NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Teaser for Chapter 5

Hoping to thank the stranger for his support, her glances trailed towards his outline. But she could make out that the man was busy - In one swift jump, he'd caught onto the ladder using his left fist, while his right fist dislodged the knives consecutively. Slipping both blades into holders that hung beside his cummerbund, he landed back in the canal to complete the temporary repairs.

The 16 year old thought better of it and decided to reserve her gratitude for another day, for another time - if it ever came. Thus, picking up a branch, she commenced her journey in the direction of the guest house.

Barely few strides on, and Heera stopped in her tracks - she recalled how she'd done something else that she hadn't done lately.

Sometime earlier, she had almost smiled.

Chapter 5 below



CHAPTER 5


Taken aback, Heera turned to her side, her gazes combing the lengths of the bank walls. And there it was. Not far from where she stood hung the outline of, what had to be, a rustic rope ladder - and the very reason why the stranger had aborted his rescue mission at this location. Also, the reason for his annoyance, since he must have assumed that she preferred childishly clinging onto him rather than utilising the ladder for support.

Nevertheless, she'd understood the reason behind his 'unusual' behaviour. So, before she left, she let the man know that she wasn't all that 'crazy' either! 'No... I am not bizarre...' her features flaunted their usual calmness, as she faced the Persian saviour 'But, I am blind...' she paused 'Actually, I am partially blind!'

'What?' he sneered, inferring her remark was a taunt of some sort. His stares turned colder and warier, as he studied the face of the lady, who was dressed in the garb of a maid 'You are lying... blind people cannot look you in the eye...'

'I can look you in the eye because I have partial sight...' the heiress corrected him, unruffled by his suspicions. She was used to people reacting to her handicap in this manner before 'Things around me appear hazy and blurred... but, those that are directly in front of my eyes, I can see...'

'What?' he felt compelled to take a step back.

Watching his reaction, Heera reined in a half-smile. Funny how their unusual circumstances were making her innocent actions and words sound dubious - so much so that the mighty stranger was left feeling uneasy in the presence of her petite self 'That is why I can't swim in fast currents... or notice objects like the rope ladder hanging there!' finished with what she had to say, the lady began making her way out

Unmoved, the stranger's stares remained just as cold - even if they were less guarded now 'Go ahead then... there it is...' he said, making a poor effort to sound kinder, before turning around to get on with his work 'All the more reason... not to be out, alone... near a canal, when its flood gates have been opened...' he griped to himself, as he hoisted up one side of the footbridge 'And those darned horse thieves... vandalised the bridge again!'


The heiress had heard his passing remarks, but let it go. She didn't owe him a clarification for 'why' she was out alone - and anyway, he didn't care for one either. Rather, she resolved to get out of that canal, without further delay.

Freshly armed with a subtle confidence to face those furious water currents single-handedly, Heera pinned her fingers into the crevices to avoid slipping. Gradually inching along the wet wall, she stopped when the ladder came directly above her field of vision.


Determined; the young lady then held onto its bottom rung and heaved herself up one level. However, the ropes were unfixed and not surprisingly, they began swivelling - making the endeavour quite a challenge - especially for one with limited vision. Telling herself 'Only 5 more levels to go' she kept at it for as long as it took her to climb up to the second rung.

Having noticed her scuffles from his spot, an agitated sigh eventually slipped out of his lips. His young life had witnessed a lot, and he'd rarely ever reacted with anything other than indifference to all of it. Somehow though, a 16 year old's dignified approach towards her disability and struggles, had caught his apathy off guard!

'Stay still' he suddenly ordered

Heeding her instincts, she complied with the order and waited - despite being cornered into an uncomfortable position, as a result

A glint of metal bolted through the air.

Followed by, another.

Heera observed the outcome.


With frightful accuracy, a knife had landed beside her right palm, its blade wedged deep into the brick wall. A few calculated feet above, another knife had landed, in similar fashion. What did he expect her to do? Use their handles for additional support? Surely, they couldn't be stable enough to bear her weight - what with the unrealistic angle, he'd thrown them from.

Curious, she gave the knife a good shake. But it budged not a bit, almost as though it'd been soldered into the wall. Satisfied and impressed, Heera gripped the handle on her right, and then the one above her, both proving to be better supports than the ladder itself - thus making her steady ascent to the top.


No sooner than she stood on steady ground, the heiress straightened her veil and then turned around to gauge the heights that she had scaled. Her lungs were still panting for air, but her heart was filling up with a strange sense of achievement. After all, she'd just accomplished a feat that she'd never done before.

Hoping to thank the stranger for his support, her glances trailed towards his outline. But she could make out that the man was busy - In one swift jump, he'd caught onto the ladder using his left fist, while his right fist dislodged the knives consecutively. Slipping both blades into holders that hung beside his cummerbund, he landed back in the canal to complete the temporary repairs.

The 16 year old thought better of it and decided to reserve her gratitude for another day, for another time - if it ever came. Thus, picking up a branch, she commenced her journey in the direction of the guest house.


Barely few strides on, and Heera stopped in her tracks - she recalled how she'd done something else that she hadn't done lately.

Sometime earlier, she had almost smiled.

Her mind blank at first, feelings of bewilderment slowly started seeping in, succeeded by a pang of regret. She looked up to the dark skies, wondering what could have made her momentarily overlook her current frame of mind 'How? And why?' she asked herself the question, over and over. But ultimately, the only explanation she found was a vague one, which she settled for 'By seeking some peace, you wanted to forget about your problems briefly Heera... instead, a temporary spell of distraction helped you achieve that!'



The guest house...

In near disbelief, he continued to peer on - observing the sights to their left, then the right, then ahead and far beyond. When the Kotwal had informed him that a rich travelling party were going to be renting the guest quarters, he hadn't expected this! Many a guest had his haveli seen in its long history, but never before did he remember the residence undergoing such a wondrous transformation - and that too, within such a short period of time.

Apparently, the maids had taken it upon themselves to revive its interiors from a state of neglect, restoring some of its former glory too. Old pieces of furniture had been aesthetically reorganised in accordance with their manager's directions, thus creating space for several shiny new trunks. Cobwebs had been brushed off many walls. Dust was being wiped off the surfaces. A series of lamps had effectively lit up any dark corners, while the fragrance of neem leaves was doing away with both, the insects and the dampness.

So foreign to him were these sights and smells that reflected Hindu traditions, and yet, so much more welcoming did the place feel than it had, in years!

'It is unrecognisable' he beamed widely 'It looks alive!'


'The Kotwal helped us in... thank you for letting us stay here...' Ratan kaka spoke for his people, addressing the old man, who seemed to be too engrossed with the changes to strike up a conversation anytime soon.

Of course, the manager wasn't certain which of the four men facing him were the owners of the mansion. But because the elderly man - who called himself as 'chacha jaan' - had the friendliest face of the lot, kaka directed his attention towards him.

'You're welcome...' chacha jaan finally nodded, his quirky mannerisms and wrinkly smiles making him look older than his age - especially since his three other companions were smartly dressed youths who appeared to be in their twenties 'Ibrahim Mirza, Sayyid Baig, and Azeez Shah' they'd introduced themselves as, with a Mughal adaab, soon after they'd arrived at the reception room


Needless to say, the unexpected arrival of unfamiliar men had sent the maids scampering towards a corridor, seeking the seclusion of two pillars for some privacy. However, those pillars didn't stop them from being a curious audience to the unfolding scenes, even if they had to lean over each other's shoulders to do so.

Bindiya, on the other hand, managed to sustain a facade of diplomacy - what with her friend Dhani constantly reminding her of how she was still playing an aristocrat. So, from behind a wall of guards, she quietly observed the two parties exchanging formalities.

'It's very late now... and you all have travelled far...' chacha jaan continued 'I can arrange to have some food sent over tomorrow... for your noon meals...'

'Thank you Sahib...' Maharaj kaka took over 'But, unfortunately... we are in mourning now...' his voice dropped low 'And our baisa is fasting... so... grateful as we are for the offer, we cannot accept it!'

