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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Chapter- 2

Marvelous chappy dear...
I loved it..
Wow.. Ja got 2 rank n jo got 1 rank..
Ja scared his father..
Hamida is happy but this idiot Humayun is not happy with result..
O really hate this type of behaviour of parents..
How humayun can do this..

Pls update ASAP.. Pls aur bada long chappy..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Sry for late rply... Busy with my guest...
CHAPTER- 1...
Awesome story...
I just loved it...
Jo give a red colour box..
I also curious to know about what is in the box?
Ja is angry to leave his frnd..
In first chappy u created the suspense..
Pls update ASAP.. Cant wait to read further..




Thanks dear I will try to give update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Chapter- 2

Marvelous chappy dear...
I loved it..
Wow.. Ja got 2 rank n jo got 1 rank..
Ja scared his father..
Hamida is happy but this idiot Humayun is not happy with result..
O really hate this type of behaviour of parents..
How humayun can do this..

Pls update ASAP.. Pls aur bada long chappy..




Thanks dear for your comments
I will give long chappy next time
Thanks once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Hey,guys i post the 3rd chappy ,hope you like it..


CHAPTER 3

( At right now JALA and JODHA are in different schools.. Not in same one...)


After got angry on jalal, humayu silently eat his food and goes to his room, having a angry mood...

JALA : see mom I tell you that papa will not happy with my result...

HAMIDA :it's OK jalal you scored good marks... Be happy

IN HUMYU'S Room,
Humayu site on bed with having tear in his eyes being rude behaviour of his beloved son...

FLASH BACK,

MOLVI SHAB : who are these both children playing in the garden???

HUMYU: the boy is jalal my son..

BHARMAL : the girl is Jodha my daughter...

MOLVI SHAB : aameen... Aameen...

HUMAYU : kya hua molvi shab??

MOLVI SHAB : actually those children's having a bright future ahead but...

BHRMAL: but... What molvi shab...???

MOLVI SHAB: but they have to be apart right now... Because if they are live together in childhood then one of them have lost her or his life... Because both are connected with their heart with eachother... If one of them break his or her heart then it not good for both of your's families... You both families must have to live apart for 10 year only... But they must be merry with each other only... And ya this girl Jodha have bright future.. She will tack new turn in your company humayu... By her brilliant mind...

FLASH BACK END,

HUMAYU:(in angry tone) no... I will not allow this Jodha to come in company at all ...not a single leg of her...no...no...jalal you have to top in the class... It's only you have the rite to turn my company on new way... Not that Jodha...

IN LONDON,
JODHA : dad I did top in school, I want my gift till the evening...

BHARMAL : OK... Beta I will... BTW congratulations...

JODHA : thank you papa...

BHARMAL : (goes from home to bring a gift for his daughter then he remembered that jalal's result is also comes today... Let me call humayu and ask him) hello, humayu you recognised me, I bharmal

HUMAYU:yup bharmal how can I am not... Say how are you...

BHARMAL : I am fine.. You??

HUMAYU : I am also fine

BHARMAL : is Jalal's result come???

HUMAYU : ha he got second rank in class..

BHARMAL : oh.. Nice BTW Jodha got first rank in her school...

HUMAYU : (got angry) ohhh. That's also nice

BHARMAL : OK... Bye...

HUMAYU: bye...

AT EVENING, LONDON..

JODHA : thank you sooo much papa to bring such a lovely gift... ( Jodha take it from the gift box and put it on her delicate neck with a huge smile on her angelic face) how's it looks on me mom...

HAMIDA : it's looking very nice dear...

JODHA : thanks mom...

BHARMAL : Jodha have you decided or not from where you have to do your 10th... London or India... You know na we must shift from here to India... If you do your 10th in London than you have to live moti... Without us...

JODHA : yup... Dad I will decide that I will never leave you both mom and papa... I will do my 10th from India only...

BHARMAL : (feel happy to hearing her beloved daughter) OK then we have to leave for India after this week...

JODHA : OK dad we will...

(After that the 3 of all goes for dinner party in the restaurant... And enjoyed a lot...)


AT KHAN VILLA,

Jalal in his room thinking about his dad's behaviour... But suddenly he got head ache again... He see that angelic face having girl looking not less than a fairy... But at this time he will feel some connection with her... He feel peace in his heart... The peace which he was missing, carving from a long time, which that he not getting from even his family also apart from having a bed head ache on his head he feel his heart beat is increasing very fastly...

JALA 's PROV

Who is this girl.. Always come in my mine...having very bed head ache my heart feel completely different... I feel peace in my heart... Why... Allah... Why... I feel strong connection between us why...? I fee that she only come in my mind to take me from all this sorrow and pain... I feel peace I my heart which I carved for a long time ago... hey... Why.. .



DONE guys ,i know it's small on but plz forgive me .i will think next time i will definitely give the long one ,hope you understood my feelings.

Hit the like button if you like it and do comments plz..

LOVE YOU ALL, 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
wow!😃
Ja n jo in another school...
But y is humayun angry on jo?
innocent soul...
she hasnt done a thing...
ja is sad that his father doesn't like his marks...
he sees jo as the angel...
but doesn't know that soon she'd come into his life!
Loved it!😊
update soon!😊
thanx for te pm!😃
Edited by 155pari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76


Congress dear
Thanks for being first 😳
BTW why don't u reply.. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr



Congress dear
Thanks for being first 😳
BTW why don't u reply.. 😕

actually first i ressed it...so that i'm the first one...😆then i read the chapter...then i unressed and commented...😆
Edited by 155pari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: 155pari

wow!😃

Ja n jo in another school...
But y is humayun angry on jo?
innocent soul...
she hasnt done a thing...
ja is sad that his father doesn't like his marks...
he sees jo as the angel...
but doesn't know that soon she'd come into his life!
Loved it!😊
update soon!😊
thanx for te pm!😃



Thanks sweetie for your such a lovely comments
I just love you 😳
And ya you having very shortly the answers of your questions
So be waiting till I will update 😳 😉
I just comments dear don't get personally OK... 😳 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: 155pari

actually first i ressed it...so that i'm the first one...😆then i read the chapter...then i unressed and commented...😆



OK but nice res.. . Ha... 😃
Keep it up 😳
You will Come always first 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr



Thanks sweetie for your such a lovely comments

welcome dii🤗
I just love you 😳
Love you too❤️
And ya you having very shortly the answers of your questions
ok😆
So be waiting till I will update 😳 😉
I just comments dear don't get personally OK... 😳 😆
i won't😆

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