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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter : 1

Sam's eyes opened to see a ceiling made of bamboo and dried grass. She frowned. She must be in a village house. But what was she doing here? Then she remembered it. Her accident. Someone must have found her. But where was she? This didn't look like a house from Washington. Rather it looked like those ancient Indian houses you see in Indian movies.

She tried to get up. As soon as her head left the pillow, it felt like she was being run over by a truck. She clutched the side of her head and screamed. No sooner had she screamed than a woman opened the door and came inside. Sam frowned again. She hadn't noticed that before. Then again, everything looked the same here. Sam turned to the woman.

" Are you alright, baisa? " The woman asked in pure hindi. Sam frowned again. At this rate, she was going to get wrinkles before she was 20. Who talked like that anymore? Sam saw the woman looking her up and down and found herself doing the same. The woman was wearing a blouse and a skirt. She had a sari draped over her upper body and tied to her skirt. She had a veil over her head.

" Are you alright? " The woman asked again. Sam couldn't find the strength to answer. So she just nodded. Which was a mistake. Her pain flared up again. She clutched the side of her head and dropped it down on the pillow. And the woman went frantic with panic. She started screaming and calling. Hearing her, an old man came inside.

He sat beside Sam and touched her forehead. And then took a box out of his bag. Opening the box, he touched the liquid inside and applied it on her forehead. Soon, her pain began to decrease. Slowly, she got up and looked at the man who helped her.

" Thank you. " She said in English. Now it was their turn to frown.

" We didn't understand you. " Again the woman said in pure hindi. Sam supposed these villagers didn't know English.

" I mean, thank you. " She said in hindi this time. They seemed to understand and smiled. Then Sam asked the question that had been at the back of her mind all this time.

" Where am I? " She asked them. They looked at each other.

" You don't know? " The man asked. Sam shook her head. The man sighed and answered, " You are in an ashram in Malwa. " Malwa? Wait a second. As far as she knew, Malwa was a place of ancient India and a province of the Mughal empire. Malwa didn't exist in modern India.

One thing I didn't tell about Sameera is that she was a genius with an IQ level of 174. The only subject she didn't like was history. It gave her a headache. The dates and the names. The only reason she knew about the Mughals was because her mother was obsessed with the Mughal Emperor Akbar who was one of the greatest kings of India. But that was another story for another time.

Right now, her mind was connecting the dots and forming the possibility. It couldn't be possible. But everything she saw indicated that it was. The house ... this kind of house didn't exist in the Indian villages of the modern era. The people, the way they talked and wore clothes. She had to confirm what she thought.

Sam quickly got up. Ignoring the pain and the calls from the woman and the man, she went to the door and opened it. What she saw confirmed her theory. The people who were there wore the same clothes. The women wore blouse, skirt and sari. The men wore full sleeved long kurtas and pajamas. They also wore pagris over their heads.

There was a well to the right and a road beyond that. Sam saw some people riding on horses. Not as entertainment or sports, but as a transport. The women were cooking on a stove of woods and bricks and with utensils made of soil. All these things, they existed in the ancient times in India.

Sameera couldn't believe it. She was right. Somehow . . . . somehow, during or after the accident, she was transported to the past. She went back in time, in the ancient India. Sameera did the only thing appropriate for the situation. She fainted.
Edited by Agents - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
So many replies in one day!!! I am so excited. BuT there some things on IF that I am struggling with. How do you accept friend request and add them to friends list? And how do you take a comment and write under it? Someone please help me. Btw, for those who don't know , my name is Samara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy very nice prologue n amazing chapteršŸ‘ Just loved itā­ļø
Very unique 😊 She got transported to ancient India by an accident 😲

n she's stuck in something she doesn't like at all... HISTORY!!!! 😲😲

Can't wait for d next chapter... Update soon dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Agents

So many replies in one day!!! I am so excited. BuT there some things on IF that I am struggling with. How do you accept friend request and add them to friends list? And how do you take a comment and write under it? Someone please help me. Btw, for those who don't know , my name is Samara.


