NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Teaser for Chapter 3

Because whatever Mohan banna had said to assure them, they knew that a man travelling in a dangerous forest at nightfall, all by himself, had to be either insane or the most feared man in these regions. And somehow, most had guessed, it had to be the latter.

Time ticked by.

Seated within her palanquin, she could discern the distinct beat of hooves amidst the many notes of bated breath and chirping crickets surrounding her.

A few more moments elapsed.

The echoes grew louder. And louder.

Then, her breath paused.

She heard their whispers - the profile of the solitary traveller had finally come into view. The loud gallop decelerated into a gentle trot till it slowed to a halt beside her palanquin.

Through the curtains, she couldn't see much - other than the very blurry outline of a horse and the feet of its rider. However, what she did manage to guess - from a vague sighting of his riding shoe - was its style. This traveller was a Mughal. And an avid rider too.

'Good evening, Sahib...' Ratan kaka spoke up to cease the odd spell, though his nervousness did make his words sound more Marwari than Urdu 'Do you know these areas well?'

After what seemed like a very long interval, she heard him speak

'Yes...'

His reply was curt and his tone rang deeper than any voice she'd heard. In fact, she thought, if his personality was as dominant as his voice was, there was little doubt that this stranger was the only reason, everyone had fled!

Chapter 3 below


CHAPTER 3


6 days ago...

Having offered Ma Jagdamba her prayers, Durga strolled out of the holy shrine.

Retracing her steps through opulent hallways and past stately rooms - now pitch black with most of their lamps doused, and absolutely quiet with everyone asleep - she briefly stopped beneath a large set of twin paintings.

Her eyes studied the impressive replicas of the two sisters that proudly hung from one of the mansion's main walls - paintings created by a gifted artist as a token of gratitude, when Heera had tirelessly strived day-and-night to revive his sick son from near death, a year ago.

'You're proud of us, aren't you maasa... bapusa?' she asked her parents, like she did every night - before she let her gazes trail from the terrace towards her favourite scenery on the floor below -

The magnificent inner courtyard. The 'aangan', the heart and soul of the Parnagarh Haveli.

Courtyards in most rich homes would boast of fountains, Tulsi planters and fancy statues, but this mansion had a quirky herb garden instead. A garden dotted with countless rows of rare shrubs and herbs. A herbarium that had taken her skilled sister infinite hours of research, endless guidance from Vaid kakasa and many seasons of hard work. An aangan that now possessed some of the most unique and potent medicinal herbs in the country.

Little surprise then that all that effort had resulted in granting numerous people the gift of good health. So much so that sick visitors from other towns had started coming over to the village, in search of treatment and well-being.

'A Heera indeed' Durga smiled to herself as she fondly recalled what their old tutor had said of his star pupil 'Anything she touches, blossoms... and anyone she treats, heals!'


CLASHHH!

It was the jarring echo of metal from the kitchen downstairs - not an unusual sound in this household!

'Nayan...' she called for the guard who generally oversaw the courtyard 'Ask Maharaj kakasa to go rest... he's tired...'

'Yes baisa... worry not... I'll look into it!' he assured, running off to do as bid

Durga smiled at the boy's enthusiasm. A forty eight hour journey from the horse-fair followed by an exhaustive day's work, meant her limbs were groaning about the lack of rest and her mind throbbing from the day's stresses. Yet, if she managed to smile at the end of it - it was because she was surrounded by the company of people who loved her thus.



Once at her room, the heiress sailed across the marble floors till she reached the jali window frames at the other end.

Perching her elbows against its sill, she drank the dusky sights in. Sights of endless greenery - starting from the mansion's rear gardens, to the hillock beyond, and the fertile valleys down below, where many idyllic villages flourished.

Apart from a horrible plague outbreak twelve years ago - a tragedy that'd claimed the lives of half the village, including those of their mother and stepmother - the valleys had always been a haven of peace. That is, until now.

'Mining the valleys would destroy everything we've worked hard for... the fields, the plantations, the water, the homes, the hospital, the peace... EVERYTHING! I'll never let that happen so long as I live!'



'WOOF WOOF'

Her reverie once again dragged to reality by the loud barks of her restless dogs, Durga hurled a mock-glare at the pack hovering underneath her first floor window 'You're well fed, aren't you? Go rest you noisy little pets... I've told you... your playmate will be back in two days... I'm too tired to run around now!'

When her commands had no effect even a few moments thereon, the young lady decided to bribe them out of their obsession by picking up a handful of peanuts from a bowl on a side table 'Go get them...' she said aloud, throwing a few nuts into the gardens beneath 'You love them, don't you?'

On the contrary, the act only seemed to aggravate them more. If anything, their barks were spiralling into eerie howls and frothy growls. Growing flustered by the unpleasant development, she summoned the guards stationed below 'Bhola... Paramvir... go check if a wild animal has strayed in... if not, please tie up the dogs... they are causing a ruckus!'

She awaited an affirmative reply.

None came.

'Bhola... Paramvir...' she scanned the dim expanses of the rear gardens and later on, the meadows. She couldn't spot anything or anyone. Not even a shadow 'They were here until a while ago... where have they disappeared?'

She called a few more names.

But none of the guards supposed to be present, responded.

'BHOLAAA...' she yelled, but stopped midway. The dogs had turned shockingly feral - as though they'd been possessed by a spirit of some sort - and charged off in a direction towards the side of the estate, beyond her field of vision. She knew not what the animals were running after, but she knew something wasn't right.

Wasting not an instant more, she carefully withdrew from the window.

With every inch of her nape prickling from rising panic, she followed the first rule of defence by keeping her back fixed to the wall. Observing her surroundings like a hawk, she surveyed the entranceways dotted around the chamber, while her hands unburdened her feet and wrists of their jewellery.

Eventually, Durga crept towards a sword holder and drew the sleek weapon away from its sheath before sneaking out of the doorway.


On the constant lookout for any signs of movements, she proceeded through the empty hallways that led towards the landing. Standing at the top of a long flight of curved stairs, the lone lady tried to make sense of the grey sights below

'Is the Haveli dimmer than usual or have all lamps been doused deliberately?'

'Jan...' she tried summoning the maids from their quarters, but realised her tongue had become drier than the sands of the Thar 'Ugh!' Swallowing a lump, she began yelling for all the guards and maids, one after another - hoping to grab the attention of any of the residents. But the only answer she got was a ghostly silence.

'Settle down' she ordered the heart that was now pummelling against her ribs and leaned over the banisters. It was then that she noticed something at the bottom - near the very last stair. Yanking a lamp out of its holder, she held the flame closeby for a clearer view - intensely praying that what she'd seen was not what she feared it was.

But, it was!


Trails of blood flowed from the bottom stair, down the courtyard and beyond that too

Durga took a horrified step back 'Nayan!'

Even if her spirit was fiercely trying to bolster her up, her fingers had given way to tremors, dropping the lamp on a table nearby. It took a short spell for anything sensible to form in her head, what with the utter chaos of mortifying thoughts rendering her temporarily paralysed.

'How was the security breached so quickly? How did it happen so stealthily? All the men... h... could they all be killed? N... no...please... the women too? Even Maharaj kakasa? Ma Jagdamba... please no...' the despair was suffocating, the grief debilitating 'How did I hear nothing?' Then, it struck her - the clanging from the kitchens, the deafening barks - they were all signs. But signs that she'd overlooked 'Oh God...' she gripped her chest when she recognised that even the barking had stopped 'They didn't even spare the dogs!'

Waves of inexplicable rage began hammering away at the overwhelming terror that'd engulfed her petite being for so long. Fighting back the tears that had sprung up instinctively, Durga forced herself to recover from her stupor. She could not afford to weigh her spirit down by conjuring up images of her dead dogs and her dead people. She could not spare more than a short prayer for those noble souls who'd possibly sacrificed themselves for her under that very roof. She had to make a bold decision - a selfish move - of prioritizing her own safety first, since hundreds of other lives depended on it.

Promptly kicking her body into action, Durga made a mental note of all the personal weapons she owned, while dashing towards her bed chamber to plan an escape 'If none of my guards have been spared' she surmised numbly 'It means... there are many of them lurking downstairs... possibly surrounding the building too... how do I call for help? Whom do I call?' she tapped her cold wet cheeks hard, hoping to get the blood flowing and the mind thinking - a ploy that actually worked, because the very next moment, her listless gazes lit up in hope 'The stable boys! Maybe they have been spared!'

WHOOSH!

Suddenly, she saw something from the corner of her eye. Someone behind her had moved. A curtain not far behind had shifted, giving way to an emerging shadowy figure. Since it was too late to charge into her chamber and lock herself in, she spun around, ready to face the unknown - but not before blowing out the lamp beside her. After all, she would be able to handle the darkness in her own house better than any intruder could.

Clutching the handle of her sword, she waited for the ogre to attack - her own furious breath and beats alternating with the footsteps of his shoes

'Who are you?' Durga grit her teeth, as he cornered her against the wall

'Oh my... you are more beautiful than the stories describe...' the ugly man bored into her, while keeping an eye on the sword she was holding so tightly 'I'm certain my Sahib would like you for himself...'

'I'm sure he would...' she spewed 'But, WHO is your Sahib?'

'Don't be so impatient... he'll come up to meet you soon...' the man caressed her face with the tip of his blade 'Heard of the 'Khalil'? I'm fortunate to be one of his men...'

Khalil? The phantom? A murderer who masqueraded as a soldier? A man so infamous for being ruthless that even the Shehzade was intimidated by him? Everyone had heard about the 'Khalil' - but no one who'd seen him had lived to tell the tale!

Her heart sank a few notches lower

'Thank you for the information...' she said, and in a quick-thinking spurt, sliced his neck with the knife she'd been hiding in her cummerbund

'Saaahhhiii' the man fell - but, even before he'd completed his last word, the lady had sprinted into her bedroom and bolted both doorways from the inside.


Once at her window, she gauged how deep the plunge was - the marble steps underneath would undoubtedly break her ankle and render her immobile. She needed a harness to soften her fall. With no time to lose, she seized a warhorn from a dresser and a few veils from a trunk, before hastening back.


'BOOoM'

The loud alarm resonating from the top window of the mansion found its intended mark. The boys at the stable were finally alerted to the danger looming over their heiress' life.

By this point, the doorways to her chamber were rattling like a storm had hit them, the fiends outside pouncing upon it with all their might. However, she continued working her ashen fingers by tying the veils together into a long rope, wiping beads of sweat as she did so 'The Farmaan' she remembered briefly - but breathed a sigh of relief later, the lone sigh of relief she'd breathed in the last half hour 'It will be safe...'

And then, just as it seemed the door was going to give way, two stable boys came running to her window.

'Baisa... what's happened?'

'Narang... we are under attack... take a horse, gallop to the village and get help!'

'Harish...' she turned to the other one 'Ride towards Jagdamba temple... and give this message to Heera...' struggling not to weep, she recited what she'd thoughtfully rehearsed - a favourite childhood poem of theirs -

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!

And in the very next breath, 'RUUUNNN' she screamed, so both boys would snap into action

As she tightened the last knot, her eyes followed the first stable boy, who'd successfully leapt to the stables and untied a horse 'Thank you, ma' she prayed.

However, no sooner than he began riding away, a dagger came flying in his direction - and hit its target.

The stable boy slumped on his horse, dead

'No...' she hyperventilated, with a fresh surge of tears 'Show me some respite Bhavani Ma... for all the prayers I've offered you...'

Her hands frantically continued fastening the makeshift rope to a ledge, while her wet glances traced the actions of the second stable boy, terrified for his fate. He'd managed to grab a second horse and jump atop it, but as feared, two daggers were hurled at him straightaway. However, something else happened within a blink - something she hadn't foreseen. The horse had whinnied and violently jerked aside - like it'd sensed the weapons coming its way - thus saving its rider's life!

The horse was the 'Marwari' racer she'd won at the auction, two days ago 'Wise decision' a haunting smile escaped amidst her tears.

On that hopeful note, she perched upon the window will, ready to make a probable escape - when the doors to her chamber flew open. The desperate young lady took her chances and jumped anyhow, but it was a futile effort. Her rope was immediately pulled back, hauling her into the chamber once again, to face ten armed men. Men after her life. Men so tall and formidable - that she stopped wondering how so many of her guards had perished without much of a fight.

Yet, Durga bai decided that she wouldn't cower in fright.


What followed thenceforth was the greatest display of bravado, from a woman, that the intruders had ever seen. Cautiously backing herself against a narrow corner, so only one man would be able to attack her at a time, she faced the advancing murderers with the might of her will and the agility of her hand. It was thus that she brought an early death upon three men and maimed two more, showing the brutes how far they'd undermined her courage.

However; as was the course of most battles, Durga sustained many an injury herself. Her limbs couldn't match the immortality of her spirit, her strength steadily diminished with every blinking moment.

Yet, Durga bai didn't cower in fright.

Not even when the leader of the pack, the beastly 'Khalil', paced onward and forced her to look him in the eye. Not when his size dwarfed her profile. Or his roars deafened her ears. Not even when she knew her end was near.

Durga bai fought to the very end - till a time came when she lost all her weapons and vigour, fighting him. Till she was left with no choice and no defences thereafter

'Hand me the Farmaan...' he growled

'I will NOT give you the Farmaan, even if you take my life!' the breathless warrior challenged him as she lay bleeding on the floor, the faces of her loved ones flashing before her eyes

'What if I take your dignity and modesty instead?'

And from the amount of venom in his scowl, she knew those were not empty threats. So, after many bouts of tortuous self-debate, she made the choice most women would make - she decided to give up the Farmaan.

But that did not seem to satisfy her enemy. He wanted more!

And the very thought of what he wanted - the very notion of what horrors lay ahead, debilitated her morale. Now too weak and too wounded to protect herself, she wished she had a blade to end her life just then. But since she didn't, Durga bai, the once proud heiress, was forced to relinquish her ego and beg. She begged and pleaded - not for her life, but for her modesty to be spared.

All in vain. His scowl didn't thaw one bit. He had a reputation for being a 'savage' and he apparently wanted to live up to it -

For, he took away the Farmaan,

Then, took away her modesty,

And finally, took away her life too.

Before leaving the chamber, he cast a final glimpse at her still form, unaware of what a wonderful and promising young life he'd wasted thus!


By the time the villagers had arrived with their sticks and sickles, the only person found alive, was the head cook, Maharaj kaka, whose life was spared so he could give the younger sibling a message -

'This is what's meant to happen to BOTH daughters of Jagat Prasad Singh, for daring to stand against the prince!'

