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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
i guess that guy is ja...superb dear..continue soon& do pm

May be he is,,,,

I will update in a while dear...Thanks dear...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Teja ?? What a name 🤣
& Chinnu was cute name given by Jo, while the macho man has named her Sonu
I liked the way her so called brothers just fled away by looking at serious and Bossy face of Chinnu😆
Funny and nice chappy...
Thanks for the PM dear

She don't know what to call so suddenly called him as Chinnu...

Sonu cute na,,.,thanks for liking it...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: swetiii
awsum
cheenu.. jalal
sonu.. jodha
hahaha

nic trick
hehe

update asap
cant wait

Thnaks Swetiii...

I will update in a while...

Smart Jodha...hahaha...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: divyaJA
Amazing..
teja nd rani..omg so funny..
cut name chinnu..hehe
oh sonu what a sweet name..
update soon part plzz..

Thanks divya...

Smart Jodha...Poor brothers...

I will update in a while dear...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: swriter
Nice chapter di i know this guy none other then was jalal .
Plz update soon

May be he is.. May not... U will know soon...

I will update in a while dear...

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: anu012
lovely chptr dear
nice name chinnu ,teja
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thanks anu...

I will update soon...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: kajalparijat
Awww wonderful update dii 👏
i enjoyed it thoroughly 😊
hww those boys 😡 were misbehaving with jo
but jo is way smarter 😉
she addressed that unknown person as her boyfriend..Chinnu 😃
that teja and rani thing was too funny 🤣
but that person named her as sonu..aww 😳
i think he is jalal..
Thanku for pm
take care of yourself

Thanks Kajal...

I am doing good.. I will take care ... Thanks for asking my sweet sister...

May be he is Jalal or may not.. Wait for few minutes... Hahah..,I will update in a few minutes..😛

Thanks for liking the names...

Jodha smart girl...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

I know it is little boring but still I am posting..hahaha.😆.. thanks for the comments & likes... I will try to give reply to all... thanks everyone for supporting me..

CHAPTER 4:

A week passed...

Both jodha & Vaishu completely forgot about that incident...

In that week they wrote gre exam too. Both got good score..wanted to do ms in same university...

But the guy tried to forget that incident but he is not successful..she keeps on coming in his mind... unknown to him he felt in love with her... Love at first sight..he once tried to go there to find her..but unlucky he didn't find her..

After 1 week he went to a engineering college for the placements..he is a HR manager..so to select candidates he went to the college..the same college where jodha is studying...

Guy came to the college...first 3 rounds finished...last 2 rounds are there... college management arranged everything for him... but he just want to have a fresh air so he came out near the canteen sits on the near by bench & calls to her mom...

Jodha & Vaishu are going to canteen to have a lunch..The saw that guy there...

Jodha:look Vaishu my Chinnu came...

Vaishu:what... who Chinnu??

Jodha:that guy..saved us na..came here..look he is talking in phone...

Vaishu:sees him... look... I told u na..he directly came to college in searching of u...

Jodha:what... bullshit.. he came for me...have u gone mad?? I bet he don't remember us...might be he has some work..don't give much stress to ur pea brain...May be look he dressed in a neat way...like a complete software employee..May be came for the placements...

Vaishu:May be... but u don't go to him..no need to say thanks to him.. not required...ok ...

Jodha:ok madam.. I won't... chalo let's go we have 2 more rounds...

Vaishu:Jodhu is it required to attend placement??? We already planning to do ms... again this... y Jodhu???

Jodha:U r true but if in the last minute if dad won't allow me to go ms then at least I should have job in my hand to postpone marriage...plz lets go...

Vaishu:ok chalo...ur wish my command madam...

Jodha:that's y I love u baby..hugs her..

Vaishu: me too Jodhu... I am always with u... chalo let's have lunch..but plz don't hug me. I am not that type...

Jodha: gaves a angry look & soon both laugh together..chalo..

Both finished their lunch went for the final rounds...

Both selected for the HR round.. waiting for their turn...

Soon jodha got her call she went inside...

Jodha:good evening sir. & looks the sir face.. gets a shock...Chinnu u here???

Oops I mean sir.. I am sorry..

Guy:also shocked...U here??? Sonu... oh sorry miss teja...

Guy:but wait.. U r teja.. who is this jodha??? I think some mistake happened... let me check...

Jodha:sorry sir... I am jodha only.. that day my friend told some other name... we was scared because of that guys ..so she thought that why we should tell our original names to u...so she Said some different name... we are really sorry sir...

Guy:hmmm... so u r miss jodha...it's ok.. I can understand..ok..let's start the interview...

Jodha:sure sir...

He asked her few questions regarding job ...no personal questions...

Guy:miss jodha u can wait... we will let u inform...

Jodha:sure thank u sir... & can I ask u something...

Guy:sure...what ???

Jodha: U r name sir...

Guy:jalal...

Jodha:sorry sir for calling u with stupid name chinnu & thank u so much for saving us that day...

Jalal:that's ok jodha.. I like the name... & can I ask u something...

Jodha:yes sir...

Jalal:I LOVE YOU...WILL U MARRY ME...

Precap: jodha reaction...

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Res
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woww what a dhamakedar update dii..
Jalal proposed jo in the second meeting itself 😲
he's really fasy forward 😃
so jo's chinnu gave her a shock..
Let's see what will be her reaction..
Thanku for pm
take care..luv u

Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago