Akdha OS:**BROKEN SOUL **PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 11

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<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">HELLO AKDHIANS</font>
<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I M PRESENTING MY VERY FRST OS</font>
<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I ACTUALLY DNT KNW HW IT LL BE BUT ITS MY FRST TRIAL</font>
<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">HOPE U ALL LL LIKE IT</font>
<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">IT MAY CONTAIN 3-4 SHOTS</font>
<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">IF REQUIRED I LL GO FR MRE😆</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="6"> </font><font color="#ff00ff" size="6" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">BROKEN SOUL</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">All d house was busy preparing for d welcome of der ladla beta who is none other den our jalal who is returning frm abroad after 3 yrs cmpleting his studies</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"arey jaldi jaiye aur dekhiye ki sab tik tak hai ki nahi"asked d excited mother hamida</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"haan haan tumhara hi sirf ek beta hai woh mera bhi beta hai bhai aur uska welcome karna mera bhi ek jimmedari hai "replied d equally excited father</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"tum log jagdthe hi rahoge ya kuch kam bhi karoge "came a voice behind</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"tum log aagaye "said hamida</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"kaise nahi aathe aakhir hone wala jaamai hai mera "replied hamida</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Behind was a girl who was all time blushing thinking abt his future</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">husband who is none another our jo</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"arey jodha aau aau hamari beti "said humayun</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"arey ji beti nahi bahu hai hamari "replied hamida while controllingg her laughter looking at d blushng dulhan</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"tum log jalal ko jyada pressurise math karna shaadi ke baare mai"replied jodha father bharmal</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"arey bharmal kaise bathe kar rahe ho jalal hmare puchne se pehle hi shaadi ke liye haan keh dega aakhir dulhan kon hai "answered humayun</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"esi baat nahi hai humayun puchna tha padega na "said bharmal</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Den suddenly dey heard a car sound</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"chalo chalo ab bathe bohot hogaye shayad jalal aagaya"said mainavathi</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hearing dis d girls cheeks turned to cmplte red</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">c was actually very xcited to meet him</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">(jo-ja wer clg frnds nn wer dating too so d whole family decided to make dem marry )</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">A man in his 25s has stepped out of d car while being welcomed by d family members</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">one by one just hugged him as dey have met him after 3 long years</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Den came d girl who just hugged him very tightgly but to her disappointment he didnt hug her back or he said hiii to her</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">c was hell confused on y he is behaving in dat way</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Just den a girl stepped out of d car frm other side n just came n stood beside jalal holding his arm tightly</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Jodha who just get disappointed wid jallals behaviour was hell shocked wid d entry od new lady wid jalal n dat too very close to him</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">on d otherhand d family too wer very confused on who da girl is</font>


so who do u think d lady is ???
n y jalal is behaving odd wid jo

Do comment n like plzzz
As its my frst trial of writing








INDEX
CHAPTER 1 -PG 1
CHAPTER 2-PG 4
CHAPTER 3 -PG 11
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats dear
Its nice 😊
The kabab me haddi must be Ruku 😡 😆
Update soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Congrats dear
Its nice 😊
The kabab me haddi must be Ruku 😡 😆
Update soon 😃


Hehehe thanx Bindu
Obviously d kabab mai haddi is rukku
I was feeling very bore n d best time pass is just think or write something abt akdha 😆
Edited by mickeymini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsum
haww..
why did jalal bring ruku??

this is cheating
os means one shot
u left on clifhanger
😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum
haww..
why did jalal bring ruku??

this is cheating
os means one shot
u left on clifhanger
😭


Oh my cute Lil sister thanx fr d comment
I mentioned it ll be 3-4 shots na
So patience baby
I ll nt make u wait long
Kal de dungi
Waise wenur giving ur update ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when I started reading I was like Damn it was my concept😆
Actually I have written an OS something like this but reading its end I am relaxed now😆
My OS is different than your story😛 Thank God😆

Nice part.. and congrats for ur first trial😊
update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">when I started reading I was like Damn it was my concept😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Actually I have written an OS something like this but reading its end I am relaxed now😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">My OS is different than your story😛Thank God😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nice part.. and congrats for ur first trial😊</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">update soon!!</font>


Ooh I read urs I remember but believe me its nt d same
It ll change 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mickeymini


Ooh I read urs I remember but believe me its nt d same
It ll change 😆

But I haven't update yet dear.. I have written in my diary😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But I haven't update yet dear.. I have written in my diary😆</font>


Ooh OK might be SME others was same too I read it long ago
I don't remember d authors name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So nice dear but Jalal's behavior n ruks r annoyable
Poor Jo
Update soon

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