A spine-chilling message indeed, which'd forced a bereaved Harka out of her own home to undertake a long and perilous journey thenceforth - the outcome of which, no one knew!



Present day...

In the wilderness...

'Argggh!' he screamed hoarse 'Th... this...'

'Shhh Daya!' Mohan grit his teeth, confronting his subordinate's grimaces with a discreet glare 'We don't want to cause the ladies panic... keep your voice hush!'

As ordered, the man stifled his grunts while reaching across to pull out the offending weapon embedded into the back of his leg 'This hurts' he yelled internally, as he extracted a crude thorny blow-dart, of some sort 'I have been hit!'

'So have I...' Mohan retorted like a true man-in-charge, not sparing his sipahi as much as a blink 'But, we can't afford to let our enemy know that ... or we'll be giving ourselves away...' he reverted to the rest of his regiment, his voice still an agitated whisper 'Now be attentive... I'll tell you when to take aim...'

So they waited for their chief-guard to give the signal, crouching like panthers with their fingers burrowed into the soil beneath - soil cluttered with broken branches, and jagged rocks - an inconvenience they bore with little complain. In a forest so remote, they had no shelter except the natural cover provided by a few low lying branches. In a night so black, their visions had nothing to be guided by, except the sparse light of a crescent moon. Therefore, the best survival strategy against a set of attackers, who seemed to have sprung up from nowhere, was 'stealth'. Especially since their enemies seemed to know the territory better.


Just then, a few dry twigs behind them snapped - the soft sound echoing loudly through the dead air

'Here is the water you asked for, banna...' having nearly crawled up to where the men were stationed, Gauri had to catch up on her breath before she could hand over the water bag

'Thank you... now, stay low... keep the ladies away... tell them nothing...' Mohan replied in a few coded words

'Bandits?' she asked quietly

'No...' he glanced at the simple darts that'd struck them 'Tribes... or petty thieves...'

'Oh...' putting on a brave face, Gauri prepared to do as told - but as she was about to leave, something caught her attention 'How badly are you hurt, banna? Should I wake Heera and let her know?'

'No... it's merely a nasty thorn prick... the uneasiness will pass!' he gestured, echoing the thoughts of Daya banna and the remaining sipahis. After all, they were true Rajput soldiers - perfectly capable of withstanding pain for the sake of their baisa's well-being 'Don't wake her... these past few hours have been the only time baisa has rested in days...'




'But, how can I rest, when I'm guilty of disregarding your last words jiji? I didn't stay back... I took care of nothing!' so tightly was she clasping her sister's feet by then that she couldn't even feel her own fingers any more - yet, her hands wouldn't let go 'You sacrificed your life trying to defend the Farmaan from those looters... from that monster Khalil, who was depraved enough to rape you before taking your life. And I am fleeing Parnagarh without even having waited for your ashes to cool... without even giving you the kind of farewell, a warrior deserves!'

Durga understood, as always, and stroked her little sister's hair with all the love she had 'It is because I don't want my sacrifice to go in vain, that you must leave... your life is in danger, Heera... we've both worked hard to save the livelihoods of 400 families for so long... risking your life now... dying at the hands of those murderers... would simply be a waste of our efforts! Hide first, seek help next... you forget that your mind is a weapon stronger than my sword... besides, this is what bapusa wants too! Remember the message I sent you... Never did she find me, because I know how to hide...'


'Jiji...' the heiress opened her eyes, the words and face still fresh in her mind. And the very next spell, a flicker that'd been briefly heartening her spirit, faded. The lingering heaviness reminded her that the visions were merely a dream - that her life was still a nightmare. There was no jiji. Never will be. Just ashes in an urn that she was holding onto tightly.

Having said that, Heera couldn't deny that the brief trance had been in an odd way, calming. Hearing her sister's voice and watching her face - even if only in a dream - was reassuring.

'How long have I been asleep?'

The young lady finally sat up and straightened her crumpled cotton attire, bolstering her exhausted limbs against the velvety cushions of the palanquin as she did so. For the past 6 nights, she hadn't slept. Days and evenings had been spent agonising over her loss. Nights and midnights with waxing and waning bouts of tears. However after six days, her body refused to endure the torment any longer. The acrid burn of salt in her eyes and the heaviness in her head had dragged her down into a long interval of slumber. For how long, she knew not. But, she had slept.

As the sounds and surroundings became more lucid, she perceived the hush bustle and the hazy shadows of her campsite through the curtained opening. Sounds and shadows of the people who'd carted her off from Parnagarh against her wishes. Yet, people who'd tirelessly walked by her palanquin for the past 5 days

'We beg you... save yourself choti baisa... if something happens to you, we will be orphaned!'' she recalled their pleas and cries as she lay grief-stricken beside her sister's still body 'Those murderers warned they'd be back for you... and you're the only person standing in the way of their ambitions!'

'With Kunwarsa away in Gujarat, you have no protectors... please stay with Maharaj Chitranjan till the situation here becomes safe! Rajasa would find you a powerful husband, who would end this uncertainty and protect our future!'

'You may not be a fighter like your jiji... but, you're a survivor choti baisa!'


'Arrrgh... aaaooow'

Her recollections had been brought to a pause by the sounds of a groan - a muted groan of pain. Heera hastily peeped out, uttering the first coherent words she'd uttered in days 'What's going on? Is someone hurt?'

'Shhh...' having abandoned her hideaway, Gauri rushed to kneel by her side, relieved that her mistress was now awake 'Stay inside... we seem to be under some form of assault...'

'What!' it took her a brief while to break away from her pitiful state and make sense of the news she'd just received 'Assault?' once she grasped the graveness of their situation, her pupils widened in alarm and a profound hollow formed in the pits of her stomach, though she did manage to stop the signs of anxiety from showing on her face 'Since when? And who's hurt?'

'A short while ago, few tribes spotted our campsite... they've attacked twice and managed to injure Mohan banna and Daya banna...'

The heiress pulled the veil over her head, ready to step out 'Take me to the guards now, Gauri... I must look into this...'

'I cannot let you leave...' the chief-maid blocked the palanquin's exit

Startled; Heera darted her closest companion a questioning frown 'We are under attack... my men are hurt... you had a responsibility to wake me earlier, not stop me now...'

Gauri strayed not an inch from her spot. No doubt, she was immensely relieved to see the first signs of life in one who'd been nothing but a corpse for the past week, but she could not let her mistress spring into action yet. Not when it was unsafe to do so 'Those thugs are still lying in wait... so, I have orders to ensure you stay within your carriage...'

Heera was tempted to put her foot down, not too pleased by how her decisions were being challenged thus - but then thought better of it soon after. At this point, traipsing in the wilderness, unprepared, could jeopardize whatever plans the chief-guard had already made, and place lives at risk 'All right...' she subsequently relented with a resigned sigh 'I'll wait here... but, brief me on the situation...'

And a few essential details from Gauri was all it took for Heera to evaluate their circumstances -

'How seriously are Mohan banna and Daya banna, hurt?'

'Not very seriously, I think... but they have been complaining of severe thirst... and we've already used up most of our drinking water...'

