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Nancy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: baubles

This comment is among my super favourites Nathu- from all the comments I've read till date!!!!!! You connected every bit of the prologue to
the stranger so so so beautifully.. I love you for this, I read the whole thing twice! I think what I loved about all your comments was how different they were from how we just normally write..
Glad to be back and to be getting to read di's updates and your comments!

OMGGG! Baubly baubles... why making me cry 😭 😭 Thank you soo much darling! 🤗 ☺️ I didnt know it was so good... I am glad you liked reading it so much 😳 BTW do you even realise how much I missed your presence 😡 Finally sojji begum is back m still reading your comment

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: karkuzhali
Thank you dear!May I know your name please?

Saraswathi Aunty.

Welcome Aunty 😃 It's Nancy, aunty 😊 And its a pleasure to read your comments and have you here. 😳

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

I know right.. Kissing emo 😆 Oye.. forget him.. he's mine bass!! 😡 😡 Ask di.. she knows he's only and only mine ☺️

Nahhh...Di doesn't get to decide this. He became officially mine the day NJAPA started.❤️☺️ Everyone else clear away!! 😡😈

Btw, you became a sizzler!!! You already were a sizzler during NJAPA or sometime after that?? Congooo on that!!!!🥳

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Nancy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

^Lol... shut up soda ... Jalals mine ... and Di's gonna go all D'uh..what do I do with these girls !! 😆 For you to reach me and Jalal ... you'll have to cross Sellu 😆 She's guarding me and my J ☺️ 🤣 and lol ... yes I am sizzler from long back re ... became one during NJAPA !! Btw you remember I was still a newbie while you were a Goldie .. and you're still a Goldie 😆 Lazy gal !! 😈 Abhi jaldi jaldi become rockerz now! 😛

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Hi Banjaras,

Anybody here who has any AkDha creations like siggies or avis saved with her? 😛

ya i have...😃

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

🥱 New thread bana dia aur kisi ne bataya nhi

😆

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict
^Lol... shut up soda ... Jalals mine ... and Di's gonna go all D'uh..what do I do with these girls !! 😆 For you to reach me and Jalal ... you'll have to cross Sellu 😆 She's guarding me and my J ☺️ 🤣 and lol ... yes I am sizzler from long back re ... became one during NJAPA !! Btw you remember I was still a newbie while you were a Goldie .. and you're still a Goldie 😆 Lazy gal !! 😈 Abhi jaldi jaldi become rockerz now! 😛

Shoo Shoo Shoo Nathu..stop being jealous.. and who's scared of Sellu bellu?? By the time she finishes making up infinite number of absurd names for people, I'll take Jalal away!😈 He's waiting to come as it is..😳

We are actually discussing NJAPA Jalal in Di's next ff, instead of the characters in this one...Di is gonna whack us!🤣

As for my Goldie status...I guess it will be another 10 years by the time I graduate to the next level.😆

What's after Goldie btw??

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

I had so much in my heart which i wanted to share but could not dut to my busyness & laziness...😛
🤗
Your punishment is you'll give me you thoughts like this as and when you get them !😈
apke hukm ki tameel hogi , writer e khaas...

Awww... how sweet! Meena kumari-ishtyle!
yep , even i feel it to be a very strong character & pooja sharma really fits the bill...😳
whenever i thought about durga , only this face crossed my mind...
Yesss!
Badi baisa... how sweet, Manasi!
oh thanku thanku lashy di , but what to do this baisa word has totally took my fancy...😳
That's nice to know!!!
& we live in fiction world where our heroines r just unmatched , unsurpassed but when reality strikes...it really breaks heart...💔
🥺
Don't worry... everything will unfold slowly!
i know di , i hv full belief on u...😃
Yayyy... now I need to somehow find that belief in myself... lol...
Am really grateful to u for ur appreciative words ...😃
your writing surely makes an impact & i adore all of them ...
infact i always had some musings on my mind for ur other histo tales , if u remember i presented one on ur b'day thread , i always wanted to share it & what eve could be better than ur b'day...😳
Oh... then you should have shown me this before na... I would have enjoyed it... nevertheless I loved this
ok swami ji...🤣
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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Thank you Harshu, Payal, Bindu, Chellam, Mitu, Namita, Shagun and Manasi for the wishes😳... the trip was ok... quite exhausting.. but the boys had fun... and I guess that's what matters... 😊

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Good!! Enjoy your vacations lash🤗
and till then I will read last chapter😛

PS: I started reading last night but after one para, I don't know how I slept before 12 as usually I sleep after 2!!😆😆

Loool Payaliya 😆 looks like HBAS not on your priority-reading list... the other day, you said you dropped it to read other updates... and now you're saying you fell asleep reading it, when you generally don't...

But, its ok dear...🤗 I understand... not every story is everyone's cup of tea... one must read something that takes their fancy or it becomes an imposition of sorts!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

An Ode to the Classy Lashy:

(Inspired by the poem,"The Solitary Reaper" by William Wordsworth.)

The Original:

The Solitary Reaper.

Behold her, single in the field,
Yon solitary Highland Lass
Reaping and Singing by herself;
Stop here or gently pass!
Alone she cuts and binds the grain
And sings a melancholy strain
O! listen! for the vale profound
Is overflowing with the sound!

* * * * *
Will no one tell me what she sings?-
Perhaps the plaintive numbers flow
For old ,unhappy far off things
And battles long ago.
Or is it some more humble lay
Familiar matter today?
Some natural sorrow, loss or pain,
That has been and may be again?

* * * * *
My Version:

Behold her, once again has come back to write
Our slashy Lashy with all her might
Writing and being happy herself;
Read now and also enjoy yourself!
Alone she does research and writes non stop
With her Lexicon and Laptop
O! Watch, for the forum overflows
With the members' posts of kudos!

Can any one miss the story that she writes?
Perhaps the prologue'd have attracted you
To the century-old history of the Kings and Knights,
And the customs of the Moghuls and Rajputs true blue.
Or is it the suspense that underlies in it
Kindles the expectation of you readers to await
Some beautiful romance and well written dialogue
Which'll take us along with her till the epilogue!

Saraswathi Periamma.

Periyamma... you chose exactly that date to write it, when I wouldn't be around... 😭.. I could read it, but couldn't respond to it...

So, have you read all four chapters? I am so touched... so glad you chose this poem and tweaked its words... to come up with such a beautiful form of expression!

Thank you so much for posting this here... 🤗 Especially loved this part...

To the century-old history of the Kings and Knights,

And the customs of the Moghuls and Rajputs true blue.

Or is it the suspense that underlies in it

Kindles the expectation of you readers to await

Some beautiful romance and well written dialogue

Which'll take us along with her till the epilogue!

and if there is one...and when time permits... would love to hear about a favourite scene or two too... 🤗