NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Saraswati Aunty - Ah! Solitary reaper .. had it back in school ... loved reading your version of it on shra di's work 👏 @Zhanna - Again a beautiful review 😳 with as usual fitting quotes 🤗 @Kal di - duplicate version 🤣 Kidding ... thanks for posting the pictures .. and of course shra di for exact perfecto pics !! 👏
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Hey Shrads..how are you dear?
So the most awaited character of the story, the STRANGER has made his entry with a bang. You have surprised me the way you have portrayed his character. I never thought he would be like a shrewd businessman who can never miss the opportunity to use any situation in his favor... but maybe thats what his outer personality :).. Again, he showed that he doesnt care for anyone when he saved Heera and still behaved like he doesnt have time for doing the usesless work like that... but still, the personality like him also couldnt helped but notice "hazel" eyes of Heera... it was like he was nearly mesmerized by her eyes :) .. Its going to be a tough task for him to escape from those eyes in the future.. time will tell !!!. He might be came out as an arrogant brat but soon his attitude will change and that too for good..
What to say about Heera's dispair. She tried her best to behave normal in front of everyone but afterall its not long she lost her beloved sis. Poor girl..tried to get some time alone for herself and landed in a big trouble.. but thats because god wanted her to meet her knight in shining armour properly this time..!! She also noticed those handsome features of her "stranger".. and why not? Its just a begining... Picture to abhi baki hai !!!!...hehe...
Loved it Shrads... Amazing..waiting for the next update... hugs**
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Since my childhood I admired and loved horses. Even a simple pat, give bread and salt, has been happiness for me. I'm interested in the horse, which Durga chosen at auction, but all events in 2nd and 3rd chapters, have diverted attention. But the horse shied away from the shots again, got ("hooked") my attention.
Later I wanted to find a picture that would be passed on feeling the heat, dust, sun, horse racing. And I stumbled upon an article about the Marwari breed horses. On such horse sits Rajat Tokas. This is an ancient breed of horse from Rajasthan. I really liked her unusual ears. We have other breeds. Although the Arabian's horse also have a slightly bent ears. But the Marwari horse - is a breed of intellectual.

"... it is believed that Marwari never abandon a wounded horseman on the battlefield, and remain true to guard, fending off the enemies and if the rider gets lost in the desert -. Marwari horse, owing to an innate instinct to find way to home ..."

Lasha! We read the story, but I would be very interesting if, at the end of the thesis, was not only a glossary, but and bibliography. 😊 To write such as well, you have to know so much! My admiration and respect !!! 👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

^ Sojji Begum.. You know I was awake till 1:50 just for this !!!! Only after reading it did I sleep aaraam se !!! Thankooo for finally padhaaring 😡 🤗 What words yaar !!! How perfectly you have highlighted the key areas of various chapters 👏 Loved reading something from you after so long !! Love ya Sojji. . (and make one correction soda. .. Jalal is mine . so yeah.. edit that part 😡 😆)


Nathuuu🤗 OMG...till 1:30 for this!!! You are a darling! ❤️ (IF needs to come up with a kissy emo asap) And no corrections...Jalal remains mine..past present future all covered..😡let him go atleast for his sake, he loves me too you know 😳😆
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Thank you dear!May I know your name please?

Saraswathi Aunty.


Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

@ Saraswati Aunty - Ah! Solitary reaper .. had it back in school ... loved reading your version of it on shra di's work 👏 @Zhanna - Again a beautiful review 😳 with as usual fitting quotes 🤗 @Kal di - duplicate version 🤣 Kidding ... thanks for posting the pictures .. and of course shra di for exact perfecto pics !! 👏

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OMG! What an amazing update di. So the stranger is here in full-blown manner. And the other half of the prologue comes to life!!

Shrewd and unforgiving he is .. when he charges for water, knowing well how urgently the other party needed it!

He is a force to be reckoned with... He dominates and intimidates without even putting an iota of effort in it! Not only does he own the bodily supremacy.. his very presence shoots out the daunting vibes to the surroundings!😎

Formidable he is.. his very persona oozing out the chilling and intimidating aura he possessed...and setting boundaries, which no one can dare to cross!😲 Concern and kindness appear alien feelings to him (for now!) He remains as indifferent as ever - whether a group of people in an unknown place might need/could do with a little help or whether a drowning woman is struggling for her life (for now!)

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger changes it all - which seems to have begun!😛 The man who bothers and cares not about anything, discerns the freshness in a voice and notices the grace of the same woman!