'Severe thirst?' she clenched her fingers tightly, her pale skin blanching a few shades paler, her face unable to hide the signs of anxiety any more. An ugly reality had hit her hard 'Those blow-darts have been laced with a kind of poison that...' with little time to waste, she tried to regroup herself and think ahead 'Does Ratan kaka know where the nearest town is?'

'He has been trying to locate it on the map but...'

'But?'

'Huh?'


Their conversation had been interrupted by a stir - following a few confused shouts from the guards.

'What's happening?'

'I don't know Heera...'

For whatever reason, the attack had come to an abrupt halt - and so had everything else.

Dhani swiftly left her spot and crept up to join the duo, pointing to where the assailants had been hiding for so long 'Something seems to be going on, over there...' in the depths of night, all that could be made out were the hurried sounds of many feet shuffling and scuffling about

'Are the thugs actually running away?' Heera asked, still in disbelief an instant later

The maids stared at each other and stared ahead again, baffled by the unexpected turn of events 'Apparently, yes...'

'The thieves have scampered off...'

Yet, no one from the camp was seen celebrating right away. Rather, a creepy lull befell the group as the bizarre phenomenon that'd just unfolded, became clearer. The attackers had not retreated in defeat. They'd fled for their lives. In terror. It was as though they'd sensed something ominous lurking nearby. As though they'd heard something dangerous approaching them - and as though they knew they were no match for it whatsoever.

Suddenly, the ongoing pause took on a new chilling form.


A faint echo reverberated in the remote darkness. A rhythmic echo. The unmistakable sound of hooves trampling upon parched leaves and twigs.

Another wave of panic swept over the maids' faces.

'Could it be bandits?'

The men instinctively tightened the grips around their swords

'Or... Mughal soldiers?'

'Please be calm...' Heera hastily shushed them from the confines of her palanquin, so she could count the number of hooves hitting the ground. Sometime thereon, her head shook pensively 'No! You need not worry... it's only 1 horse... a solitary traveller...' she addressed her people with renewed hope 'In fact... Ratan kakasa... he might know something about the area... and the location of the nearest town!'

'Could be baisa...' Mohan banna limped ahead, making light of his injuries 'But, he could be dangerous too! Those vicious tribes wouldn't have fled like a pack of rats because they heard some lone man approaching... still... it's better to be careful! Guards...' he beckoned his men 'Form a line in front... the rest of you take cover behind us!' his pitch lowered to a more respectful murmur 'Harka baisa please remain seated in your carriage...'

The suggestion received a steady wave of affirmation and everyone wasted no time doing as told, waiting in anxious silence for the stranger to make his presence known. Meanwhile; unbeknown to each other, most muttered a quick prayer for the safety of their group too. Because whatever Mohan banna had said to assure them, they knew that a man travelling in a dangerous forest at nightfall, all by himself, had to be either insane or the most feared man in these regions. And somehow, most had guessed, it had to be the latter.


Time ticked by.

Seated within her palanquin, she could discern the distinct beat of hooves amidst the many notes of bated breath and chirping crickets surrounding her.

A few more moments elapsed.

The echoes grew louder. And louder.

Then, her breath paused.

She heard their whispers - the profile of the solitary traveller had finally come into view. The loud gallop decelerated into a gentle trot till it slowed to a halt beside her palanquin.



Through the curtains, she couldn't see much - other than the very blurry outline of a horse and the feet of its rider. However, what she did manage to guess - from a vague sighting of his riding shoe - was its style. This traveller was a Mughal. And an avid rider too.

'Good evening, Sahib...' Ratan kaka spoke up to cease the odd spell, though his nervousness did make his words sound more Marwari than Urdu 'Do you know these areas well?'

After what seemed like a very long interval, she heard the stranger speak

'Yes...'

His reply was curt and his tone rang deeper than any voice she'd heard. In fact, she thought, if his personality was as dominant as his voice, there was little doubt that this man was the only reason, everyone had fled!

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Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Teaser for Chapter 4

The stranger briefly observed the wooden palanquin from where the fresh voice was echoing - aware that this voice sounded far more fluent and polished than the one that'd echoed from the regal carriage! 'It's 4 dams for both...' he informed, gruffly

'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib!' the heiress stated, using sarcasm to express her disapproval

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'

Heera paused, and then, backed down - unable to come up with an apt response for that statement 'So, with your permission, baisa' she addressed the lady in the other palanquin, keeping up the act while doing so 'I shall offer him the money...'

Knowing she had little choice, Bindiya relented with an unhappy frown 'Fine... go... on!'

'Thank you, baisa...' sliding her hand out, Heera gave up the four disputed coins 'Here they are...'

If he wasn't certain then, he was now - she might be sitting in a simple palanquin and donning plain glass bangles, but the grace with which she held her palm out was proof enough that this lady was no commoner.


CHAPTER 4


'And what can you tell us about this place?' Ratan kakan enquired - since the man had replied with nothing beyond a 'Yes'

Another interval of nothingness passed, before Heera heard his full-bodied Mughalain accent -

'This place is notorious for its bloodthirsty bandits!'

Numerous gasps ruffled through the gathering, followed by an anxious query from one maid 'Bloodthirsty bandits?'

'We will be fine...' Bajrang retorted

'Yes...' joined in a few more guards, who thought it unwise of the stranger to be revealing such unpleasant facts in the presence of ladies - especially ladies, who were terrified enough already.


'All right, then...' Ratan kaka spoke up before the exchanges turned any sourer - after all, he needed another favour from the man'What would be the nearest town from here, Sahib?' spreading open the parchment scroll, he approached the rider with his map 'I.. I think...'

'Aidabad...' the stranger stated, without even giving the map a cursory glimpse 'About 2 kos Northeast'

'Oh! Are you sure?' kaka asked again, a question he regretted straightaway - because all he got in response, was a long glare.

Shifting his nervous attention away from the glare and back to the map, the manager sifted through its minute directions for this unfamiliar town - by no means an easy task when the light was so low. But, he found it ultimately - the nearest town was a tiny speck, exactly where the traveller had said it would be 'I see it now... Aidabad... thank you...'

Gesturing with a brief nod, the rider was about to whip up the reins, ready to ride off - when another voice called out to him


'You have some water bags with you... would you share some of it with us?'

It was Mohan banna.



'He is suffering!' Heera empathised, nearly about to ignore the chief-guard's recommendations and break her vow-of-silence so she could explain their urgent need for water. Much to her relief though, a moment later, she detected the rustle of a leather bag being tossed back 'Thank you, Ma...' she prayed



'Thank you, Sahib' they acknowledged, on receiving the water they'd requested for.

Once the two wounded men had had their fill, the bag was returned - everyone assuming that the mounted traveller would subsequently proceed on his way. But, he didn't. Instead, he had a claim to make -

'That would be 4 dams...'

So unexpected was that demand, and so perplexing its cause, that it took everyone a while to understand what the 4 dams stood for - they were being charged for the water they'd just borrowed!

'WHAT!' howled most of the guards in unison 'Are you actually... extracting money from us... for having had four sips of your water? That too, 4 dams?' they stared at each other with expressions of near-disgust 'We should have known it would come to this!'

'Not very nice...' added the maids, unable to come to terms with how the act reeked of selfishness 'Where we come from, it is considered great honour to share our food and water with a guest...'

The man barely flinched 'True! But, you are not my guests!'



