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irene

@sangreal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Wonderful words..

Thank you very much :)

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

👏😳Beautiful, splendid, fabulous and creative⭐️⭐️⭐️ Very well thought off and written.⭐️

The walk down the memory lane from the painting, their talk together about DEK and their romance, Rahim's mischief, the title of MEH. Jodha pain of remembering their moments, the rose plant. The whole feeling of connecting with Jalal via the rose😳. Very sentimental. The ideas and thoughts of Jalal imbibed in Jodha and she taking them forward, very thoughtful.

A beautiful piece of work. Keep it up Shagun.

On second thoughts, baby is growing up😳;maturing and more sensible.

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Sonali

@sonali96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Awseome os dear...

Wonderfully written

Everything was well described...

Loved it

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ayushimehra

@ayushimehra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

NGame hai shikave hai kisse hai baate hai
baate bhul jaati hai yaade yaad aati hai
ye yaade kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
chale jaane ke baad aati hai
yaade yaade yaade

badhan ho to chhod e darpan ho to tode
ham sab hai mushkil me ye dil hai is dil me
yaade yaade yaade
nagame hai

ye yaade haay yaade yaade
yaade yaade yaade

duniyaa me ham saare yaado ke maare
kuchh khushiyaan thode gam ye hamase inase ham
yaade o mithi mithi yaade
khatti mithi yaade
nagame hai

nagame hai shikave hai kisse hai baate hai
baate bhul jaati hai yaade yaad aati hai
ye yaade kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
chale jaane ke baad aati hai
yaade yaade yaade

saa ga re ga saa ni ni saa saa saa
saa pa ma pa ma pa ga ma ga
saa pa ma pa ma pa ga ma ma pa
ye jivan dilajaani dariyaa kaa hai paani
paani to bah jaa_e baaki kyaa rah jaa_e
yaade yaade yaade
nagame hai

duniyaa me yu aanaa duniyaa se yu jaanaa
aa_o to le aanaa jaa_o to de jaanaa
yaade yaade yaade
nagame hai

nagame hai shikave hai kisse hai baate hai
baate bhul jaati hai yaade yaad aati hai
ye yaade kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
chale jaane ke baad aati hai
yaade yaade yaade

badhan ho to chhod e darpan ho to tode
ham sab hai mushkil me ye dil hai is dil me
yaade yaade yaade
nagame hai

ye yaade haay yaade yaade
yaade yaade yaade

duniyaa me ham saare yaado ke maare
kuchh khushiyaan thode gam ye hamase inase ham
yaade o mithi mithi yaade
khatti mithi yaade
nagame hai

Edited by ayushimehra - 9 years ago

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ayushimehra

@ayushimehra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Thanks shagun, today i read this or i gone speechless. You beautifully wrote jodha memories, after going Akbar, sure this memories are her life, or we can say her Breathing cause.

May bee death can't deny both, or both, soul mate, but sure physically appearance have its own importance. or after your write up, if Jodha eyes filled up with tears, me eyes also fill up with tears.

sure which things she see she feel presence of Akbar. Maybee she live to learn, absence of Akbar, because his memories was her strength.

But Always Breathing +living have a big difference.

or Breathing she maybe took after Akbar going, but she live every breath, which he wants from her, after his going.

i read real life jodha leaved Agra fort or she shift Fathpur sikiri.