The old man understood 'What about the guards, then?'

'Y... yes...' the cook supposed 'They might be happy to partake of your meals tomorrow...'

'I'll send over some hot Zaffrani Pilaf then...' chacha jaan was quick to announce - and with a hint of pride that was unmissable

'Pilaf?' the guards' eyes widened in anticipation. Already fatigued from the journey, mental images of a dish they knew the Mughals were famous for only made them crave it more.

Alas, their anticipations were to be quashed soon. For, they noticed an odd stir amongst the party of owners thereafter.


The man who went by the name 'Ibrahim' had tugged the chacha to one side, after which, they all seemed to converse in code

'Are you going to offer them YOUR pilaf, chacha jaan?'

'Of course!' chacha replied with a wink, as if he were doing the guests who'd impressed him, a great favour

As Azeez gestured 'Ya Allah... please spare them!', Gokul and Bajrang's suspicions only compounded


Of course, Bindiya had noticed none of the unusual exchanges.

Therefore, in an enthusiasm so typical of her, she chose to dispel the silence by thanking the old man for his gesture, presuming Harka baisa would have done the same if she were here 'It is so nice to meet someone as kind and hospitable as you, chacha sahib... especially, after the bitter experience we've had!'

The four men glimpsed at each other's faces, puzzled

'Why, sahiba?'

'What bitter experience did you have?'

'We were running out of drinking water and we met a stranger on the way...' Bindiya let herself grow increasingly animated 'Imagine our horror when he charged us exorbitantly for a bag of water... how could anyone behave so mean?'


'Ibrahim...'

A commanding baritone from the corridors, muffled all chatter and murmurs in the busy room. Ibrahim, Sayyid and Azeez dropped whatever they'd been doing, their shoulders stiffening in respect, while chacha's jovial temperament changed into something mellower.

'Behave so MEAN?'

There was a pause

'Now that is the THIRD time someone from their group has called me that!'

Through the grand archway a shadow emerged, which thereupon morphed into the man-behind-the-voice himself.

For a while, none of the guests said anything. They couldn't. For, the man-behind-the-voice had just stunned them into a prolonged spell of speechlessness.

'HE is the stranger... the one who charged us 4 dams for a bag of water!' Bindiya yelped, recognising the voice as soon as she'd recovered from the shock. She noticed how his expressions were just as unkind as his attitude - even the wet locks did nothing to soften the sternness in his frowns 'But, what's HE doing here?' she demanded, disregarding all of Dhani's ploys to get her to stay quiet

Having offered him an adaab, Ibrahim waited till he'd received the man's signal before proceeding to answer the lady's questions 'Oh... sahiba...' he tied his hands behind his back, like every bit the gentleman he was 'The haveli that you're staying at... the stables where your horses are parked... the canal from which you just fetched your water... and the lands as far as your eyes can see... belong to a very eminent horse merchant called Akbar Mahmoud Khan...'

'Ask ANYONE in these regions who Khan Sahib is, and they shall tell you!' Sayyid pitched in, his manner not as cordial as Ibrahim's - his simple mind didn't allow him to jest with anyone who'd spoken of his sahib so rudely!

'W...what?' she cupped her mouth in horror, the facts beginning to dawn upon her

'Sahiba!' Azeez smirked at her reaction, before indicating towards the 'stranger' 'That's him! Akbar Mahmoud Khan Sahib!'

And as though the terrifying developments hadn't mortified her enough already, the maid committed the subsequent mistake of peeking through her veil to get a better look at the man. The silent fury in those red eyes forced her to swallow back a nervous lump 'Ma Bhavani!' she exclaimed, on the verge of breaking down into tears 'What have I done!'



Another chamber... elsewhere in the guest quarters...

Once the third cord of her choli had been twisted into a neat knot, Heera gently flung the long lengths of her damp tresses behind her shoulders. Leaning back upon the low chaise, she let the bevy of maids flurrying around her, carry on with their tasks. As one lady held her locks out to dry, another one deftly brushed out its tangles with her fingers. Simultaneously, Gauri picked up the brass dhoop holder, and waved its fumes below the tresses - hoping its smoke would ward off any evil eye and its warmth fight off all nasty diseases

'I still fail to understand...' the chief maid resumed the subject that hadn't been resolved so far 'What was the need to wander off? You should have seen the uproar the guards raised, when they couldn't find you in the gardens or in the meadows...'

'I was preoccupied... lost...' she replied

'By the way... what made you decide to swim at such an ungodly hour?'

'Swimming? I said I went for a dip...' she corrected - and did it so smoothly that the tone tricked all the maids into believing her story. Well, all her maids, but one!

'A dip?' Gauri asked, closely observing Heera's reactions in the mirror - but before she could probe any further, the other maids had chipped in

'We were so worried, baisa...'

'We thought you'd been kidnapped!'

Heera let out a deep breath 'I realise I have put you all through a lot of trouble... please excuse my reckless actions...' She might have bluffed about the reasons for her prolonged absence, but the remorse she felt was earnest. Even if only unintentional, she had caused them plenty of worry 'I'll take care not to be so negligent again...'

'Baisa!' the maids protested in unison, taken aback by their mistress' unexpected plea 'You shouldn't be apologising to us...'

'We were concerned... that's all...'

'We promise not to ask you any more questions about this...'

'Thank you...' she appreciated their sentiments


However, Gauri remained unconvinced. As she set aside the dhoop holder and began plaiting the lengths into a loose braid, many doubts lingered in her mind. Well, the Harka Bai, who was seated upon that chaise now, somehow appeared less demoralised than the Harka Bai who'd left the haveli a short while ago. And she couldn't help but wonder what had brought about that change?

Nevertheless, since the changes in her mistress were positive, Gauri decided to let it go.


'I am sorry for lying to you, my friend'

Another quiet apology had just passed through Heera's guilt-stricken mind. She didn't even need to look Gauri in the eye to perceive her thoughts and suspicions - she could just tell it from the 'different' way her braids were being plaited.

Nevertheless, there was nothing she could do about the situation - this was one incident, she was going to keep secret.

After all, the entire scenario at the canal bank had been too strange. Too inexplicable. When even SHE couldn't make sense of something so mystifying, she didn't expect her ladies to fathom it. Firstly, they would be furious when they learnt that their heiress had nearly drowned. Furthermore, they would be mortified if they found out that their precious baisa - whom no outsider had even laid eyes upon, so far - had been dragged ashore and stranded beside a Mughal stranger for more than a few moments.

Of course, Heera was pragmatic enough to accept that it was a chance encounter under very grave circumstances. But, others wouldn't be able to brush off the incident so casually - not even Gauri.

Thus, this was going to be one incident, she was going to keep secret.





'C... called you 'mean'... for the th... third time? I... I ... don't understand... we've only met twice!' stuttered Ratan kaka, anxiously seeking an answer to a doubt that was, in fact, running through everyone's mind

'Shall I?' Ibrahim enquired - but the businessman held his palm up to stop him. He wanted to do the honours of enlightening the confused group himself now

'I can recognise my horses anywhere...' Akbar Khan announced with a calm frigidness, that made his tone sound all the more intimidating 'The horse that was riding at the front of your group, in the forest... is a cross-breed... a Marwari racer...' giving them a moment to recall the particular steed being referred to, he continued 'It comes from my stables... my man sold it at a horse fair 2 weeks ago... and then, reported back... informing me, how the buyers had insulted his 'Sahib' after the auction!'


'WHAT!' The Parnagarhis froze in their spots, the colour draining away from their faces. They'd barely recouped from the previous shock, when the next blow had arrived, hitting them even harder than before. Their luck HAD to be cursed! For, who would have thought that the very 'Sahib' they'd taunted and ridiculed at the horse fair, would be the one laying down the law, two weeks later?