'Lord!' the heiress remarked under her breath. From the seclusion of her palanquin, she'd been listening to the intriguing conversations and his brusque manners in silence so far. However, his latest act had compelled even HER to raise a brow. What an opportunist, she thought! He'd obviously calculated how desperate they had to be if such a large party were requesting a lone traveller for water - that too, at night. And, he was using it to his favour!



'You are being very mean...'

Everyone's attention fell upon the source of that blunt comment - the regal palanquin perched in the centre of the group.



Heera looked up from her spot too with a sigh 'And there goes your promise, Bindiya!' Ever since the heiress had set out on this perilous journey, she'd been travelling, disguised as a commoner - a practise generally used amongst aristocrats to protect the identity of the master, in case of an attack. And Bindiya was playing the 'heiress' - only because the eager maid had promised to keep a check on her emotions throughout the journey. Yet, at the first signs of a problem, the lady couldn't seem to stop speaking her mind!



'You are taking advantage of us...' Bindiya continued, unchecked '4 dams? That's outrageous!'

The traveller gave the grand palanquin a curt glance - unruffled by whosoever seated inside, was challenging him thus 'I am a businessman. And that's what I do' came his flat reply



'All right then, Sahib...' Heera finally chose to speak, since the issue was blowing out of proportion 'Seems like you'll have it only your way!' she'd interceded in a language that both, the businessman and her people would understand.

A round of murmurs and hums instantly rang aloud, and she knew what her people must be thinking - that they would rather die than let a Mughal steal from them so brazenly. In fact, she didn't even blame them for it. On the other hand, SHE didn't have the luxury to follow such pride and sentiments. Her men were ill and the retinue had to be on their way!

The stranger briefly observed the wooden palanquin from where the fresh voice was echoing - aware that this voice sounded far more fluent and polished than the one that'd echoed from the regal carriage! 'Yes... it'll be 4 dams...' he informed, gruffly

'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib!' the heiress stated, using sarcasm to express her disapproval

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'

Heera paused, and then, backed down - she had neither the time nor an apt response to argue with that statement 'So, with your permission, baisa' she addressed the lady in the other palanquin, keeping up the act while doing so 'I shall offer him the money...'

Knowing she had little choice, Bindiya relented with an unhappy frown 'Fine... go... on!'

'Thank you, baisa...' sliding her hand out, Heera gave up the four disputed coins 'Here they are...'



If he wasn't certain then, he was now - she might be sitting in a simple palanquin and donning plain glass bangles, but the grace with which she held her palm out was proof enough that this lady was no commoner. Waiting for a guard to hand over the coins, the traveller pocketed the amount, offered their disgruntled faces a sharp nod and then flicked his reins into action.

The very next moment, he'd galloped off into the wilderness - gone, in no time. Like he'd never even been there in the first place.

'Let's start then!' declared the heiress, shaking the odd episode out of her mind, so she could attend to more pressing matters - matters, like how would a retinue with two injured men make their swift way towards this unknown town called 'Aidabad', 2 kos away.



Many hours later...

No sooner than the ladies had created some usable space, Heera made herself comfortable on the low chaise, so she could tend to her patients without delay.

Possessions and trunks were scattered across the floor, the room was dingier than a cave and every inch of its old furniture was covered in dust. Regardless; the men had found some bedding to rest upon, while she had managed to access her medicine box - and that was all the 'healer' in her needed to get to work. Bending forth, the heiress palpated their injured legs, one after another. Seeing how even her gentle touch caused them to clench their teeth in pain, she retracted her hand.

Heera said nothing, but from the signs of swelling, she was concerned that their suffering wasn't going to end anytime shortly. In fact, by the time the group had reached the desolate town, located its Kotwal and found a place to halt, the men's health had taken a turn for the worse. So much so that they hadn't even sat up to greet their heiress when she arrived.

Setting aside those dispiriting notions, she moved as close as she could to assess the severity of their wounds 'The light is dim...' Heera muttered, straining her eyes as she carefully studied the cuts

Taking the cue, Gauri grabbed another flame from an oblivious maid and held it near by

'Thank you...' she nodded, now able to recognise how distinctive the inflammation was

'Baisa...' Mohan feebly spoke up, on watching her perturbed state 'We... will be fine...' it was evident that the man deeply regretted burdening his Lady with additional misery

'Yes... don't fret ...' agreed Daya.


'Mohan banna...' she ignored the protests 'Show me your wrist now...'

Though hesitant at first, he did as asked - and the diagnosis showed that despite no temperature, his pulse was racing dangerously fast, his body sweating profusely. Daya showed similar symptoms.

'All we would like is a few hours rest, baisa...' Daya confessed

'And some water to drink...' Mohan's voice was now hoarse from the dehydration 'Then, we shall all be on our way...'


Heera quickly turned to the ladies on her left 'Have you offered them some from my stock?'

The maids' expressions turned sheepish 'We did... but they refused to touch it!'

'No... no... baisa...'

'That water is meant for you... and you alone!' they insisted

'Besides, Dhani and the other maids have gone to fetch some from the canal... she should be here soon!'

The kind heiress held a palm up to quell her guards' reservations. On most days she appreciated their unwavering loyalty - but in this situation, she didn't support the sentiment 'Bindiya...' she then spoke in a hurry 'You have my personal belongings ... there should be a water bag in it... bring it...' watching how the maid lifted the delicate ends of her skirt and began making her cautious way around the trunks and chests, Heera promptly added 'And please make haste... don't bother about the embroideries of my attire...'



Once the bag had been brought as instructed, she opened the seal and handed it to the men. Not long thereafter, she administered the first dose of medicines and herbs to help calm the inflammation and pain.

'We already feel better' they exaggerated, when they saw her putting the medicine box aside

'Good' her tone was reassuring, as she got up, prepared to leave

'We should be up on our feet in 4 or 5 hours, baisa...'

'Let's hope for that... now please rest' she nodded in genteel encouragement, before retiring from the servant's quarters for the night.

Waiting until they were out of earshot, she divulged the truth to her chief-maid 'Inform Ratan kakasa that we are going to be here for at least 4 or 5 days...'

'4 or 5 days?' the lady's face paled a shade, realising the Lady had lied to the chief-guard. That the men's condition was worse than everyone originally thought it to be! 'All right'

'And Gauri...' Heera paused 'I need another favour from you too...'



Later...

In another part of the house...

'How many nights?'

'Maybe 4... or 5 nights...' he paused 'But, you haven't had guests here for several months, have you?'

The Kotwal sported an awkward smile 'Sahib... you see... this town's Caravansarai is not a convenient place to set up camp... especially, not for noble women... this haveli is Aidabad's most prominent landmark, and its guest house should be an ideal place for aristocrats like yourselves! It needs a tidy-up... that's all!'

'Ideal?' asked Maharaj kaka, taken aback by the man's description of such a drab place.


When the exhausted group had been led through a series of Mughalian archways and a massive wooden door, a short while ago, they were definitely not prepared for the spectacle that lay in front.

Though the guest wing of this mansion did not lack in size, it unquestionably lacked in charm. Shoddy rooms. Arbitrary pieces of dark furniture. Faded drapes. Unhinged window frames. This residence had been neglected for months, if not years. In fact, its murky ambience reminded one of a cellar - since there were more cobwebs here, than there was furniture.

