NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8 - Page 44

Originally posted by: alffim

Originally posted by: melovesja

Loved this light hearted update.😊 With each update you make him familiar to us along with Heera.

Yes... as Heera unravels him.. so do we

Slowly , solved this puzzled man's puzzle. As he has many shades his image keep changing but very efficiently you portray him as match of story line.😛 That's why your writing impressed anyone people lost under your writing charm.with one scan you describe every little detail as trader.👏

Thanks so much Mitu... thank you so much!🤗

Akber is not a animal lover or trader but they were like his near ones . he cared and worried for them and they understand him well.

Yes you're right... yes.. he sells them to make a profit.. but till they are with him, he brings them up as his own family!

Exactly describe his skill as a kabil trainer. Hard working ,intelligent, self learner,mind reader, multitasked,street smart, manipulative, Self made man who standing tall, prominent and shrewd business man and young achiever .⭐️

Perfect business man who like accuracy, devotion to work. Respect regards but not by tounge , consider work not influence, who do any work by himself when it needed, who choose honest man trained them. Didn't forgot his past and help people of same background.Capable of keep his position by secrete skill and sham, dam, dand. Can changed his temper as per need.😊

How aptly you've added all the correct adjectives Mitu.. so sweet...

You touch a sting of emotion by his inheritance past. Because of that he undergo of hammer of time and its covered his emotions in hard shell. May bitter and hard experience made him hard hearted but still shining rays come out of it as worry and pain of sick foul and understand his friend's family importance. His friends surprised as he gave second chance to boy where he aware of try to use emotions. Like the line to expect the unexpected.

Everyone seems to have liked the line... expect the unexpected! hmmm but yes... past experiences have made him a recluse and a hard-shelled man.. someone will have to show him that life is not always like that...

He was annoyed by bindiya's arrival but didn't denied . done tit for tat by humiliation and shock😲 her by know about her Baisa.

Yup...

I always love your writing when you use minimum words but express maximum.

Thanks sweetie!😳

Here you write in two part . one about person and next one his effect on other one, connect it so well.

Gauri is perfect😊 as her position she notice her sparkling smile like before notice her eyes. Notice every change, prompt ans. And note she already thought about it, ask que. as suspension.

With sparkling smile she slowly back to normalcy. 😃

No Mitu.. she hasn't started smiling yet..(apart from that near-smile at the canal) her eyes come alive when they speak of the merchant... but she hasn't started smiling yet 😭

But yes... Gauri can notice some changes...

One side she collect all info to protect her people and other side calm them by demising doubt by logic (but from inside she had bit trust that he will not harm her). as a efficient leader. She think him as unsympathetic but bit confident and about his behavior. Didn't blindly trust their blames. By chitchatting nature of ladies she got many information about him.

EXACTLY!!!!

She notice she give extra attention to talk about him that's his effect. Again she had to lie to Gauri.

Yes dear... beautiful review sweetie.. thanks so much 🤗