Having finished what he had to convey, the businessman cast a hurried glimpse at the freshened interiors of the room they were standing in. Evidently, this retinue knew how to make themselves comfortable wherever they went. Thence, the man who wasn't fond of pointlessly loitering around, cast his companions a glance that signalled 'They have everything they need... so, let's get going...'

Not too bothered by the brazenness of their master, the three men shadowed him.

Nonetheless, chacha did make it a point to extend the group an awkward smile and a parting adaab before turning around to leave 'Khuda Hafiz...'


'I... we...' Ratan kaka managed to find his voice in the nick of time 'Pardon us for the misunderstandings caused...' it was a poor attempt to make amends, but it was an attempt regardless - so the owner wouldn't show them the door. They desperately needed the place for the next few days! 'Thank you for renting us your quarters... very graceful of you!'

Slowing his pace, the businessman nodded in acknowledgement, with his back still to the group.

Just as he was about to resume his strides thereafter, something lying beside his feet caught everyone's attention. A small coin-pouch of some sort, possibly dropped by one of the ladies.

Using one end of his horse-whip, Akbar casually picked the pouch up and tossed it over to his mates. Caught by Azeez with just as much flair, the purse was then handed over to the manager

'Must belong to their Sahiba...' the merchant declared, emphasising on the word 'Sahiba' with striking irony.

A moment later, he'd disappeared through the arches, off to his own haveli for the night, and the remaining men followed suit.


Still in relative disbelief, Ratan kaka gaped at the pouch in his hand and then in the direction of the now empty passageways - not knowing whether he must feel relieved that the owner hadn't thrown them out yet, frightened of what else to expect during their 4 day stay there, or concerned about how an already-perturbed heiress would take to the latest developments.



A short while later...

'Baisa...'

'Harka baisa...'

'BAISAAA...'

They nudged her hand, when their calls weren't being responded to

'Oh ladies... please give me a moment' she shushed them gently, buying herself some more 'thinking' time. It wasn't long since the frantic maids had come barging into her chamber and bombarded her with a slew of startling news. The reality was still sinking in, word by word, bit by bit. 'Khan Sahib?' she muttered under her breath, once again 'The horse merchant?'

Truth be told, the fact that the lone traveller belonged to this area was something she had already guessed. Even the fact that he was the owner of the haveli, didn't astonish her much. After all, they did meet him in a forest not far from here. Neither did he need a map when giving directions, nor was he was a stranger to the local thugs. Besides, he seemed very familiar with his way around the canal too.

It was the fact that he turned out to be the owner of the auction horse that had left her speechless. And despite the ladies calling this unexpected connection with the merchant as an 'ill-fated coincidence', Heera thought differently.

Somehow or the other, it was Khan Sahib's horse that'd turned out to be jiji's most cherished purchase - the pet with which she enjoyed her best moments in life! It was also this very Marwari racer that had managed to dodge Khalil's men and warn her about the attack, thus fulfilling jiji's last wishes.

Then, how could she label such a connection, as ill-fated?

'Baisa...'

'Why aren't you saying anything?'

'We thought you'd be shocked by everything we had to say, but you don't even look alarmed!' they groaned, their patience wearing thin. With such feverish enthusiasm had they narrated every portion of the encounter - not one word had they missed, not one expression overlooked. The least they'd expected from her was gasps and wide-eyes. Instead, here was their mistress, lost in thought, musing to herself.

'BAISAAA'

'All right... all right...' she relented, drawn away from her thoughts. Nearly amused by how disappointed they appeared at the absence of shock on her face, Heera came up with a vague justification for her state of mind 'I'm still assimilating the news... probably too many things, too soon...'

'Why does he behave so strangely?'

'And rudely?'

'Is that how he is? Or is it because of what happened at the auction?'

'Not sure...' the young lady nodded. She knew not what to make of the merchant's attitude, except that he did not like company or crowd 'But, why worry? We don't plan to stay here for long... '


'Baisa...'

It was a low and desolate whine that everyone in the room instantly recognised. Standing all alone, since no one was paying her much heed, Bindiya uttered sadly 'Please pardon me for having caused such trouble...'

'Trouble?' retorted Gauri, who'd grown tired of the maid's never-ending excuses 'Because of you... we've had to suffer enough... it was my mistake that I gave in when you begged to play the role of a 'baisa', but NEVER again would I let you take on such responsibilities again!'

'I... I am sorry...' she wiped a tear. But, no one was listening

'You never keep a check on your emotions...'

'Your misbehaviour could've had serious consequences!'

'Besides... you're still wearing baisa's clothes...' reminded Dhani, worsening the blow to her conscience by making her realise the true extent of her folly 'So, the merchant and his men must be assuming that it's Harka baisa passing such remarks!'


'Oh my Lord!' the maid's face blanched in shame, afflicted by a fresh pang of anguish. Every other blunder she'd committed paled in comparison to the crime of disgracing her mistress' name. Plonking down on the floor, she sat near Heera's feet 'I am so sorry... never again shall I be adamant about playing the role of a baisa... I now realise it's not just about wearing beautiful silk attires!'

'Well...' the heiress locked her fingers together on her lap, like she did before every verdict she was about to announce 'Bindiya, what the ladies say, is true... I can't afford to take that risk again... if necessary, someone else will have to take up this responsibility for the rest of the journey...' Heera watched, like a doting sister, how a fresh surge of tears lined the lashes of her pretty maid 'But it is the idea of wearing this silk dress that tempted you in the first place...' she paused 'So, you may keep this dress for yourself... I know how much you love it!'

The young maid looked up, unable to believe how kind a woman Her Ladyship was. Leaping forward in an emotional spurt, Bindiya hugged her legs in gratitude 'I will set matters straight with Khan sahib and I will ask for his forgiveness... I promise...'

'Really?' she enquired, uncertain if Bindiya had it in her to do so

'Yes!'

'But then...' interrupted Dhani 'Aren't you worried about facing him, Bindu? What if he punishes you?'

'Of course, I am worried! He is scary and mean...' Bindiya shut her mouth when she caught herself uttering the forbidden word, again 'Sorry... I... I... mean... I mean... despite being a Moghul, he was blessed by God with such beauty... if only God had given the man a kinder tongue too!' realising what she'd blurted, the maid bit her tongue in embarrassment, a moment later


Following a short lull, a wave of hush smiles rippled through the chamber

'Such beauty?'

'What do you mean?' asked one maid mischievously

Feeling sheepish, the maid wiped her eyes dry and waited for Heera's permission to continue. And when she finally received the nod, it raised the ladies' spirits. So relieved were they to see that their heiress had not chosen to walk away from such chatter and gossip now - something she'd been doing ever since the demise of Durga baisa - that their enthusiasm became evident.

'Tell baisa too...'

'She wants to hear about it!' they goaded. Obviously, everyone in that chamber had assumed that Heera wouldn't understand why they were so excited - because, they'd assumed she would not have seen the man's handsome face. If only they knew the truth!

'Go on!'


'All right...' Bindiya sat up, prepared to become Harka bai's eyes once again. The artist in her, spent a good few moments recalling his features so she could detail them accurately - a feat this maid was exceptionally good at. And a quality that Heera found very useful whenever she needed to identify a person she hadn't seen clearly enough

Hereby, I commence my narration

About a man, who by trade, was a businessman,

A deal he struck with the Lord in Heaven

And was bestowed with good looks in the bargain!

With features sharper than a sword's blade

And wet long locks of a deep brown shade,

His skin possessed the fairest of complexions

But in the mirror of his eyes, I saw a stormy reflection!

The responses that'd started off as hush smiles, grew into friskier grins with every passing line.


The heiress, on the other hand, was able to maintain better composure than the rest - though that didn't stop her thoughts from straying back to the encounter. Incidentally recalling the face she'd seen, her mind compared his features with the maid's poetic descriptions - and was left pleasantly surprised. Bindiya was describing the man very well indeed!

'Ahem... Ahem...' came Gauri's sudden interruption in the form of a loud fake-cough 'It is past midnight! We have plenty to do!'