And if the reception rooms were in so deplorable a condition one could only imagine the state of the kitchens that lay beyond 'Ma Jagdamba... help us' Maharaj kaka muttered another prayer

As the kotwal's assistant lit another lamp atop a dusty side table - a futile act to make an unloved house appear presentable - Ratan kaka watched on, a helpless bystander in all of this drama.

The accountant was not as vocal about his disappointment, but that was mainly because he was preoccupied with another troubling reality. A reality that plagued him with a lot of guilt. The 16 year old heiress who'd always enjoyed an elegant lifestyle in a splendid haveli was now forcibly exiled into an unused guest house of a tiny town. That too, after having lost all her loved ones. And the fact that the gallant young lady would not complain about any of it, was what stung him most.

Anyhow, there was little else he could do about it. It was too late. The group was fatigued. Their supplies low. Their chief-guard injured. And there were no alternative options, so they had to make do with what they had.

His morose glimpses trailed towards one of the smaller chambers in a far corner, and thus at the makeshift bedding arranged within it. Now fast asleep; Mohan banna and Daya banna appeared to be finally at peace from their discomforts. Harka Bai had managed to relieve their pain in time

'Maybe this is how Ma Jagdamba wills it' Ratan kaka told himself, before coming to terms with their predicament 'Fine... we are happy to stay here...'

'That's good news!' the town-chief was emphatic, his mind carefully working out all sorts of profit margins 'I shall confirm the rent-tariff with the owner and let you know!'

'But, who is the owner of this place?' Ratan kaka enquired

'The main haveli belongs to a merchant... but, he travels a lot... so, I manage the guest quarters when he is away...'

'And what are the rates here, generally?' kaka was prepared to be overcharged by a Kotwal who was going to make the most out of a money-making venture when he could. After all, Aidabad was a very small place and there couldn't have been many rich travellers halting here for a rest.

'He generally charges 5 dams a night...' the town-chief paused slowly 'But... I can convince him to bring it down to 4!' when the guests looked on blankly, he wondered if he'd overshot himself and charged them too much.


Settling his doubts, Ratan kaka responded shortly thereafter with a smile and the typical Marwari salute 'Thank you...'

All of a sudden, the Kotwal didn't sound so greedy - especially when considering how they'd paid just as much money for a small bag of water few hours ago! 'Bajrang...' he waved to the retinue of guards 'Let the men bring the trunks and the luggage in... we can get this house cleaned up in...' he stopped, noticing something amiss 'Where is Heera bitiya?'


For a tense moment, merely stares were exchanged as no one seemed to know the answer. Till Gauri chose to disclose the truth 'She is safe...'

'What! Where?'

'She stepped out for a stroll... in the gardens behind the haveli...'

'How could you let her go alone, Gauri?'

'It's late in the night... the territory is unfamiliar... how would she manage by herself?'

'She said she would manage...'

Unconvinced, Bajrang and his fellowmen hastily dropped whatever it was they were carrying, ready to charge off to the gardens, in search of their Lady.

'Please wait...' the chief-maid pleaded with him for the sake of her mistress 'Heera promised she wouldn't go far... or be gone for long...'

'You've lost your mind! Never before have you let her be by herself... and now, when it's unsafe, you let her stroll out alone? Especially, when she's not very well? If Mohan banna hears of this, he will have us removed from our posts!'

'It's because her state-of-mind is not well... that the lady wants to be by herself for a while... and I think she deserves at least that much now, don't you think so?' rare was the occasion when the chief-maid lost her composure, but by the end of that statement, she was nearly yelling. Realising her folly in due time, she simmered her tone - though her eyes remained stern 'Please give her some privacy...'

Bajrang glared at Gauri, then at Ratan Kaka, and back at Gauri. He uncurled his fist - the outburst had taken effect 'Fine... but, only for a short while... I'll go check on baisa after all the trunks have been unloaded...'



The canal bank...

Splasshhh... and then... clunk

No sooner than the pebble hit the currents, it disappeared under the rushing streamlets

Splaashhh... and then... clunk... again

Another pebble had drowned, vanishing into oblivion

She dug out a flat stone from the damp mud, beside her feet

But it was a splaaasssh... and... a clunk - over and over!

Try as she might, Heera couldn't recreate her favourite soft echos of 'slap... slap... slap... slap...'. She wasn't able to get the pebbles to hop on the surface, or carve the water into beautiful ripples, like she always did. How could she? When the waters were not still. When its currents were uncontrollably raging ahead - much like the uncontrollable turbulence raging within her own body and mind.


'No point...' she scoffed, abandoning her favourite outdoor sport -the one sport, she used to be able to compete with jiji in 'I wouldn't find peace even if I was in paradise!'

Taking a much needed break from the woes and responsibilities weighing her down, the 16 year old had stepped out alone, a short while ago, in search of some peace. Her stroll had begun at the gardens, like she'd promised Gauri, but the sounds of a flowing stream had caught her attention at some point. Her disturbed mind seeking some form of respite from the anguish - in fact, any form of respite from the anguish - was lured by the music of water like a moth to flame. Unaware of where her quest for this evasive tranquility was leading her, the lone lady strayed adrift, crossing a large field lined with an extensive stretch of stables, till she reached an elevated spot. An elevation that displayed the dusky views, of what she assumed, was a canal.

'This will do' she'd thought, and crossed over a crude wooden footbridge, taking her place beside its banks ever since.

Yet, she hadn't found the tranquillity she was after. There was a calming silence that the solitude of night offered. The familiar spreads of nature somehow reminded her of the home she'd left behind, but Heera hadn't got what she yearned for.

Even the gentle breeze that'd displaced her veil and thrown her hair back didn't calm her - it only served to remind how vehement her own breath was. The light spray from the stream drizzling upon her features didn't cool her temper - it only showed her how warm her own tears were.

'Finding peace', as Harka Bai discovered eventually, was no easy quest.


'How jiji? HOW am I supposed to find inner peace? Tell me...' an angry tear merged with the cool droplets trickling down her cheeks 'When I know I have to protect everyone from a powerful enemy like the Shehzade, whose men are out to murder me? When the terrible manner in which they took your life relentlessly haunts me? When I fear how deplorable jijasa's condition would be? How am I supposed to find peace when every step of my journey is plagued with perils, like the illness that has befallen Mohan banna and Daya banna?' she yelled aloud, confessing her vulnerabilities and fears, one by one - something she could finally do, since her people were not here to witness such a breakdown! 'How am I going to achieve everything without your guidance? I need you... I want you with me, jiji... I WANT YOU BACK!'

Burying her face into her lap, she wrapped her hands around her knees, cocooning herself from the unknown, as she waged a few fights of her own. A fight with tears. A fight with fate. A fight with God himself.

And once she'd exhausted all her energy fighting, once she'd come to terms with the fact that she might never really find the peace she so sought, Heera decided to end her tempestuous affair with nature for the night. As it is, she'd been gone long. Any longer, and her people would become sick with worry.


So, picking up the broken branch from under her feet - a prop that'd helped her avoid the pits and trenches on her trek here - she resumed her return journey. Traipsing up to the wooden footbridge, she placed a cautious step on each plank - one after another. However, three footsteps in and she recognised how unstable the structure was beginning to feel. The planks were creaking as though they were going to split apart, and oddly enough, the ropes were swaying far more than they swayed before 'Was it this rickety, when I arrived?' she wondered, unsure if she must retreat, or swiftly cross over by completing the remaining 12 steps.

