NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4 - Page 124

Chapter 4 Comments:
Smart handsome brave warrior stranger... sighhh... did not get enough of him in the teeny intro scene at all...
Okkk so the group finds a place to rest where am sure the warrior will come soon.. thank god no more deaths.. Heera saves them.. poor girl so many responsibilities when shes so young..
OMGGG pebble throwing scene !! After how long
OMGG Broken bridge, falling heera.. I sooo know where this is leading !! "It was a steely grip around her elbow." "Neither did the currents slow her captor down, nor did her weight inconvenience him. Whoever this man was, he seemed massive and unstoppable" I die and go to heaven ... I read the rescue scene thrice :D
Oooh hes indifferent and rude.. I love him more and more.. "As every tide of the waist-deep water struck her, the lone aspect that stopped Heera from floating astray was his towering masculine outline, confining her to her spot" ooo nothing and noone can stop me from floating away reading this...
'He IS the stranger...' YES YES YES Heera.. I told u he will be back soon.. now you will never be alone and unprotected !! Awesomeee update.. Loved it..


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Chapter 5 comments :

Ayyooo yen dee.. heera is short sighted aa like me big hazel eyes and cant see well... awww I thought this would upset me greatly but this teeny flaw makes her even more precious and perfect... adorable imagination you have got .. no issues our boorish warrior has enough sharp eyes for both of them.
Aww the little darling almost' smiles
For gods sake give my warrior a name and a nice one !!
Nice maids and nice people on both sides.. I really like chacha jaan and now am craving for zafrani pulao thanks to u !
Awww "'The haveli that you're staying at... the stables where your horses are parked... the canal from which you just fetched your water... and the lands as far as your eyes can see... belong to a very eminent horse merchant called Akbar Mahmoud Khan " What a royal name and what richness !! I love the Mahmoud' touch to the Akbar' name :D
The scenes of the maids and heera are soo sweet.. I find bindiya so adorable and Gauri so not adorable.. Bindiyas little poem is sooo sweet... I hope mughals carry Gauri off good riddance !
This seems like such a short chapter.. EAGERLY proceeding to next chapter