Akdha OS:**BROKEN SOUL **PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 11

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Yaar, Iss ruku ko lana jaroori tha kya. Serial main already hamara dimaag kharaab karke rakha hai isne. Ab stories main toh hame baksh do😆

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Oh my cute Lil sister thanx fr d comment
I mentioned it ll be 3-4 shots na
So patience baby
I ll nt make u wait long
Kal de dungi
Waise wenur giving ur update ??

will b waiting dr
will update after boards
i will go inactive after 2-3 days..
then will come back with update

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: swetiii

will b waiting dr
will update after boards
i will go inactive after 2-3 days..
then will come back with update

OK dear no prblm
First concentrate on ur exams
Perform well den u can update d chapter 😊

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow monica congo for first os

Nice start dear

so jodha is soon going to be mrs jalal ...

par wait who is this lady ??

O know its rukkaiya but how is she related to jalal hmmm

is she his girlfriend or worse then that .. is she his wife

baba re

Continue soon bangaram

and pls do pm ok

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Namita

@155pari

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

congo for ur new sotry dear!

update soon!

do pm me..😊

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey Buddy
Nice start of story👏
Congrats for your first attempt🥳
Eager to read the suspense of Ja behavior in next chappies

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awesome os 😃

os likh bhi dia aur muje pm tak nhi ki

Umm i think the new girl is ruqaiya 😃

continue soon

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
Awesome os😃
os likh bhi diaaur muje pm tak nhi ki
Umm i think the new girl is ruqaiya😃
continue soon

Oh soru Maine kisi KO bhi pm nahi kiya
Part -2 update pas sab KO pm kardungi OK na

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Note :
Hey guys thanx fr commenting on my first os
But next part may take a bit time as my brother has took d laptop as he is out of station
Once he returns back I ll surely give 2 updates at a time
D writers well knw it very hard to type frm mobile