Deciding to make a dash for the other end, Heera took her fourth and fifth steps in quick succession, but by the sixth one, any hopes that she might have had were quashed. The structure was clearly giving way and a further move, either way, was going to bring the platform down 'Ma Bhavani... where have I wronged you... why are you punishing me repeatedly? ' she asked the deity who was lately showing her no mercy whatsoever! Stranded in the middle of a collapsing footbridge atop a gushing stream in the middle of the night, was a crisis she was least prepared for.

The lady could barely see anything through the darkness, so she had no idea about the depth of the canal, but from what she could hear, the currents were strong - too strong for a poor swimmer like her to battle. Thus, she was left with one lone option 'Help... somebody...' she shouted, hoping the alarm would alert her people when they came searching for her 'Help... I am caught...' but she'd barely finished her second sentence, when an unsteady plank beside her sunk down, sucking her feet into a trap, as it did so.


'Argh' she screamed, noting how her ankle was lodged in a narrow space between two sharp wooden boards, before looking up at the forlorn emptiness ahead

Her world was crashing down and there was not a soul in sight to share her heartache, but she would not give up hope - not just yet. Wrestling with pounding beats and whirling scenes, Heera overcame the temptation to hurriedly yank her feet off. Tightening her clasp around the ropes with her shaky fingers, she carefully tried to wiggle the entrapped foot out.

Many cautious attempts later, she was free.

Alas, the joy was short-lived.

The gentle tussles were greater strain than those ropes could take. Thus, split they did. The first one ripped, causing the structure to swing recklessly over the waters below. And when the next one split, it brought the entire footbridge down with it, plunging her into the stream beneath.


SPLAAASH

The force with which the coldness hit her face and then sucked her under, rendered her senses momentarily numb. Immediately fighting off its paralysing effects, Heera pushed her face up through the oppressive tides, before her lungs could start filling up with liquid.

'Pleas... Some... one sav... me...' her screams for help muffled, she whipped her hands and legs in a frenzy, struggling to stay afloat for as long as she could. But with the rapids so potent, she was as powerless as a dove flapping against a whirlpool, and it was not long before the rapids pulled her below again.

Several such struggles later, she had worn out her resilience.


Just as her distraught mind began dreading the possibility that she might vanish into oblivion like her pebbles had, something abruptly happened. Something that stopped her body from being washed off.

It was a steely grip around her elbow.

Her hope renewed, Heera frantically clung on to her captor's clutches, with no intention to let go of the sole refuge she had.

However, she needn't have worried about letting go, because this ironclad grip wavered not a bit - so much so that she couldn't even feel the blood flowing down her hands while being dragged against the mass of water. Neither did the currents slow her captor down, nor did her weight inconvenience him. Whoever this man was, he seemed massive and unstoppable - managing to haul her disoriented self towards the nearest ledge in the blink of an eye.

Recognising even in that dazed state that the one who towed her so harshly, could not be a gentleman, the desperate young lady prayed that the rescuer was not, in reality, out to harm her.

But, her second fear was proved baseless too.


Not only did he thrust her somewhere close to the edge with glaring indifference - the very next instant, she found her confounded self, facing his back. He'd turned around to tend to the base of the footbridge - like the terrible accident had not even happened.

Nonetheless, the lady was still in shock, her feet still hadn't found their footing in running water and the tall banks were proving too slippery to hold onto. Therefore, without much thought, she did what a survivor would - Heera clenched the furrows of his broad back for support.

Suddenly; he jerked his shoulders, freeing him of her grip. But that, in turn, compelled her unbalanced body to react adversely. Lunging forward to stop herself from sinking, she caught onto the next thing she could hold onto - the cummerbund that wrapped around the many ridges of his well-sculpted ribs.

Aggravated by her presence and her actions, the boorish man briefly stopped the repair work, and pried her fingers out of his cummerbund 'What do you think you're doing?' his pitch echoed like a roar, though he kept his tone low. And curt. And deep. And thick. And dominant.


'The voice...' her startled eyes slowly widened, as she made another effort to stretch her hand out and grasp the high bank walls on the side. Failing to get a good hold upon its slimy surface yet again, her hands incidentally went for the more secure clasp of his brutally-tough arms

'WHAT are you doing?' he grit his teeth, his tone not so low now

'W... what...' the breathless 16 year old heaved 'I... I can't swim very well... there's nothing else to hold on to... and I know I am too young to die!'

Something about her statement must have annoyed him. In fact, provoked him. Because, the little patience he had, snapped 'I know you can't swim... because, I saw your antics out there...'

Removing her tight clamp from around his arm like it was child's play, he spun around and probed into her eyes


And with her wet back now plastered against the canal banks, she came to face with him for the first time - her lungs that were still gasping for air, pitted against his unshaken breath.

As every tide of the waist-deep water struck her, the lone aspect that stopped Heera from floating astray was his towering masculine outline, confining her to her spot. Never before had she been at such close quarters with any man before - let alone the fact that it was dark, and that they were both standing in 4 feet of water, with their clothes drenched. Yet, the first thought that came to her enquiring mind wasn't awkwardness - it was that she'd finally decoded the puzzle

'He IS the stranger...'

She'd already guessed it when she heard his words, but she knew it for certain now.

Having said that, the rest of her guesses had turned out to be inaccurate. For she had assumed his features would resemble a brute's! Or a boor's! But, she couldn't have been further from the truth.

Under the faint rays of the moonlight and behind the gleam of water droplets, there could be no other face that looked more refined. Set against skin that was fairer than fair, the bronzed locks that fell above his shoulders put even the richest shades of brown to shame. With features so sharp and eyes so piercing, she doubted if the man belonged to this country at all. Yes, he was a Mughal, but a Mughal from another land. Her mind went back to the various paintings and books on culture that she owned - trying to find a match 'Not a Mongol. Or a Turk...' she supposed 'Persia? Yes that's it...he's Persian!'


'Are you blind, or are you plain bizarre?'

He'd finally questioned, dispelling the oddest spell of silence he knew. It was a question he was meant to ask a few moments ago, but for some strange reason 'Hazel' were the first words that came to his mind. Hazel - the colour of her eyes. Blacks, he'd seen. Blues and greens he'd seen. Even browns he'd seen. But such an exquisite tint of hazel, he had not 'What do you think you're doing?'

'The bank wall is too tall and slippery... all I needed was some form of support to climb it... had I found it, I would have been gone by now' she clarified the 'obvious' facts with a straight face, somehow finding herself more amused than offended by the tone of his interrogations. Did he actually suspect her to be the kind of lady, who went around groping strangers for no apparent reason otherwise?

'So, you ARE bizarre!' he hissed, before indicating towards a spot on the wall not far from where she was standing 'Is that rope ladder not support enough?'


(Glossary of terms included in post below)

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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India

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DISCLAIMER - This story is only inspired from events and characters in history and not an actual depiction of events. I have read/researched upon the culture and timelines of that era to give the events a genuine feel, but since I am no historian, and since this is only a dramatized story, there might be inaccuracies, which I hope you would be able to overlook in the name of Lashy Rupantar! 🤔😃

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Keep the rage 'simmering' girls ...

