'Kanna' 'Yaar' 'Da' - all different Indian languages 😊 Feel free to use any of those...

>>Aa-aa-aa! So many words, and all are not translated !!! May I stay then on "dear", as a "respect"? 😳

My family tease me as "person-instruction". If I don't understand that - I very nervous, until I begin to understand. 😃

and in fact, we would like to learn the Russian equivalent of 'dear' too... 🤗

>>If Russian sound of the word "dear", I could not pick up a transliteration to the correct sound in English letters. 😳

Zhanna... if you're assuming he's a man who has failed in love... as in a 'spurned lover' then... no... he is not that... (I know I am giving some of the suspense away by doing that) but I just wanted to explain that point... that's why the sight of her eyes struck him as a phenomenon that he'd never seen/witnessed before!

No! I don't think he is "a man who has failed in love ... as in a 'spurned lover' then". I simply guess some tragic circumstances. Those that had made his a loner in 19 years. 😊

Oh yes... then that makes perfect sense! 😃

Zhanna... if you're assuming he's a man who has failed in love... as in a 'spurned lover' then... no... he is not that... (I know I am giving some of the suspense away by doing that) but I just wanted to explain that point... that's why the sight of her eyes struck him as a phenomenon that he'd never seen/witnessed before!
>>But it would be interesting if some lady rejected him. But it would be a very selfish nature of women as Rukaya in the show.

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Zhanna... I am a big fan of your write ups and comments !! always look forward to them Harshu... waiting for the surprise!! Kal di ! 🤣 Use a '😡' in your I-am-the-only-chellam-here warning... otherwise it looks so cute and sooo not a warning! 😆

As usual, an amazing update 👏. You have created a fictional world and we r wandering in that land. I luv d pics u give for each chapter. Heera hiding her face is my favourite one. She appears to be an enigma. Slowly d nature of d characters r unfolding. U have beautifully portrayed d interaction between Akbar and his horses; how he understands them. U must have done research on horses and horsemen. So, behind d hard exterior of Akbar, a soft heart exists.

I loved d line expect the unexpected! So these words will be appropriate for Akbar when he falls for Heera.

You have another visitor...' he chirped 'Harka Sa...'and just as his pace dropped slightly. Was he expecting Harka Sahiba herself ?

The chief maid, who was quietly watching on, impressed by the sensible explanation and yet wondering if her baisa could come up with that explanation so promptly because she'd already spent time mulling over the stranger. This chief maid is really smart; already suspecting something.

I love d character Heera. She is kind hearted, lovable and at d same time demands respect and has command over her people. I think she is the person who'll never ask Akbar to help her in her mission. But Akbar will be respectful/attracted/feel protective about her and end up carrying out her mission.

I might have to start my agenda... here... at Aidabad...' So, they won't be able to move from Aidabad soon and d story plot will unravel here. Eagerly waiting to know, under what circumstances they'll come face to face.

Btw, does d Ustad in d previous chapter has something to do with Akbar?

I really appreciate your effort to give us updates regularly 🤗.