SS: ~I love Jodha~completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Yes, and it is a bit difficult to imagine Jalal this way. But chalo...I'll get used to soon. 😆

Ohhh... that is the reason it does not fit on AkDha! Just kidding. 😆

Okay... Lets see how Jalal sees her. But I wishes we could get her views also.

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Hayye Ram...mujhe dekhke comments yaad aate hain?!! 😲😆

My cousins had come for Holi, so was busy playing, chatting, and ghooming with family. 😆 And then yesterday was my bestie's bday, so we had a party at her house in the afternoon, and then had to go to a party at night also. 😆 Now finally I am free. 😃😆

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Wow yar soo amazing update..
ja loves jo soo much..he think jo doesn't love him..
its a vry different concept..suprbly written..

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

BTW, You didn't PM me? 😆

awsum
jalal's character is here totally different
he thinks that jo doesnt love him now
he is a cigar addict
haww
update asap dr

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

So this is the concept... wow its really different stuti...😊

you know what am waiting for this type of story plots... but unfortunately no one stared this type of stories...

finally you made it... I am feeling very happy stuti...

You have very well narrated the delicate boundary between blossoming teenage dreamy love and the matured adult life's hard reality...

you are trying to mirror the hardness of life of a unemployed, responsible, lower middle class youth... and this very toughest task to enter into like this character n express their feelings through appropriate words which will touch n penetrate through readers heart...

Well doing stuti... and eagerly waiting for jodha' s character... how she behave with her well settled life... what type of feeling she has for jalal...

Update soon jodha begam...😉

Congratulation debu fr one more story😲🥳
concept is Nice n going to read thrugh Ja perceptive will be interesting😃
but m thinking hw u gonna manage all three stories in a time [:{] as we all knw all loves ur both stories n updt reqst always on ur thread so i think its going to b tough fr u 😉
All the best😊😆

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

I too agree with shagun, stuti... Han we want her view also... Please make it for us na...😳😊

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Congrats for this new story and an awesome start👏
Storyline is quite different. It highlights Jalal's care and frustration towards his current poor condition. Still he dreams for Jodha.
Would be eager to read in coming chappies how he gets rid of troubles he has due to his poverty😊

Yes, one more request, I just love your another story "New Life" please update that soon

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Nice start buddy .really can't bear Jalal in that condition.update soon