NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

😉😛😆Enjoy the parties dii ... Kuch khaana peena mere liye b pack krwa lana 🤣

Dii...mere liye bhi... 😳 😛 😆

Chellam what can I say? My senses were numbed for sometimes before continue reading after Durga's battle... Though I already knew this is her end... Though it's just only 2 chapters I traveled with her... Still it's giving me unbearable pain.😭 Though Durga lost the battle you won it as a writer by giving us the feel and turmoil of this bravest soul. Hats off to you!!👏

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Dii...mere liye bhi... 😳 😛 😆

I can't not add, running from the kitchen to the computer.
I have a feeling of profound disgust and utter contempt for Shehzade at whom Khalil serves. If only he the was not blindfolded, as the goddess of justice.
I will read yet once 1st chapter ,but, seems, Shehzade was sure that Khalil would get by any means Farman for him.
He could just kill the princess. Any death would be better.
We have a saying: "What is pop - is the parish" (like priest, like people). And, more hard: "The fish stinks from the head". Bad ruler - vile servants.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam what can I say? My senses were numbed for sometimes before continue reading after Durga's battle... Though I already knew this is her end... Though it's just only 2 chapters I traveled with her... Still it's giving me unbearable pain.😭 Though Durga lost the battle you won it as a writer by giving us the feel and turmoil of this bravest soul. Hats off to you!!👏

Chellam seriously you never keep up to your words... You said it's fiction but it's not. The fiction I know is doesn't compromise of all logic but here you're giving us the cruel reality of that era and your so reality writing with all logic.😡

I wished that stable boys would make it as in all fiction... but they didn't because the warriors who sneak stealthy and fought silently would definitely had planned the plot very well so capable of having eye everywhere and that's so real.

I wished Durga would successfully jumped off as in all fiction... But she couldn't because the amount of time she had was very less, not planned and before making any decision she has to think twice. That's why she wanted to pass the message to Heera as well and that's real scenario.

I wished Durga would fiercely fight and kill all warriors as in all fiction... But she couldn't because she's already tired by prolong travel and works. Still she fought till the end. That's so real.

I wished They would just kill Durga and took the Faarman away as in all fiction. But what happened is so crucial reality of that era where women fighting for their dignity when they in loosing end. and she's left with no weapon to kill herself too... 😭😭

Why Chellam why? Please keep up your words to write fiction not the real story with all the logic...😡 Amidst of all this crucial end of Durga still I want to know.. what happened to her 'Marwari Racer'. Is it still in the story? The moment she felt proud of her decision is deeply pinched my heart. How could she? Definitely she's one of wonder you have created Chellam. I love her more than before. The moment i read this line... "unaware of what a wonderful and promising young life he'd wasted thus!" I truly felt it and you again won!👏👏

And coming to Heera... As it says "Time doesn't heal everything.. It just teaches us how to live with the pain" It's true on her. But where you stands is... you gave her another shock to recover herself faster than ever and it did work on her very well as she so protective and caring over her people. 👏👏

And here we go... what a timely heroic entry of our hero... Chellam The way you introduce him is just amazing... just dark night, dangerous forest and all alone... he didn't fight... he didn't come with group of warriors... he didn't give away anything... thieves' back off... and Heera's observation... still you manage to give us the grand entry and the entire description of him. Loved it. 👏👏

Altogether it's emotional dynamite chapter. Love you Chellam!!❤️

Kal di...mind-blowing review! 👏 ⭐️


You have practically put MY feelings into words. You have said all that I have wanted to say about this chapter. And I too wished for all that you did. Alas! 😭 K would never realize how marvelous a life he has wasted! 😭 😡 😡

It was terrific! Durga!!😭

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Kal di...mind-blowing review! 👏 ⭐️
You have practically put MY feelings into words. You have said all that I have wanted to say about this chapter. AndI too wished for all that you did. Alas! 😭 K would never realize how marvelous a life he has wasted! 😭 😡 😡

Originally posted by: Lashy

Before leaving the chamber, he cast a final glimpse at her still form, unaware of what a wonderful and promising young life he'd wasted thus!

Lashy Di!
For me, this is also one of the key phrases.
This epitaph to all those who died in all wars, centuries crimes.
Our great poet Alexander Pushkin wrote a cycle of plays "Little Tragedies".
One about Mozart and Salieri.
Mozart asks Salieri:
"Is it true that Beaumarchais someone poisoned?"
and concludes:
"He's a genius,
Like you and me. A genius and evil -
two things are incompatible. Is it not true? "

Evil is mediocre,ungifted, ugly ... How much did wonderful these two sisters for his short life, and how many people they have helped.

awesome wonderful chappy continue soon😊😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Unres on page 14!!

>>>> why men always shows their power on this thing only??

Such a daring and stout-hearted woman she was and what he did with her?

Does this proves that he was powerful than her? No he's a coward, bloody dastard.

He could kill her but No, that rapist first took away her modesty.

My heart cried at this, Not only for Durga but for myself, for being a girl who can't go outside at night,alone just because of such monsters and for every that girl, with whom such monsters have done such a crime.Cry

Sometimes it happens, we(Girls) feel very uneasy if someone unintentionally touched us, what about those girls, with whom such things have happened?CryCry

Whenever We switched to a news channel, then only these news we heard that a gang of some boys raped this girl, or this woman. Now is a time, when such monsters are not leaving the old women too. They don't even think once, that they are spoiling someone's life.

I usually never feel sad reading any story as I know it's just a story, only few are the stories with which I can connect myself. After reading this, My mind was so lost in this thing only.OuchOuchOuch

Your analysis is wonderful and this is close to all women ... in all time, all countries and all social strata. It was so painful to read, that I understood not directly why he killed her.
Durga was personality so strong, beautiful and brave ... She died as other victims, we do not know her thoughts.