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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you soo much Shagun.🤗 Yes, Jalal is far far different from his original royal presence. Majestic, thy name is Jalal! But here he is not that one.😆
[Let me reveal a secret...😉 I had written this story long ago in Bengali,obviously with different name of couples...but since that was too childish, I rewrote it again with changing the leads, and posted it here so that you all can read it.😆]

It is fully from Jalal's point of view, his feelings, his happiness, his frustrations...and Jodha's character will come in light from his eyes...

Yes, and it is a bit difficult to imagine Jalal this way. But chalo...I'll get used to soon. 😆

Ohhh... that is the reason it does not fit on AkDha! Just kidding. 😆

Okay... Lets see how Jalal sees her. But I wishes we could get her views also.

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thaaankkk you.😃

😃 Update 😃

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

That was really HURTFUL dear...

JALAL is in so much STRESS and PAIN... 😭

But did JODHA FORGET her CHILDHOOD BEST FRIEND???

Is her FRIENDSHIP SO WEAK that with time her PRIORITIES CHANGED SO MUCH!!!!????? 😒

Hope JALAL cracks the INTERVIEW and gets his FAMILY WELL SETTLED... ⭐️

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

So this is the concept... wow its really different stuti...😊

you know what am waiting for this type of story plots... but unfortunately no one stared this type of stories...

finally you made it... I am feeling very happy stuti...

You have very well narrated the delicate boundary between blossoming teenage dreamy love and the matured adult life's hard reality...

you are trying to mirror the hardness of life of a unemployed, responsible, lower middle class youth... and this very toughest task to enter into like this character n express their feelings through appropriate words which will touch n penetrate through readers heart...

Well doing stuti... and eagerly waiting for jodha' s character... how she behave with her well settled life... what type of feeling she has for jalal...

Update soon jodha begam...😉

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Yes, and it is a bit difficult to imagine Jalal this way. But chalo...I'll get used to soon. 😆

Ohhh... that is the reason it does not fit on AkDha! Just kidding. 😆

Okay... Lets see how Jalal sees her. But I wishes we could get her views also.

I too agree with shagun, stuti... Han we want her view also... Please make it for us na...😳😊

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maniwood

@maniwood

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

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Awesome update... You expressed the dreams of jalal so nicely and suddenly that transition to problems around him in present

You showed all his problems and frustration so nicely

Loved how the way he said that I will always continue to love you ❤️

Agree with shagun it's so difficult to imagine jalal poor yaar... Jalal is always be will be royal for us 😆

So he is going to a job interview... Kahi waha jo to nahi boss? 😉

Edited by maniwood - 9 years ago

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Congrats for this new story and an awesome start👏
Storyline is quite different. It highlights Jalal's care and frustration towards his current poor condition. Still he dreams for Jodha.
Would be eager to read in coming chappies how he gets rid of troubles he has due to his poverty😊

Yes, one more request, I just love your another story "New Life" please update that soon