The abrupt ploy was effective. It dampened the jovial mood, bringing everyone back to reality in no time.

As the first one to take the cue, Heera immediately added 'Yes, Gauri...' she stood up, prepared to leave 'I have several issues to attend to tomorrow morning...'

After a dull pause, the maids reluctantly tucked in their veils, before dispersing to return to their nightly routine. How disappointing that their chief-maid was being such a spoilsport!


Gauri watched their unhappy faces in silence

'You might be annoyed with me now... but, I only did what I had to!'

And no, it wasn't the descriptions or the maids' crimson-tinged grins that had urged her to stop the chatter. It was the sight of Heera's eyes that had made her do it. For the first time since the tragedy, the Lady's sullen eyes were beginning to brighten - beginning to show a sign of interest in something.

Had the reasons for her mistress' brightened-eyes been anything else, she would have been the happiest person on Earth. However, if conversations about an unfamiliar merchant - that too, a Mughal merchant - were the reason behind that change, it spelled trouble.

As it is, Harka baisa's petite shoulders were carrying the burden of many tragic hardships. And the 16 year old still had numerous responsibilities to fulfil. An added misery of turmoil and heartache was something she could definitely do without, at this point.

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Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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'But, if he's prominent-enough that the local thugs know him... that the Kotwal respects him... why wasn't he travelling with any guards in the forest?' Her solemn frown curved into a sceptical one 'Then again... why WOULD he need protection, if his senses are smarter than mine, and his skills are sharper than a warrior's?'

Continuing to have mixed feelings about the entire scenario, she recounted once again, the scenes that were still fresh in her mind. And like every other time she'd done so, there was always one aspect that evoked those 'mixed' feelings - the phenomenal aim with which he'd hurled those blades.

This sort of expertise with knives and ropes, was not commonplace. In fact, as a Rajput, she was no stranger to brave men and their art of warfare - and somehow, the businessman seemed capable of surpassing most such skills that she'd read and heard about.

Chapter 6 below...


CHAPTER 6


Parnagarh...

'Kunwarsa...' called out Vaid kaka, after what seemed like eons of silence. Witnessing the deterioration of a man so dignified to a plight so pitiful was heart-wrenching for one and all. So heart-wrenching, it'd dragged the villagers back into an abyss of grief that they'd only barely come out of 'Please get a hold of your emotions... you must be strong for your family's sake...'

The man was unresponsive

'This is what Durga bitiya would have wanted too...' he wiped his eyes and waited

The man was still unresponsive

'Mahendar...' his cousin held his arm tightly 'You've been numb for days now... and this visit, has left you shattered...I understand... but, it IS time to regroup yourself... time to act!'

He didn't budge.

The bowl of warm broth was still sitting in between his quivering hands, untouched. Neither had the unsteadiness of his fingers settled down, nor had the colour returned to his face. As a young man who had already been devastated by the loss of his beloved, the brief inspection of her desolate bedroom, the scene of the terrible crime, had only rendered him all the more inconsolable. Two hours had passed by since the visit, but he was still slumped upon the large chair, withdrawn from all life and sounds around him.


Eventually perceiving that time, words and empathy weren't going to work, the Senapati resorted to an alternate means thereafter - he resorted to speaking his mind

'Kunwarsa... you are squandering your time here...' he announced, startling everyone

The remark though harsh, was successful in compelling Mahendar to look up 'What!'

'The time we spend moaning our losses here, is time we lose...'

'Stop it!'

'Time that could have been used to achieve something valuable...'

'How dare you...'

'Time that could be used to finding the ill-bred murderers, who committed this crime!'

The kunwarsa was on the verge of drawing his sword out, when he perceived what his Senapati was trying to convey


'You know what...' all of a sudden, he downed the broth and set the bowl aside with such force that it knocked the small table over 'You men are right... I've wailed enough... but, the pain never goes... it will never go till I seek my revenge...'

'Kunwarsa, someone must stop Khalil... and his men!' said a villager

'We'd only heard of his atrocities so far...' added another 'Now we've seen them for ourselves!'


'Yes' the bereaved lover stood up for the first time in two hours, appearing taller than before

'Those men are depraved' continued the senapati, fanning the fire that'd just started burning 'They spare no one... they're so depraved, they have a special army just to commit such crimes...they're so depraved, they even have an experienced mentor... called Ustaad... to recruit and train such barbarians... they...'

'I will hunt down and kill them all...' interrupted the Kunwar with a low growl 'Khalil... and every single one of his men... I'll MASSACRE them!' hints of weakness that were slowly wiped off his face, were being replaced with a bloodthirsty fury instead 'I will slaughter his men just like they slaughtered my love...' the rings were digging indents into his palm because of how hard he'd clenched his fists 'And you all will bear witness to it...'

His manner had morphed into one so fierce, that even his loyal supporters needed a few moments to come to terms with the transformation.

Then, the first soft cries of encouragement came out - which steadily grew into a louder string of echoes, till the uproar reached a crescendo.

'Victory to Kunwar Mahendar' they shouted out emotionally - as though their yells would carry all the way till the capital - and be heard by the Shehzade and Khalil.

'Hail kunwarsa... our protector!' the children and women joined in, with newfound hope - a hope that they wouldn't lose their livelihoods. That they wouldn't be driven out of their homes. That their Harka baisa would be able to keep Parnagarh, with the continued help and backing of this powerful Kunwar of Manswar.


Finding himself immensely whelmed by their support and the heart-warming pleas, Mahendar finally acknowledged their sentiments with a gentle nod 'My dear people... I hope to fulfil my duties and keep up your expectations... talking of which...' his spirits that'd seemed to be ablaze until a moment ago, steadily dulled down. His eyes softened once again 'Where is your choti baisa? Is she at Bansi?'

'She must be on her way there...' replied Vaid kaka

'Once you find out, let me know...I promised Durga that I would take care of her sister... I will continue to do so now too... just as I promised...' he rubbed the worry lines on his throbbing temple 'She wasn't even given the decency to mourn in peace... and was driven away from her homeland... I vow to seek her out and return her rightful home back to her...'


The cries that had barely died down rose once again - and this time, with even greater fervour and hope!

After the demise of Mansabdar Jagat Prasad Singh, they'd feared for their fates. However, the Lord had sent Durga baisa to care for them. Now that Durga baisa was with them no more, the Lord had sent the noble Kunwarsa to support Harka baisa and protect them.

Ma Bhavani hadn't abandoned them, after all!



Aidabad...

Opening her eyes, Heera steadily descended down from depths of the trance she'd been immersed in. Her heavy eyelids needed a few moments to adjust to the new world around her. The beautiful mental images of Ma Jagdamba had gone - in front, sat the Goddess in the form of an idol. The mental pictures of jiji's comforting face had gone - in front, sat the heiress, in the form of ashes inside an urn.

'Not so long ago' she bemoaned 'We used to pray to Ma Jagdamba together... and, here I am... praying to you... while you sit beside her...' the very thought brought about a fresh pang of sorrow in her chest.

Giving the droplets that were bathing her cheeks a short while to dry out, Heera bowed in front of both the divine spirits - her only source of strength for now, as she mentally prepared herself to step out amongst her people. To resume her role as heiress. And to face the rest of the day.


A while later; she was walking through the corridors of the guest quarters, tending to the day's affairs - simultaneously studying the interiors and architecture of the chambers.

'What do we tell them...' enquired Ratan kaka, when they stopped by a large arched window that overlooked the vast scenery of meadows, fields and stables 'Last night, I managed to evade the Kotwal's enquiries... but, I'm certain the question will come up again... all they know, is that we are in mourning!'

'As discussed, kakasa...' Heera sighed 'Just tell anyone who asks, that we're heading east, to visit a few relatives. If any further questions arise, we will have to fib that we're from Dhaalori... I doubt anyone would've even heard the name of that village!'

'All right...' he paused 'So, shall I repeat this information to the guards and maids too?'

