Akdha OS:**BROKEN SOUL **PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Beautiful os dr n update nxt asap eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Congratulation monica😃
ur frst OS 🥳😃
superb strt dear..
Ja was cuming aftr 3yrs n all r excitd to meet him but ther is one who is waiting fr him desperately...is our Jo n whz going all red n pink due to blush😳 😉
Ja cm Jo was soo excitd but he didnt response the way she expctd😒
ohh...he cm with a girl😲 i knw she will b ruks only but i hope she is jst his gf only if he cm up by mrrying her...m going to kill him😡😡
waiting fr nxt prt dear...
update soon n please pm me dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os dear...
Nd congrats for ur first work. ...
Jodha nd family was very happy. ...
Nd he comes nd give everyone shock. ...
What is ruks up to...
Update soon. ...
Nd do pm me to. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tmrw dear fr sure :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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K dear...waitinggg
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-2

All entered d mansion with a huge smile plastered on their faces as their only son has returned back after 3 long years n to take over their business.
Equally excited was jodha as she really wanted to talk to jalal and express her love as c knew that jalal too loves her a lot.
"Beta aau na"said hamida
"arey chote babu aap jara luggage andhar rakh denge"said humayun
"mom wow just look at our mansion it has completely changed ,its looks quite modern exactly of my taste"said an excited jalal.
"hmmm...hona bhi chahiye aakhir humare bete ka ghar jo hai"said hamida .
"beta tume pata hai kisne ye sab design kiya hai"said humayun looking at jo
"kisne abbu"said jalal wanting to know who knows his tatse so well
"jodha nai design kiya hai beta"said hamida to which jodha said "arey ammi ab ye sab bathe karne ki kya jaroorat hai"
"wow jo i heard that u have completed ur masters in designing but i havent thought you have such an amazing talent and taht too you desinged according to my taste"said jalal looking at jo
Hearing him prasing her cheeks turned into red which didnt go unnoticed by ruquiyya.
Jalal then turns her head towards ruquiyya n ruquiyya signs him not to say anything.
Jalal then introduces ruquiyya to the whole family
"Ammi meet her she is ruquiyya sulthan my friend"said jalal
Listening to the word of friend jodha felt a relief of sigh
"arey aunty uncle aap kab shimla se aye hai???"asked jalal
"beta tumhare aane ki khabar milthe hi maina nai first flight ka ticket book kar diya aur hum subah hi yahan pohanch gaye hai"said bharmal
"arey aunty thats so sweet"said jalal
"ok now just let him freshen up then we can talk alot with him"said hamida
"Haan mom can you please help to show the guest room for ruquiyya till then i will refresh myself"said jalal
"sure beta ,ruquiyya please come i will show you d guest room"said hamida
After half an hour all were waiting for jalal and ruquiyya to accompany them for the lunch
"arey woh dekho dono aagye"said bharmal
watching those two coming together jodha was feeling very bad but didnt show up her feelings outside and also she was hell confused on why jalals behaviour is not d same as like before
"wow aunty so many"said ruquiyya
"ya ya come na jalal maine sab tumhare pasand ka banaya hai"said hamida
D lunch time went well with all gossiping about jalals life in US
"Humayun i think ye baat kuch waqt ke baad karna thki rahega hum jodha ke paas reh jayenge" said bharmal
"nahi nahi subh kam mai kabhi deri nahi nahi honi chahiye "said humayun
All wer sitting in the hall having a tasty desert and chit-chatting happily
"jalal beta i want to ask to something"said humayun
"ji abbu puchiye na" said jalal
"beta woh hum tumhare shaadi ki baat karna chahthe the "asked humayun
"hum chahteh hai ki tum aur jodha shaadi karlo ,bachpan ke dosth hai and i think you both love each other.
"hearing the word marriage and that too with jodha jalal immediately get up from the sofa n started walking.
all were shocked by his sudden action
"arey beta kya hua hai humne kuch galat kaha hai"said hamida
Without looking at anyone jalal moved straight towards jodha and came very close to jo with a rage in his eyes