Revenge will come!
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Lashy di🤗

Wow...What an update👏👏, such a heart-touching chapter.😭😭😭

You have shocked us out of our wits. Poor Durga😭😭

'You're proud of us, aren't you maasa... bapusa?' she asked her parents, like she did every night - before she let her gazes trail from the terrace towards her favourite scenery on the floor below

Ya they surely must be proud to have such great daughters.👏

'A Heera indeed' Durga smiled to herself as she fondly recalled what their old tutor had said of his star pupil 'Anything she touches, blossoms... and anyone she treats, heals!'

Such amazing lines, Heera' is truly a Heera.⭐️😃

Usually we tend to overlook small changes, small disturbances which later turn into a bigger disaster. That's what happened with Durga.

'Mining the valleys would destroy everything we've worked hard for... the fields, the plantations, the water, the homes, the hospital, the peace... EVERYTHING! I'll never let that happen so long as I live!'

She fought, she fought till the last for her lands.👏

Even the Dogs sensed the coming danger, which most animals usually do, only if Durga...😭😭


The attack was well planned, the prince played everything very well, yet you can't help but hate him😡😡. As soon as she felt everything was working, the stable boy was killed.😭

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!


Beautifully written 👏

The horse was the 'Marwari' racer she'd won at the auction, two days ago 'Wise decision' a haunting smile escaped amidst her tears.

Such a lovely moment, midst all tension.😃😳


Durga displayed immense bravery when confronted by death. Yet, she couldn't afterall, at the end of the day she was alone, even with great strength she couldn't fight those cowardly-beasts.😭 She was ready to give away her life,but not the farmaan, yet when it came on her dignity, her modesty she had to finally give in.😭😭

We all knew he was going to kill her,but he took away her dignity too.😭😭

Such a sadist, gets pleasure from other grievances😡😡.Khalil 😡😡,just hate him for what he has done. Till the end I thought Durga will kill herself, instead but nothing of that sort happened.

Durga, such a storng-willed, able, gorgeous, a fighter was wasted😭😭. If only you would'nt have crafted her so amazingly, the pain would have been less😭😭. This in itself proves such a great writer you are di, you make us so involved that we just can't stop thinking about the marvel you have created.👏👏

The saying of keats holds true for Durga, 'A thing of beauty is a joy forever'. However, short her life was, it will surely be an inspiration not just for Heera, but for all of us too.⭐️😃

Heera has got such able and loving people around her.😃👏

Heera😭😭, her state is as sorrowful as her sister, poor girl lost her only sister.😭😭 Her sister's image gives her strength even if it's just a hallucination.

'You may not be a fighter like your jiji... but, you're a survivor choti baisa!'

Yes, Heera is a survivor, she will she survive all the hardships and torments,and will come out with flying colours.


His reply was curt and his tone rang deeper than any voice she'd heard. In fact, she thought, if his personality was as dominant as his voice was, there was little doubt that this man was the only reason, everyone had fled!

Formidable, mughal, here comes our hero, at the most appropriate time.⭐️😃.

Love you 🤗

Edited by .AKDHASWARA. - 9 years ago
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DI😲😲 kya huva
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Lashy di, it was a touching update, it really was. So much so that I couldn't comment immediately after reading it...

I hadn't expected all this to happen so soon. It was a real shock, not only for Bhavi di, but for all of us. 😲

'You're proud of us, aren't you maasa... bapusa?' she asked her parents, like she did every night

^ Loved this. 😳 Their parents sure are proud of them...especially after what Durga did today.

And the aangan part was lovely. Harka is one hard-working and dedicated girl. 😳⭐️

'A Heera indeed' Durga smiled to herself as she fondly recalled what their old tutor had said of his star pupil 'Anything she touches, blossoms... and anyone she treats, heals!'

^ This is adorable! 😳 Durga smiling at her sister's taareef...⭐️😳 And what beautiful words you hvae chosen for Heera! ❤️

Now the clash had made me think something's wrong, but the way you brushed it aside, I too did. 😆 Only if like me, Durga hadn't done so.

Durga smiled at the boy's enthusiasm. A forty eight hour journey from the horse-fair followed by an exhaustive day's work, meant her limbs were groaning about the lack of rest and her mind throbbing from the day's stresses. Yet, if she managed to smile at the end of it - it was because she was surrounded by the company of people who loved her thus.

^ You have built such a happy atmosphere around the two sisters, that the sudden harsh reality of fate hits even harder!

'Mining the valleys would destroy everything we've worked hard for... the fields, the plantations, the water, the homes, the hospital, the peace... EVERYTHING! I'll never let that happen so long as I live!'


^ What determination! 👏👏⭐️ But this kinda gave away what's gonna happen...

For Durga Bai... 👏👏👏 Any amount of praise for this valiant girl would be insufficient.⭐️⭐️⭐️ She's a rockstar. ⭐️ In such a short time, she had made such a great impact on the story, even greater on the readers. Kudos to you for shaping up such a character! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Her sharp instincts of defense, the calmness even in the face of death, the will to never give up, the valor of a true warrior, the love for her motherland and it's people, the engulfing sadness at the realization that her people had died for her, and just how brilliantly she controls it, the flashes of her loved ones, her presence of mind as to what is the best way out, and, to do or to die - 'I will NOT give you the Farmaan, even if you take my life!' the breathless warrior challenged him, the faces of her loved ones flashing before her eyes

Everything has made her an inspiration to me. Simply adore her! ❤️ Truly a memorable character, with a young life to live on, with so much potential, and so brutally wasted.

Knowing that she would die eventually, it was still so hard to digest. I was praying real hard that so would, somehow escape. Alas! 😭

And that K!!! I can't describe in words how much I hate him! God knows how he even makes such DISGUSTING people...🤢🤢🤢 Did he even realize what had he done? For some Farmaan he had taken a life so promising...😭😡😡

More than Durga's death, it was the breach of her modesty that shocked me. Wsa that really necessary di? It really put me off...😡😡😡 I had imagined that K would take the Farmaan and go away, and Durga would eventually die. But that monster...😡😡😡.🤢🤢🤢

By the way, the little bit you have added about the auction's horse, and how that little smile appears on Durga's face amidst all the misery, is so sweet. Even the way she prays to God and how it's answered, is lovely. ❤️ ❤️

She was so relieved when the first horse-man took off... only to be killed. But her hopes were shattered the very next moment. Chalo at least that poem reached Harka, I thought he'll also die. The poem bit between the sisters since childhood was lovely... only added to their lovely bonding. 😳😳😳 It also had a hidden meaning, an inspiration, which we get to know later, but perhaps these two knew all along! ❤️

Harka's state was as heart-wrenching as Durga's end. 😭😭 To imagine such lovely sisters apart is in itself so sad...😭😭😭

The part where Harka dreams of her Jiji is heart-touching. ❤️ And soothing to her as well. 😳 Durga is lovely here too, the way she tries to console her sis. 😳😳

The lingering heaviness reminded her that the visions were merely a dream - that her life was still a nightmare. There was no jiji. Never will be. Just ashes in an urn that she was holding onto tightly.

^ These lines... 😭😭😭 Just bring us and Harka both back to the harsh reality of this world.

Amidst all this, I loved the loyalty of their men towards the two sisters. They are lucky to have been in a circle like this! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

So the stranger is here. Let's see what you have in store for us here.

Overall, very beautifully written di! 👏👏⭐️ Update soon. 😃

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago
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Same question...😲
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It's called the post-posting nerves 😆
And it's also my inherent fear of Chellam 🤔 because I know what she's gonna say!

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