'Yes please...' and before the man could step away, she added a crucial piece of advice 'Also tell them to keep an eye out for anything out-of-the-ordinary... be it here, in the haveli grounds... or around town...'

'Yes bitiya...'

Once the manager had left to follow his bidding, her attention trailed back to the bustling backdrop far and beyond.


The pathways were so familiar, and yet, it seemed like the colours of sunrise had changed the entire picture in front. What were merely dark specks during her stroll last night appeared to be vibrant green trees now. Endless stretches of grey had been replaced by bright and sunny fields of grass. She attempted to get a glimpse of the hillock farther off, but it was a long way away. She had to only imagine how sunrise would have changed the elevated spot and its views of the canal bank 'No doubt, the view should be beautiful now...' she guessed 'And much calmer too...'

Retracing her glimpses back, she stopped when they fell upon the hazy scenes of clamour, in the distance. Where she could hear the haveli grounds truly coming to life. Where the sleepy stable-barns from the night before were now abuzz with sounds of trots, neighs and noises. Wherein lay the merchant's flourishing business.


'An eminent horse merchant called Akbar Mahmoud Khan... it seems, anyone in these regions can recognise the name Khan Sahib!' she recalled what the maids had told her about him. But then, how could one so young achieve such fame? What if those claims were just an exaggeration?



'What are you looking for?' came a soft voice from behind

'Bindiya' Heera called forth the one who'd be perfect to answer the thoughts that'd begun springing up in her mind 'My sight is not co-operating with me this morning... I want you describe a few things for me...'

'Sure baisa...'

'Observe those sheds... out there...'


Swiftly leaning over the window frame, the girl shielded her eyes from the sunrays with her palms and took a good look at what she was being told to observe

'The barns, the sheds, the structures... do they look new, Bindiya? Or, would you say the stables have been here, for a while?'

After close scrutiny, she nodded 'No baisa... the barns don't look new...'

'Which means, his business has been here long enough... so, his men are not exaggerating... the man is well-known, around here...' having said that, the answers only gave rise to further doubts 'But, if he's prominent-enough that the local thugs know him... that the Kotwal respects him... why wasn't he travelling with any guards in the forest?' Her solemn frown curved into a sceptical one 'Then again... why WOULD he need protection, if his senses are smarter than mine, and his skills are sharper than a warrior's?'


Continuing to have mixed feelings about the entire scenario, she recounted once again, the scenes that were still fresh in her mind. And like every other time she'd done so, there was always one aspect that evoked those 'mixed' feelings - the phenomenal aim with which he'd hurled those blades.

This sort of expertise with knives and ropes, was not commonplace. In fact, as a Rajput, she was no stranger to brave men and their art of warfare - and somehow, the businessman seemed capable of surpassing most such skills that she'd read and heard about.


'Will that be all, baisa?'

Still gazing ahead, she nodded in recognition of the girl's time and effort 'Thank you Bindiya... you may go now... but, please send for Bajrang...' she added, a brief pause later. She had a task in mind for the guard!


Granted, Heera was only going to be halting for a few days, but she was going to have those unresolved doubts put to rest. She was going to learn more about this mysterious Persian who'd drawn her out from the jaws of death. Where did he travel so late at night? How could one so young, achieve success, all by himself? And what was it about him that was not-so-commonplace?

Because, it was the answers to these very inquiries that would let her know if his presence at the canal was fate's way of intervening - or, if it was something else altogether!



Many hours later...

With the 'odd' expression of the man who'd called himself Ibrahim still fresh in their minds, the men in the dining area glared at the food in front, suspicion rife in their eyes. They waited for their plump companion - their designated food tester - to pronounce his verdict. To deem the food safe, before the rest of the retinue could began partaking it.

However, with the emergence of a slow-but-sure 'pained' look on his face, the men weren't sure they were going to be eating any of chacha jaan's Saffron pilaf.

'Why don't you say something Motlu?' a guard asked, when many tense moments had passed by and the man had said nothing

'Do you think it's poisoned?' enquired Maharaj ji, worried for the sake of his assistant 'I'm going to call for baisa, now... you don't look well...'

'Wait Maharaj kakasa...' Having recognised the reasons behind their anxiety, Motlu swiftly gulped down a glass of water and shook his head 'It's definitely not poisoned!' he pushed the rest of the plate away, unfinished 'But am I glad Harka baisa is not going to be eating this!'

When chacha jaan had handed over his speciality 'pilaf' with such a proud smile, Motlu had expected the kind of food served in Mughal courts. How wrong could he be - the rice was more undercooked, coarse and over-spiced than anything he'd ever tasted. In fact, after having been spoiled by the exquisite culinary skills of their famed chef, Maharaj kaka, this food tasted unpalatable!


One by one, the men prepared to share in the suffering that their fellow-man had endured, by tasting the first morsel from their plates in front. The sour scowls that subsequently appeared on their faces, turned out to be an apt reflection of their opinions

'This is inedible...'

'Yes...' complained another man 'It's horrible!'

'That's enough!' interrupted Gokul, who'd been watching all the fuss with rising annoyance 'We know it's safe... so, we make do with it... anyway, it's only one meal... Maharaj kakasa will be taking charge of these kitchens hereafter...' setting an example by helping himself to the food on his plate with generous handfuls, the senior-guard ended his sermon with a stern warning 'We've been trained to survive on fodder... this Mughal pilaf is still marginally better than that! Baisa is already going through a lot... try not to make it worse with such complaints... be grateful for what you've got!'



Later, that night...

'Please hand me the reading glass...'

The aide opened a rectangular ivory box, picked it up by its dainty handle and handed it over to the Lady, with as much care as she could. What lay at the other end of that handle was precious - a round bulged glass the size of a palm, through which letters and objects appeared larger. Yes, its edges had chipped over time. Yet, the lens was Harka Bai's lifeline during those rare days when the blurry patches in her eyes affected more than just the 'sides' of her vision. On such difficult days, the lens helped her read, write, prepare medicines, check accounts and carry out numerous other finer duties that would be quite a challenge, otherwise.

And apart from the obvious advantage it offered Heera, it also held great sentimental value. The glass was a gift from her bapusa, who'd brought it for his dear daughter from one of his many trips to the capital.

'Thank you...'


Holding the lens over the reading table, Heera gave the scroll a quick read. It carried a message for Maharaj Chitranjan that she'd just finished dictating - a message outlining the unexpected problems they were facing and their latest whereabouts.

'Seems fine...' returning the lens to her maid, she handed the letter over to her manager 'Can be sealed and sent, kakasa...'

'Yes bitiya...' rolling the scroll up, he cast a quick glance at the dark skies blanketing the windows of the reception room 'It's late now... you must be exhausted... don't you plan to retire for the night?'


The lady said nothing for a while 'I have been putting something off...' she confessed eventually 'Something I must do without further delay...' her sentence paused. Her voice started to choke up midway, as the lump forming in her throat felt too profound to swallow back 'I... I... need to dictate a letter... to jijasa... offering him our condolences...'

Ratan kaka's eyed widened, in relief and respect 'Yes you must, bitiya'

After a week-long spell of oblivion, the 16 year old was beginning to embrace protocol without being prompted to do so. She was finally showing her first signs of coming to terms with the tragedy. Displaying the maturity that was expected of one so wise. Which meant, it wouldn't be long before she would start coming up with some plan to secure Parnagarh's future - thus taking her rightful place after Durga Bai, as leader of their clan.

'Thank you Ma Bhavani...' muttering a prayer of gratitude, the upbeat manager got down to business, and ordered the maid to fetch a fresh scroll.

Thereupon, a touching message of sympathy and consolation was thoughtfully composed for Kunwar Mahendar. Though reliving the heartache all over again while doing so, Heera reviewed its words just like she did every other scroll. Following that, it was rolled up and set beside the other messages, which were meant to be sealed and sent off in the morning to their respective destinations.