"whats all this jo ??? Did you say them that we were dating few years back ???"asked jalal
"no jalal "said jo with a fear in her voice
"then whats all dis nonsense???jo we were just 19 by that time and i was not even knwing whats d actual meaning of love"said jalal looking at jodha
"but jalal i love you maine tab bhi wahi kahan aur aaj bhi yahin keh rahi hoon"said jo
"but i dnt jo i have changed alot i have discovered many much more being in US "LOOKING at ruquiyya
"aur tum mujhse shaadi karne ke liye kese thayar hogayi aukath kya hai tumhare bas kuch designing course kar diya aur ek CEO ke saath shaadi karne ka sapna dekh rahi ho"said jalal shouting
Listening to his harshful words jo just was hell shocked on how jalal is talking like this
"ye tumhe kya hogaya jalal ese tho tume pehle nahi the kya hogaya tume kuch chupa rahe ho kya tum mujhse"said jo by holding his shoulder
he just pushed her and said just stay away from me
"i just said na i dnt wanna marry you n by the way ye ruquiyya jo tum dekh rahi ho yeh meri girlfriend hai, i love her a lot n wanna marry her isliye maine ise yahan laya hai taki mai ammi abbu ko shaadi ke liye permission maang shaku"
listening to his words her entire world collapsed
"yeh kya keh rahe ho beta "said maina
"arey aunty aap hi ise samjhayiye ki kyun itne bade sapne dekhne lagi hai ???"said jalal looking at maina who was hell shocked with this side of jalal
"jiski jo aaukat hai use wahin tak rakhna hai ,jyada hi ahmiyath de tho sir pe chadh kar rakhenge"said jalal while murmuring which jo has listened
While saying this jalal has got a tight slap from his mother
"bas jalal bas tume ye shaadi nahi karni hai tho maat karo but dis type of insult and that too with your childhood friend and dat aunty n uncle jo tume aapne bache jaise pala hai "said hamida
"pala tho kya ammi i cant marry her on this basis "said jalal
"you know what ammi this ruquiyya is the billonaires daughter and this jo is just a daughter of a normal govt.employee"said jalal
Hearing such an insult from jalal jo just went towards jala
"yes jalal i did a big mistake"said jo
"sry sry ek nahi do do ,ek tho maine tumse dil se pyaar kiya aur dusri i just forget that d status between us .sry MR.JALALLUDDIN MOHAMMED i frgt all this
"sry aunt and uncle mujhse bohot badi galthi hogayi hai aur mom n dad please can we leave now i cannot hear much insults from this CeO"said with a broken heart or simply now she is broken soul
With all this the singh family started to move towards the main entrance
"please bharmal ruk jaao na just because of jalal we cant cut our freindship "said humayun
"nahi humayun hum apni dosthi kabhi nahi todenge bus ab hume yahan se jana chahiyr,look jo is upset right now we will talk about this later "said bharmal
The singhs left with jo thinking of never again coming back to jalal again.
she is not upset because he rejected her love but he has dare to insult her father n mother
With a broken heart she has decided to completely eliminate jalal from her life unknown to d situation that another broken soul has just collapsed on d floor by his harsh words to d love of his life


Oops i think quite a long one dis time 😆
i m sure u have njyed dis part
i m thinking of making dis OS in our parts so dat dis ll have a proper ending
HIT LIKES N COMMENTS PLZ



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good update dear. ..
Jodha was so happy but jalal broke her heart. ...
But when I was reading I felt that jalal was doing all this for some things... I hope in right with my thought...
U can take ur insult but nt ur loved once insult...
Update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing one
yeh kya jalal hi hai
last part was interesting
update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update monica
poor jo yaar she was so happy with jalals comeback
but he broke her heart
update next part soon
thanks for pm
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avika444

Nice update monica

poor jo yaar she was so happy with jalals comeback
but he broke her heart
update next part soon
thanks for pm


Akka wen ur gonna update ???
It has been two weeks since no update frm u
Confession part kosam intha wait cheyinchadam bagole
Update soon Akka

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