FF:Breathless: Tryst with Fate (Chap 4 updated page 1 (23.03.16))

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome story dear i totaly loved it plz update next chapter so soon i can't wait any more 😊

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

congrats 😛🥳

rear combination of writing and poem. beautifully written and choice of words are ⭐️ for us cherry is always at base 😉

Jalal wants to solve the Mistry which brings peace to his heart and jodha too lost in black orbs.😛

jalal is admen to do anything to get her glimpse and jo is trying to see that magnetic orbs.

jalal and bk,jo and bhamal all have their plan and mission. interesting to know how its unfold.

waiting to😳 read more.

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

congrats for new story dear😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congrats for new story Deepa😊

Will read tonight!!.

Pm me if possible.

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SUGANYA.S

@Suganya.S

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Woah !!!

Really i cant believe 😲😲 Is this Deeps ?? Now a writer of FF in our forum 😲

I mean Deeps , u atlast accepted our requests and penned ur own story I m so excited to read it , and will revert back after reading the chapter completely 😳 U know my speed anyway 😆

I will try reverting back as soon as i get some leisure time 😃

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Thank you Deepu for for considering our pleas to continue this story. 🤗🤗

And congrats for your first FF/SS.🥳

I will come back shortly after reading part two 😳

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

wow congrats deepu akka for this story...
nd also ur continuing this story...
concept was awesome akka...
1st chapter was lovely d way jodha jalal met nd there reaction was so good to read...
in 2nd chapter there r thing about each other nd trying to find each other. ...
waiting for next chapter akka...
update soon. ...
nd plz accept my request akka... nd plz do pm me from next update plz...

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

fantastic updates

jodha rescue jalal😊

waiting for their next meeting

continue soon

thnkx 4 pm

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Congrats for your story Deepa di... 😃

Chapter 1 :

Amazing amazing chapter di... 😡

Loved it so much... 😳

I loved your plot...Jodha being a warrior and saving Jalal... 😳

Loved the way you have described the feelings of both of them... 😳 😃

Really beautiful chapter di! ⭐️ 😕 😃