The man who fancies nothing, not even women, was pulled to look into the exquisite tint of hazel!😉

Well well! What a fascinating ride di! Loving the thrill of it.. I am loving the mysterious adventure we are being led onto by you. In every update, I am like, what's next.. omg what next? Will Heera be fine... OMG yes she's safe. Does the stranger keep on travelling or does he have a settled place as well? Why is the stranger so indifferent to everything? Will Heera be able to make way into his heart without even knowing and in turn getting healed herself? (I know I am talking too much here 😆) Oh god what next.

My heart went out to Heera. For some reason, I got so affected when Heera was all alone by herself, fighting all her inner demons, her unbearable pain.. and yet in front of others, managing a brave face, caring and healing others. Not everyone can do that! Love her and respect her so much. ❤️

Thank you so much di. As usual loved the update. My comment may not be so sensible 😆 but hey.. that was spontaneous. And I know you love hearing the natural responses! Love ya.. Keep it coming. 🤗


This comment is among my super favourites Nathu- from all the comments I've read till date!!!!!! You connected every bit of the prologue to
the stranger so so so beautifully.. I love you for this, I read the whole thing twice! I think what I loved about all your comments was how different they were from how we just normally write..
Glad to be back and to be getting to read di's updates and your comments!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lashy, wonderful chapter..

sorry for commenting late, but I had to handle some emergency in the family, so couldn't post earlier...

anyway...this stranger is really something different abt him...I just can't point out the exact thing, coz there r many things abt him that attract our attention towards him...why do I feel he is related to Shehzada??😕

in the starting chappy, I thought that the cruel Shehzada might be the stranger, but after reading chap 4, feel something different abt him...he seems to be lot more different than he shows to the world...

or is he some spy, set out to protect Heera??? or may be someone trusted and sent by the Shehenshah himself, after knowing abt Durga's death, and the threat that animal left for Heera?? and why I thought coz when he asked the price for the water, and was firm abt it ... at first it feels like he is taking advantage but later it feels like he is on mission to find Heera...and when she pays it, the he recognizes her in a second though she is in disguise...that keenness and intelligence isn't common...it has to be somebody who is shrewd, intelligent , sharp , sensitive and insightful...

so is this stranger related to Shehenshah?? may be another son of the Shehenshah staying away, say in Kabul or beyond, but still the one who knows the kingdom as good as he knows his own home...it feels like he knows everything here like he knows himself...and then he is even a very good decision-maker also...and this Aidabad house/palace is owned by he himself...and that's why he sent the princess there , as that would be easy to protect her there...else what he was doing there late night??? why he came back to the same place where he had sent princess's convoy??? or is it that he knows that the Shehzada and his animal commander won't look at this worn out place , to find Heera and the farmaan...and that means he too will be aware abt the farmaan...

and then he getting angry on her, coz he found her alone there, and then feared that this adventure of her can be a big obstacle for his mission...but again what's his mission?? is it just to save the princess?? or is princess Heera , the one who will be the most imp person to fulfill some other very big dream of his??? who is he and what's his true mission???is this stranger , the rightful heir to Agra throne??


see so many questions abt the stranger, and so I said there is something abt him that attracts our attention but still thanks to u, the confusion increases abt him everytime we read it again to understand...😉

and then Heera...no wonder, she wants to be alone to get back her strength...after everything happened in her life, still the young princess is very well aware that the responsibility on her shoulders is very very big...and that's why she just trying to find some space for herself where she can regroup herself to become the leader of her ppl...this shows that though this young princess in very innocent, inexperienced and naive (she thinks that nobody can recognize her if she is disguise , thus underestimating her enemies), still she posses a very strong mind that can think of some or other ways to save her ppl and take care of them...her strength is something that helps her to try and find the ways to support her ppl...and same time her fearlessness while talking to the stranger and the naughtiness of a 16 yr old in that adverse situation , is just enough to make ur readers fall for this girl...just love everything abt her...




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Originally posted by: baubles


Nathuuu🤗 OMG...till 1:30 for this!!! You are a darling! ❤️ (IF needs to come up with a kissy emo asap) And no corrections...Jalal remains mine..past present future all covered..😡let him go atleast for his sake, he loves me too you know 😳😆


I know right.. Kissing emo 😆 Oye.. forget him.. he's mine bass!! 😡 😡 Ask di.. she knows he's only and only mine ☺️

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