AkDha OS ..Memories.. Updated - Page 11

Originally posted by: lovespari

Thank u fr pm😊
btw ur OS was soo long tht if u want u cn mk it TS 😆 really a long one...n i loved it🤗

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Wonderful os n thnxx for pm dr

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Ohhh... Shagun...👏 I am speechless... I cried😭...

So sorry to make you sad di...

I don't why but I felt pain in every sentence😕 what Jodha felt without Jalal... I can't imagine Jodha without Jalal and Jalal without Jodha... Emotions swiveled me like anything ... No matter what U do but the emptiness in her heart won't be filled... Even after five years I am missing my mom the same way...

True... the void Jalal's absence has created won't be filled by anything or anyone.

Sorry to hear of your mom.

Glad to see how U-curved the story in the end... How Jo's life mission change and she devoted herself doing what Jalal would have liked her to...

The reason was that I simply hate sad stories. How could I end this as a sad one? I wanted to be more inspirational than emotional.

U deserve an applaud for this OS... This story touched directly my heart. Every piece of it... how she is feeling isolated... how she loves to standing by zarokha... Angoory bag... everything I loved it... I could feel you pour your Jodha's pain in word perfectly.

Thank you so so sooo much didu...🤗 Your words really mean a lot to me. ❤️

I read it on a phone first... It was annoying to read because of the format and technical issue... so I copied and removed those extra formatting words... then read it twice... Yaar lovely...👏

OMG... You did that much of effort only to read it?! Wow! 😲😳🤗

I'm really sorry about the inconvenience caused. 😔

And thanks again di! 😳

Originally posted by: eshalli

superb chappy ...dear
thxxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome os Shagun 😃

Enjoyed reading it 😃

You have written so beautifully yar

Bohat emotional tha yar

Loved that flashback Wala scene 😭

Rula dia 😭 Jallu bhai ko kiun mar dia

Thanks for pm

love you 🤗

Originally posted by: melovesja

congratulation for this awesome os. with each new one your writing became more sharpen. you are such a creative person here you bring out rarely touched part of ja's life and elaborates it beautifully .

Mitali dii... OMG Thank you sooo much...😳😳🤗

jalal done every thing in his life to keep her happy after his life his action ,talks , planting of rose plant , his wish how he want to see her always and all this sweet memories boost her inner to be happy and to make his soul happy.

Yup... He's so sweet and loving na? 😳

she feel her soul mat's presence every where . here I remember that scan of ja when jo feel him in front of her while reading his latter from war site.

That's what a soulmate is right? You can feel that person all around you, and in your heart always! ❤️

very beautifully pen down and I enjoyed reading it in spite of it is with a bit sad touch but I loved soul mats love,care and deep thinking about each other. that was the lovely part when she understand his purpose to plant a rose plant and he said that roses pass me your msg.

Thank you so very much for your lovely, lovely words Mitali di...😳❤️

Love you...😳

thanks for pm and keep writing.

Mention not di...and I will...😃😳😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Your writings are always enchanting, lucid and close to heart... Needless to say how much I loved it, how much I felt it and how much it moved me. This is very different from the happy topics what you prefer to choose as the plot of your stories, and I have loved the change, as you have successfully portrayed the emotional pulse of the situation. Loneliness of Jodha, her travel through down-memory-lane along with the remembrance of her love, losing herself in those memories, and lastly her inner strength of being a true empress is wonderfully written. Thank you dear for such a deep OS.😳😳

First of all, a big round of hugs for taking such effort for me... Thank you dii...🤗🤗🤗

And thanks a ton again for all the lovely words. 😳 I'm so so so glad you liked this one. 😳😳😃

And yeah, I hate sad stories, and that is the reason I'm interested in writing them. 😃😛😆

The situation that you have chosen for Jodha is really, really very toughest one. She cannot break down much as she has to keep the dignity of the queen-mother intact, but she is unable to accept the face that he is no more with her... and she is absolutely alone in this situation, there is no one to console her. I sometimes think how much difficult it had been for real MUZ to live in this situation at the time of Akbar's death! Akbar had to close his eyes forever with lots of uncertainty and worry, and she, being alive had to bear those even after he left her side!First the rebel of her own child against her husband for the arge of power and throne, then the fight between own son and grandson for same reason; the rebellion of the very closer ones, who were actually like her own children, against her own child and his cruel decisions against them; slowly seeing the known world to be changed in an unknown one... must have been dreadfully painful! The lives of the empresses are so strange, their most near ones continue to fight with each-other only for mere power of crown which is much much less than the importance of love and relationship, and they have to see this play of destruction of her family in own eyes helplessly... though History never speaks about the hidden tears of those mothers. Who cares! History is of him who achieves victory!

You have explained the plight of the Queen Mothers and Royal ladies very well! 👏 And I completely agree with you... life for these ladies was never easy... they had to live amidst their own loved ones fighting with each other, and sadly couldn't do anything, just be silent spectators of all the destruction of bonds and life.

And about Jodha, yes, even I sometimes think how difficult it would have been for her to live without her only support in Agra. With almost all against her, her own son against his father, and all others fighting... god knows how she had coped up with life!

Though these are not related with the OS. In your OS Jodha is all drowned in the memories of Jalal- the day of her first step in royal court, the carefree happy moments that they managed to spend together stealing time from their busy schedule. Needless to say that both the flashbacks were awesome; I liked especially the first one where we get to see a very modern, unorthodox, supporting and understanding Jalal who is at the same time romantic and caring...😳 The sequence after the flashback where Jodha got to see his glimpse is really touchy and tear jerking.😭

Thank you so much.😳😃 Happy to see you have liked both the flashbacks!😳

The angoori-baag flashback and the rose is all awesome... Such a lively description of the tender love between husband-wife.😳

Thank you again! 😳😃

The part where Jalal's soul came to her was really heart-touching! You wrote in so delicately! Beautiful!

Glad it could appeal to you...😳

"Words will never be able to describe how elated she felt at that moment. In that one moment, in the reflection... it was the Jodha of 50 years back. She could see the previous, glowing Jodha in the mirror, and behind her, the charming Jalal of old. A picture-perfect moment in time it was, one she so wanted to capture forever!

Her hand involuntarily travelled back to her shoulder, where Jalal's hand was. She squeezed it tightly, not wanting it disappear like before.

She closed her eyes tightly, her hand clutching his even more tightly, she let tears fall. She wanted to live this moment, his touch, his warmth, his presence for as long as possible.

This one moment with him had given her the strength to live the rest of her life. Feeling a new energy in herself, she finally opened her eyes, clouded with the tears. She blinked them a few times to get a clear vision...and as expected by her, her Jalal was gone."

Beautifully described!👏

The last part of the OS was very smartly written, with perfect usage of words and all the feelings of heart! Thank you my dear for writing this OS.😳😳

Thank you so so so much again di, for all the lovely words and your time and effort. Love you...🤗❤️

And yes, I too loved the last part most. ❤️😳😃

Look I have done such a long comment. Aab to New Life pe comment kar de meri maa!!🤣

Kabhi na sudharna aap...😲🤣🤣

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
u described a lover's plight beautifully
loved it

Originally posted by: konakalla

Awesome update

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-