Just as the duo were about to call it a day, they heard footsteps approaching the formal reception


'Baisa?'

'Bajrang?' Heera looked up, towards the doorway

It was dark. And her vision was fuzzier than usual. So, she couldn't see the guard's expressions clearly. However, from his laboured breathing and soiled clothes, she could make out that the senior-guard had had a long day

'Yes Bajrang?'

'Baisa...' the guard stepped forward 'I did as you'd asked me to...'

'Go on...'

'We tracked a few of Khan Sahib's men...' he disclosed, in very low tones 'Made a few hush enquiries in this town... rode to the next town... and made enquiries there too...'

'And?'

'Basically, Khan Sahib is a Persian merchant... has been running this business here for nearly 5 years now... his men have been here for just as long ...'

'And...'

'No one knows anything about his family, since he's never spoken about them... most people presume his family must be dead!'

'Oh... I see...' her expressions turned solemn

'I heard that they travel a lot... they visit auction fairs... journey up north, to purchase horses for breeding... apparently, even when we met him at the forest yesterday, he was on his way to the next town, to wrap up an urgent deal, baisa'

'Thank you Bajrang...' nodded Heera, when he seemed to have relayed all the information he had 'Is that all?'

'Actually...' Bajrang paused, realising there was one point he'd missed out 'There is something else...'

'What is it?'

'I learnt... that he has connections to the capital! To the royal family!'


'Connections to the royal family?'

She let go of the ring that she'd been toying with. Everything about the merchant that the senior-guard had unearthed so far, was predictable - but this aspect, was something she hadn't considered. And one angle, she hadn't delved into 'Please explain' she prodded, wondering what sort of connection he was referring to!

'He trades with the Emperor and his sons... his horses adorn the royal stables... in fact, the royal family value his breed of horses very highly!'

'Oh!' her apprehensions steadily settled down. That would be expected - especially, of a high-profile businessman 'Anyway, thank you Bajrang... you may go now... you've been very helpful!'

'As you say, baisa...'



She turned to gauge kaka's reaction to the string of news that'd just come in - but the manager's attention had already shifted to something that was precious to him - the accounts. Preoccupied, the man was tallying the contents of the treasure chest like his life depended on it. Of course, this was rather routine for him. Except; from the blurry outlines, she could make out that his shoulders were slouched more than usual.

'Is something wrong?'

Without trying to sound too perturbed, she asked him thereafter 'It's late... what are you doing now, kakasa?'

'Actually bitiya, most of it has been accounted for...' looking up with a prolonged sigh, he picked up a soft object beside him 'But not the coins in this pouch... it doesn't have much in it... so I was confused by...'

'Oh kakasa' she gently chipped in, trying to get him to brush the issue off as soon as she realised how trivial it was 'Someone must have dropped it... besides, it's time you give your eyes some rest too...'

'No bitiya... all maids have been asked... but, no one has claimed this purse yet!'

She sighed - the man wasn't going to let it go, was he? 'Where was it found, anyway?'


'Khan Sahib found it on the floor in the guest quarters, last night!'


Heera stopped whatever it was that she'd already planned to say 'Really?'

Her glances quickly glided towards the pouch in his hand 'Let me see it...' she held her palm out to receive it, idle curiosity compelling her to take a closer look

'It was found here... but, no one claimed it?' She observed its style. Apart from the fact that it wasn't old, there was nothing extraordinary about it. Yet, a hint of intrigue crept into her frowns, as her fingers ran over its many folds 'Did he say anything while handing it over?'

'Yes he did...'

She looked up 'What did he say?'


'He'd said that it must belong to our 'Sahiba'... now, I might be wrong...' shrugged kaka, as he put his account sheets and records away 'But, I thought I heard a hint of irony in his remark!'

'I see...' delicately opening its strings, Heera peeped in to check the coins 'I just recognised... that the purse is mine...' she announced a few moments later, her eyes not as dull as before

'Oh...' the manager was taken aback 'Is it?'

'Yes... and now I shall take your leave, Kakasa...' she drew the veil atop her head 'Shubh ratri...'

'Shubh ratri bitiya... and please rest well...' he wished her back, unaware that what the heiress had just stumbled upon was just one more reason - to add to the several other reasons that were already keeping her awake at night.




As she lay upon her bed...

After many tiring hours of pondering over the kind of grave challenges that held life and death consequences for her people, pondering over THIS challenge was a welcome break. Besides, nothing fascinated this 16 year old as much as an unsolved puzzle - and the 4 copper coins sitting in her hand were nothing but that!

'4 dams...' she saw the copper coin in her hands

'Must belong to your Sahiba' he'd said with surety, hadn't he? How could he have said that, unless...

She glanced at the pouch that belonged to none, and then at the coins 'Exactly... 4 dams...'

She was certain now - no other explanation made as much sense. The stranger had returned to her, whatever money he'd charged for the water! '

'What a mysterious man' she frowned 'Which also means... he knows, Bindiya is not the Sahiba... quite obvious from his remark!' a short pause ensued 'But then, how did he guess that 'I' am the Sahiba?'

Her mind went back to the few exchanges they'd had 'He heard my voice at the forest... so, did he recognise me at the canal bank too?' it was plausible. After all, if she could recognise his voice, why wouldn't he recognise hers? That too, when his instincts were so sharp!

As she slipped the coins into their purse and tied its strings up, a different 'look' glazed over her eyes - the kind of 'look' that she got whenever she'd solved a complicated riddle.

'How did the ladies miss out on giving me THIS piece of information, though?' she wondered, as she placed the pouch on a bedside table 'Probably because they were too busy, updating me about everything else!'


Heera's glimpses fell upon the diamond ring that adorned her finger - a ring that'd been jiji's favourite, and thus now her own favourite one too. After losing the person with whom she shared all opinions and thoughts, the ring was beginning to fill an emptiness by becoming a passive friend of sorts. And, during every sleepless night over the past week, the lonesome younger sibling had found herself spending a good while staring at that precious possession. Conversing with it. Wanting to unload her many worries upon it.

This night was no different either - except for the fact that she wasn't silently crying herself to a stupor. Instead, Heera was having a mellow conversation with her companion

'I know you are watching out for me, jiji... but isn't this a rather odd way of getting me to stop crying? And let me tell you... it's not working!' she lied, wiping a soft tear from her cheek 'I can't think of any other reason why you'd send me puzzle after puzzle to decode... at first, it was the unexpected connection with the horses... second, it was a voice that intrigued me... strange events happened... I took a reckless path I'd never taken before... straying off from my retinue, nearly drowning in a canal, lying to my friends... but, it somehow led to solving the 'mystery' of the voice... now, wasn't all of that enough? Did you have to send me these coins too?'






Having removed his rings and neatly arranged them upon the dresser, one after another, his tough gazes were drawn towards a particular one. An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen. Of course, emeralds and sapphires were costlier, but they were also flamboyant and common - two traits he didn't care for.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.


Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'

There were dark circles under those eyes and worry lines above them, but the charm in their depths could not be ignored. The garb of a maid did not dull their beauty, the fear of water did not dampen their spirit. In fact, the 'Sahiba's' eyes had many stories to tell - that is, if he had cared to listen. If he had cared to read them.

But, he cared not.

A moment later, he let the ring drop in a drawer, hoping to never see it again. There were enough stories from his own past that'd cost him his sleep for good. The last thing he needed was another 'story' keeping him awake at night. The bitter young man then turned towards the traitorous light of that night lamp.

Coiling his fingers around its blazing wick slowly, he felt the fire burn the skin on his palm for a few moments, before his hand ultimately choked its flame out.






'You could never win a game of riddles against me... so, are you playing it now, from up there? And talking of puzzles... there's one more...' she wiped the mistiness in her eyes, as she tried to concentrate 'Why would a man who trades with the royal family... and one who regularly journeys up north, live so far away from the capital?' she paused for a while 'Why would such an eminent merchant live in a run-down haveli... in a small town like Aidabad, so far away from riches and splendour?'

