Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Okk ! I know m just soo very much late to unress ! M really very sorry dii !
Its okay. Since you were busy with studies ,I forgive you.😆
This one is fr the 3rd part !
This was just AMAZINGLY AWESOME !
Thank you.😃
Just loved it but after reading it , i really need one more shot please ! Can't get a hold on my anxikus heart which desperate for some AkDha moments 😉 !
I have really no idea how to expand it. if I do it with emphasizing on Akdha I fear it will deviate from the topic and will go on the same path of the TV show which I don't want.😆 I can try to write a short shot featuring how they are 'living happily ever after' but I am getting short of imagination.😕😛
Well, I will write a different TS very soon with another mother-son... Jodha and Salim. ok?😉 [Well I am not promising😆😆]
N about this shot , i really loved the way u penned Jalal's n HB's emotions n Jodha's as well .
Seriously , it was fantabulous !
But still , it doesn't change my views about Jalal 😛 ! Really sorry if m again sounding wierd here but this is what actually i could think about Jalal !
O poor Jalal...😭🤣
But i guess , this part had somewhat lessen that pity for him.
U are just MIND BLOWING !
Really?☺️
I was living in that moment their reading Jalal - HB convo ! It just stole my heart away !
Beyond words ! The motherly love she bestowed n the emotions which were convulsively flowing from his heart for his mother , left me speechless !
I loved this line. Thank u so much.😳😳
Please update one more shot ! Please !
Too tough!😆😆 I think I should continue on Jalal-Hamida relationship after Salim's birth if I want to make this a ss.😉
Thnks fr the pm 🤣.
Thanks for commenting at last!!🤣
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