AKDHA FF : YOUR DREMS BECOME MINE - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Nice update dear
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Read the prologue and CS dear
Seems interesting
Chap 1 is amazing
Really a good start
Even im curious to know whats there in the gift box 😉
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Nice start update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Hiii, deries i know first chappy was sooo small but i will try my best to give long one. Hope you all like. And ya the " RED BOX " i will try to reveal the twist of it. 😳 😳. Sooo here is the...


CHAPTER 2

At, set of jodha akbar

The directer: action...

Fifteen year old boy: but khan baba I want to wan this jungle at any cost... .. . Suddenly he felt immense pain in his head and see a face of beautiful angel which he does not recognise as it was his daily problem whenever ever he try to concentrate on any work he feel same pain, but after normal state he don't know about it, not even a face of his angel... . 😳

Abdul: just come from their school because the result of 9th std. Will be declared in which jalal is second. To give the surprise about it. But seeing jalal's condition he is panic and shouted on jalal', "what the he'll is this jalal you don't go to the hospital na... ... 😡

Jalal: (hold his head in pain) Abdul buddy don't panic year I fine it just a little headache. So just chill yaar. I am go to the hospital doctor said it just a little headache. But yu know what...

Abdul: what jalal, u want to share something?

Jalal: say nothing about the beautiful face of angel which he see at the time of pain. Nothing yr kuch nahi, waise tu yaha kaishe? ?? Change the topic 😆

Abdul: ohhh I just forgot to tell you that you did well in our exam, you come second jalal. 😊

Jalal: in panic tone what I come second, then who is first? ??? 😕

Abdul: jalal.. ... yes you come second but being happy you ask me who is first????? 😲

Jalal: ha Abdul because you know na papa will not happy with this result .

Abdul: put his hand on jalal's shoulder to give him support and say, "don't worry daddy he will be happy... With this result after all you come second. 😃

Jalal: I hope so buddy 🥱.

Abdul: than let's go for party.

Jalal: OK, but at evening...

Abdul:OK done than meet at our daily hangout place with your cousin..

Jalal: I will buddy 😆.


After sometime

At khan villa

Jalal come from shooting and directly goes to his room which is notice by his mother.

Hamida: Directly goes to the jalal's room and knock on door.

Jalal: come in...

Hamida: come in to room and site besides jalal and put her hand on jalal's head and ask with motherly carrying tone, "what happens jalal beta, u look little tensed? ?? ??

Jalal: nothing happens to me mom... Wo...Actually... Would my results are come and I am second in it... 😕

Hamida: Suddenly excited and congratulat jalal and ask than why you look upset????

Jalal: U know na mom that dad will not happy with this much result. 😕

Hamida: Don't worry beta he will understand you 😊. you did well 😃

Jalal: I hope mom 😕

Hamida: Put her hand on jalal's head and say, "don't worry my child"

Hamida: Goes from jalal's room to prepare diner and called jalal and humayu for dinner 😆

Jalal comes from his room to dinner table after informing his cousin Mirza about the party in the evening (on mobile) 😲

Jalal: Start eating his favourite food which Hamida made for her beloved son's results comes good.

Humayu: Notice strange behaviour of jalal and directly ask jalal 😡 what the hell happening to you why you look tensed.

Jalal: hmm... . No... Nothing... Papa 😕

Hamida: Ji vo uska. ...

Jalal: nodded no to his mother but. ... . He red handed catch by his father 😡

Humayu: jalal let your mother compete first 😡

Hamuda: Vo actually his result is coming and he got a second number on class...

Humayu: Jalal... ... 😡 😡 what the hell happening to you why you not come first?? ?? Ha tell me why ????

Jalal: Dad vo shooting...

Humayu: This shooting 😡 😡 😡 jalal I will lastly to tell you that you have to top in the class whenever I will bend you from doing shooting of this historical serial further 😡...

Jalal: But dad plz... First listen to me that... ... ...

Humayu: sut up jalal it's final that you have to top in the class or leave the show... 🤢


At london.



Moti: wow jodhu congratulations dear you did again top in the class 👏.

Jodha: Thanks motu I don't believe year. 😛 let's go I want to give this news to my ma and papa 😆.




sooo,compelet with 2nd chappy i know is quit small but i have my resiofor it so understood me deries.
Fore this boring and rendom chappy all tomato ,potato or whay ever you all want throw on me is acepted from my side...
Plz forgive me for my spelling and grammer misteks
Hit the like button and do comment on it if you like... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice chappy dear
Poor jalal is scared of his father
The beautiful angel is definitely Jodha
So Jodha scored the top
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Yippee I'm first🥳




You always first dear Thanks for like
Do like if you think it nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Lovely chapter buddy!
ja's dad is angry on him for coming second[:8]
jo came first😃
update soon!
thanx for the pm!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr




You always first dear Thanks for like
Do like if you think it nice


It's of course nice ya buddy
That's why I hit like
Update a long one buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
awesome update
jalal really afraid from humayu
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Superb chapy dear...
Thxxxc 4r pm

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