The 'look' in her eyes changed. It reverted back to the original one - the 'look' they had, when she was faced with an unsolved puzzle that baffled her!



(Glossary of terms included in post below)


See you in a week's time...

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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And that is Heera's reality, that I was referring to..

The girl suffers from partial sight... she doesn't have peripheral vision which restricted her from doing the many things, her sister could! 😊 So, she focussed her attention on reading and learning instead...

So, yes this is a story about how a partially blind, 16 year old heiress' life unfolds in 17th century .. when she is facing death threats from such powerful enemies! 😊

GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India

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A laptop, a dictionary, some imagination and loads of dreams... Trying my hand at writing, once again...

Great to be back on this platform... looking forward to regularly catching-up with my lovely old friends ... looking forward to making new ones too!

Thank you all for being here... and for your support... it means a lot... 🤗

If this made for a worthwhile read, please do leave me a comment/like when you can, as it really does helps the writer in me to keep going!

I have a FB page called Lashy Writes - please 'like' it if you are more regular on FB, as I post the teasers/update links there 😊

Thank you Banjaras & Wanjaras for your support,
Thank you Abhay for clarifying my history-related doubts
Thank you Anjy for helping set up the FB page
And last but not the least, thank you Nams for being there throughout
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Let's have a glimpse of the two elegant and headstrong heiresses, royal than the royal-est, who made their way into our hearts within no time... ❤️

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Manasi's musings

MOST LATE LATEEF COMMENT OF THE SPLENDID THIRD CHAPPY...😛

Manasi... I've never seen you type more than emos... so I was so pleasantly surprised by this 🤗

Firstly big wala SORRY for being this late , I really feel sheepish for this...hope u'll pardon me .

Your punishment is you'll give me you thoughts like this as and when you get them !😈

Its been hours & days since i read but the powerful scenario you created is still spooking me , such is the effect of your sensational writing . I can see that like me many are fazed by the
incidences ocurred , in our intrepid Durgabai's life .

🤗

(my mind has always picturized her with this face , so i have posted this pic hope u'll not mind...😆)

"Those same khol-filled rivetingly raven eyes"

Awww I liked the comparison... Pooja Sharma... very strong character... suits the face... 👏

Though she was no princess but she always acted one . Being heiress , she has always performed her duties so tremendously with absolute no error . Warmth which she always carried in her heart for her people has achieved her a term of approbation by her subjects . all parnagarh wasis were fond of her , they adored her as their Badi Baisa...😳😳😳

With No parents , these two sisters had quite a tough life to live on , but each of them were victorious in their respective roles . together they made parnagarh a better place to live , it got more prosperous under their wings...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Badi baisa... how sweet, Manasi!

'You're proud of us, aren't you maasa... bapusa?

She was talking to her parents , alone she was...

Then she stared towards the aangan , fruit of her beloved sister's hard work , also which is heart & soul of their haveli . its magnificence reminded her of words uttered by their tutor in praise of her lovely sister...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Perfect pic again! 👏

A Heera indeed' Durga smiled to herself as she fondly recalled what their old tutor had said of his star pupil 'Anything shetouches, blossoms... and anyone she treats, heals!'

I so love these lines...

🤗 thank you..

But with sound of clash , these delightful moments came to an end . as the night took painful turn destroying all...😭😭😭

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Courage with which she fought , she gave hell of fight to those slaughterers...😡😡😡

Her determination to send that message anyhow to her sister ,

' struggling not to weep, she recited what she'd thoughtfully rehearsed '

It really touched my heart...❤️❤️❤️


then happened , most excruciating thing i.e. attack to her modesty...this really shooked me . my repugnance to that bloody K . her last moments were filled with so much of pain , that it still gives me pangs of heartache . but sadly these were the harsh truth of passed times , where god knows how many women had same fate as of Durga...🤢🤢🤢

Yes... many women must have suffered such a fate so sad.. but that's reality!

That beast who was a savage , wanted to prove himself yet again that he is the invincible so he did . he wanted to break her since she dared to oppose him & he knew that nobody can stop him from doing so...😡😡😡

I really wish he & his prince for whom he was on to this mission , both pays for this adversity.

Don't worry... everything will unfold slowly! _______________________________________________________________________


Coming to harka , I think her testing time has just started . the only blood relation she was left with her jiji , is also gone . may almighty provide her strength , she is already blessed with such faithful care takers , who are staunch towards her & will always protect her & keep her above all .


I know one thing , that...This girl will make it , no matter what circumstances bring because...

'You may not be a fighter like your jiji... but, you're a survivor choti baisa!'

yes she is a survivor & she will survive this ...😳

Yes she will! 😃

Now enough of my bakwaas , I must stop here . I hope whatever I have written makes sense . am not as good as you , actually not even one fourth of it , but big lattoo of your writing from long long back .

No no please don't say this... you have written these musings so well! Kudos to you dear... and I can see how much the story has touched you... what more can an author want.. thank you for making my day..

-Manasi

your another bhakt...😆😆😆


Hee hee... thank you,

Signing off,

Swami! 😆



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Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Lashy di, loads and loads of hugs for such a marvelous update, and I don't know what else to say! 🤗🤗
Don't worry at all... don't know what to say karke, you've said a lot...
but better not think of culling it next time around...😈 I wan't to know what else you don't know what to say after every chappy, Samjhi? I'm very greedy like that😆

Oh God! 🤣 Actually this comment I wrote in a flow, toh in the starting I really didn't know what to say... and then I said so much... 🤣 🤣

The part of Harka Bai searching for peace was heart-wrenching. 😭 To imagine a 16-year-old girl with a burden so heavy on herself is itself soul-stirring, to top it her only support is gone forever! 😭 She is such a lovely person, it is saddening to see her this depressed and dis-heartened. And if you just contrast this heart-rendering scenario with the cheerful banter of the two lovely sisters in the first chapter, you'll know how powerful time is! You had made me fall in love with these two and their bond then itself, that's the reason it so affects me to see Heera this way and Durga gone! 😭😭😭
>> 👏

Thanks! 😳

Loved the way you have described her conflict against nature and against her own self. Even the gentle breeze that'd displaced her veil and thrown her hair back didn't calm her - it only served to remind how vehement her own breath was. The light spray from the stream drizzling upon her features didn't cool her temper - it only showed her how warm her own tears were.The above lines are another moving set of words, though the whole sequence is powerful enough to move anyone to tears. 😭

🤗I thought that was the best part of the prose... I felt more 'satisfied' as an author reading those lines before any of the others lines...

I agree, that was indeed the most touching part of the sequence!

And the realization of hers that she might never find peace, and her reaction to it, as she decides to return back, this was all again so sad. She is now hopeless to find the most cherished peace now and wants to look into her responsibilities. She has accepted her life the way it is. God!! 😭
Yes she has.. she's been a corpse for a week... it's time she snapped out of it and took some action, especially with what happened to her men... so, she feels like she has too many solutions and no problems. and yet is supposed to show her people the right way

God... as Spiderman's uncle once said... With great power comes great responsibility!

She had already snapped out I guess, she has to! And so true, your last line!


And I'm also kinda enjoying his n-nonsense attitude...😆 That long glare he gave to Ratan Kaka was...😆😆 Poor RK!! 😆
I feel sorry everytime I type his scenes 🤣

I feel so reading those...😆😆

>>> 😆

Before I talk about the encounter between our leads, a big round of applause to both Daya Banna and Mohan Banna! Such loyalty...OMG!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ I totally loved how they were sad about being a burden to their heiress, how they refused to take her share of water even in such misery, and how they are always so protective of her! Not only these two, but all of her companions. Ratan Kaka, who's always so worried for her, Gauri, loved the way she convinced the others to let her have some privacy. In the rising volume and anxiety of her tone, it reflected how much she loved and cared for Heera! ❤️ And last but not the least, I also loved how Bindiya was trying not to malign the heiress's dress. That was cute! 😳😆
I especially loved how you mentioned, Bindiya.. yes they all love Harka immeasurably..

I loved how you showed that tiny bit about her, and so mentioned it! 😳

You know it's how they would have been then.. loyalty before anything else! I remember my mom, aunts, grand moms used to say... my great-grandfather (and ancestors) was a Zameendar in Madurai.. and the kind of respect the servants/villagers etc showed to our family.. was great.. even now.. some of those who are alive, travel through buses and attend any wedding in the family.. they might be 60 but they give and 20 year old cousins the same respect they gave our grandpa.. all just because of Loyalty! And we love them (and have a lot of lessons to learn from them)

Aww...that's so sweet... and lovely to hear such things in today's world! 😳⭐️

>>> Thank you!

If Heera has got all the hardships of life, then she also has certainly got one of the most valued gifts of life - loyal friends! This is one thing the most powerful of men lack, and it's also something that determines the strength of a person at times! She indeed is lucky to have such people around! ⭐️⭐️😃

Now off to phase two, the last part of the chapter. I was kinda expecting that something would happen here, given the atmosphere you had built up! 😆

Shyea... you already expected??

Kind of! I mean the way all were worried about her, I thought maybe! 😆
Hopefully, our stranger came on time! 😳 I'm sure when Heera said, " HE is he stranger!", all of us were having the same reaction!! 😆 We were probably as excited as she was to see him... I mean get hold of him! 😆

Really? 😆 My reactions started from the furrows of his broad back itself.. 🤣

Haan haan mine too... 😆... but the way she said. " HE is the stranger !! " It was like she's saying it on behalf of all of us! 😆😆

Totally loved his question, " Are you crazy or bizzare?" 😆😆 And yes, I also loved their tiny drooling over each other session...😳😳😆 I was hoping it would not have that ruthless face she's imagining, and thank God he didn't...😆 And more adorable was his reaction towards her first glance... 'Hazel'..Wow!
Crazy or bizarre nahin re, blind or bizzare! 😆 Ahem... whose face do you think he has 😉 how could you call him ruthless..maybe he's ruthless.. ruthlessly handsome!

Oops sorry! 😛😆 I'm imagining my Jalal...

Arrey I meant she was fearing na that he might have some cruel-looking face... Of course I didn't find him ruthless di! 😆😆

>>>> Phew

Now I wish this girl gets most of - if not all - the peace she has lost and she so deserves, due to this stranger! 😳😳 Can't wait to know what happens next, and how this meeting with each other is gonna change their lives... particularly waiting to know what effect his entry would have on Harka's life! 😳

So, you think she'll get her peace because of him? 😉 life change.. tho no doubt! Lol!

I want so... baaki toh you know better! 😆

And yes, also the question is who damaged the bridge? 😲

Hmmm 🤔 whoever did.. they need a pat on the back.. or these two would have never met!

Ye bhi hai! 😆 But I wanna know who is that honorable person! 😆😆

>>> Not someone too important though! 🤔

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Buddhu me took a while to realise how you've lifted his description from the prologue and tried matching it with the update here.. thanks so much.. you have done a commendable analysis, my dear.. it never even struck me..

OMG! What an amazing update di. So the stranger is here in full-blown manner. And the other half of the prologue comes to life!!

Loved your description

Shrewd and unforgiving he is .. when he charges for water, knowing well how urgently the other party needed it!

😆

He is a force to be reckoned with... He dominates and intimidates without even putting an iota of effort in it! Not only does he own the bodily supremacy.. his very presence shoots out the daunting vibes to the surroundings!😎

Yes it does... ☺️

Formidable he is.. his very persona oozing out the chilling and intimidating aura he possessed...and setting boundaries, which no one can dare to cross!😲 Concern and kindness appear alien feelings to him (for now!) He remains as indifferent as ever - whether a group of people in an unknown place might need/could do with a little help or whether a drowning woman is struggling for her life (for now!)

What made you say he sets boundaries that no one can cross? 😉

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger changes it all - which seems to have begun!😛The man who bothers and cares not about anything, discerns the freshness in a voice and notices the grace of the same woman!

OOOh yes he does.. though might I add, he is a keen observer.. just like the lady of the story!

The man who fancies nothing, not even women, was pulled to look into the exquisite tint of hazel!😉

Now THAT was a moment, there...

Well well! What a fascinating ride di! Loving the thrill of it.. I am loving the mysterious adventure we are being led onto by you. In every update, I am like, what's next.. omg what next? Will Heera be fine... OMG yes she's safe. Does the stranger keep on travelling or does he have a settled place as well? Why is the stranger so indifferent to everything? Will Heera be able to make way into his heart without even knowing and in turn getting healed herself? (I know I am talking too much here 😆) Oh god what next.

Loved your musings here ^^^😆😳 and most of your questions will find their answers in upcoming chapters 🤗

My heart went out to Heera. For some reason, I got so affected when Heera was all alone by herself, fighting all her inner demons, her unbearable pain.. and yet in front of others, managing a brave face, caring and healing others. Not everyone can do that! Love her and respect her so much. ❤️

Glad you're all proud of her.. best part is all the readers don't even know another reality of her yet!

Thank you so much di. As usual loved the update. My comment may not be so sensible 😆but hey.. that was spontaneous. And I know you love hearing the natural responses! Love ya.. Keep it coming. 🤗

It was the most sensible comment.. Ugh stop saying that 😡

Love you loadssessesss (remember this?)😆

I'll reserve page 1 for you in next chapter so you can post the pics there.. ok?

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Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

A grim and speedy third chapter followed by a dreamy light fourth. 😃

What a sad end to Durga! 😕
Yes... 😭
On a side note, we always see stories of marvellous horse-riding warrior women from history... and we assume they are un-destroyable.. but the truth is they are also humans.. so for a change, I wanted my heroie to be the underdog (a poor choice of word here, since Heera is in no way, inferior) and the one who appears to have the characteristics of the heroine as the sister...
... unaware of what a wonderful and promising young life he'd wasted thus!

How true!😭 But not so uncommon those days. 😡 These neither.😡😡
EXACTLY.. never uncommon.. EVER!

Life of royalty was not at all about rainbows and unicorns. They had the damocle's sword on their heads all the time. Power and public support were their only lifelines.
YES IT WAS!!!
Was reminded of Rhett Butler with his demand of 4 dams.😳 😆
Ok you've lost me here.. I saw GWTW ages ago and don't remember this..
The river side drown and save was so lovey-dovey and soothing esp after the preceeding serious heartaches.😳

Awww thank you 😳
Set against skin that was fairer than fair, the bronzed locks that fell above his shoulders put even the richest shades of brown to shame.

Undoubtedly a lovely pic, Sandy... but remember locks have to be wet too 😆 So I bring this one up, instead...

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️


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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

awesome chappy di

hazel eyes 😉
kind heera
update soon di
thanks for pm

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Wow awesome update di...
At first d stranger hw was a proper businessman to see his profit In all d circumstances. ...
Yeah😆
Heera acted like a strong nd lovely princess she thought about her people needs first then her need that was so good of her...
Nd everyone r equally worried for her ...
😳 yes!

Nd in d next part at d canal bank... heera is like a lost girl nd yes she is a lost girl for herself she has lost her parents in very young age nw has lost her support her only family her only strength her everything she desperately need her sister nw...but she should be strong for her ppl ...
True 😭
Ooh god she was going with d flow of water nd it was hard for her to come out so but was safe with a help of a stranger ...
Waiting for next part di...
Update soon...
Nd thanks for pm...
🤗


Thank you so much Raksha 😳

Originally posted by: jayaks02

i was waiting for first meeting. And oh boy !! it turned out to be so so good - very nice first meeting.

Thanks Srividhya 😳
Thank you😳

Originally posted by: Susmita96

lashy di!!!!!🤗i didnt know you are so fast in giving updates!!! yet to read it😳


I'm trying for Sundays dear.. weekly update.. 🤗

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