Heyy dear to accept friend request-
U will see a notification as soon as u log in if someone sends u a friend request. U just have to click on d 'Okay' option n then it will take u to your buddy list... Then u click on d 'Pending List'. A list will appear with d names that have sent u a request. U just click on d green tick mark on that id... n that member will b added to your friend list. OR, U can click on your Dashboard ( d orange section at d top of your profile) n then open your your friend list n do d same with d previous option. (Though d dashboard will only show u Friends option when it has a downwards arrow beside it otherwise it does not show d Friends option. Don't know if it only happens with me or not😔)


To take a comment n write under it/ Quoting -
Click on d 'Quote' option above d comment u wanna quote. Then u will see that comment on your reply box. e. g. [QUOTE abcdefgh... QUOTE]
Just write your reply at d end of [Quote] or below it n click on 'Post Reply' n voila it's done.



I know dear it wasn't much helpful n I only confused u more😭 I was just trying to help😭 Sorry for scaring u with my stupid solutions😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

update ur both stories nest chapter soon pm me don't be late



Updating soon bro... Really very sorry for keeping u waited😭 I'll surely pm u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SreshthaBiswas


Heyy dear to accept friend request-
U will see a notification as soon as u log in if someone sends u a friend request. U just have to click on d 'Okay' option n then it will take u to your buddy list... Then u click on d 'Pending List'. A list will appear with d names that have sent u a request. U just click on d green tick mark on that id... n that member will b added to your friend list. OR, U can click on your Dashboard ( d orange section at d top of your profile) n then open your your friend list n do d same with d previous option. (Though d dashboard will only show u Friends option when it has a downwards arrow beside it otherwise it does not show d Friends option. Don't know if it only happens with me or not😔)


To take a comment n write under it/ Quoting -
Click on d 'Quote' option above d comment u wanna quote. Then u will see that comment on your reply box. e. g.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to JA forum Samara
Congrats for the first story
I like ur concept
Update the next part soon
And pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Chapter : 2

When Sam's eyes opened again, she was staring at the same ceiling she had seen previously. This time she had no difficulty in remembering what happened. She had TIME TRAVELLED. She was screaming in her mind at herself. When she had enough, she got up and looked around. She found a young girl of her age sitting on the floor with her head on the bed. She seemed to be sleeping. Sam gently shook her to wake her up.

The girl got up and blinked a few times. She looked at Sam and smiled. "You are awake. Forgive me. I was supposed to look after you but I fell asleep." The girl said.

"It's okay." Sam said in English. The girl looked confused. Then Sam remembered that these people didn't know English. And her Hindi was not as good as theirs. This was going to be a pain in her a***.

"It's okay." Sam said again in Hindi. This time the girl understood and nodded. "What's your name?" Sam asked the girl.

"Lakshmi. And yours?" The newly dubbed Lakshmi asked. "Sameera." Sam answered.

The girl frowned. "Sameera? That's an unusual name." She said.

"Well it's a very popular name from where I come." Sam said.

"Where are you from?" The girl was curious, Sam could see. She wanted to answer her question truthfully. But she couldn't exactly tell her where or rather when she was from. But she didn't want to lie either. So she opted for something in the middle.

"I am from a land far away. You haven't heard of it." The best lie is the one that had a grain of truth in it. Sam knew the girl was still curious. But she just nodded.

"You need to clean up, Sameera." Lakshmi said.

"Sam. Call me Sam." It was an automatic response. Whenever someone called her Sameera, she corrected them. Because no one except her dad called her that. Her mom used to call her Meera.

"It's my nickname." Sam said to Lakshmi's confused frown. "My friends call me that." Lakshmi's eyes widened at the word 'friends'. But then she smiled and nodded. Seemed like Sam made a new friend.

"As I said, you need to clean up. And then we will go the bazaar." Sam became confused at Lakshmi's words. Why would they go to the market? Lakshmi seemed to have understood her confusion, because she said, " You need new clothes. Is that how girls
wear clothes in your land?"

Sam looked down at herself. Her half sleeved white T-shirt that showed her hips and black skin jeans. She looked around for her jacket and her leather boots and found them in the corner of her room. She smiled and looked at Lakshmi.

Sam nodded. "Well not all of them. But it is quite popular." Lakshmi nodded and went outside. She came back after sometime with some clothes and handed them to Sam.

"Here wear these after you take a bath." She told Sam. Sam turned the clothes over. It was the same clothes that the women here wore. A yellow blouse and skirt with a red sari. Sam gaped at them. She didn't know how to wear a sari.

"What happened, Samee ... Sam?" She quickly corrected herself. Sam smiled and answered, "No, I don't. I have never even touched a sari in my life. The blouse and the skirt ... I can near myself, but the sari ..." Sam trailed off.

Lakshmi smiled. "Let's do this. After bath, you wear the blouse and the skirt. I'll help you wear the sari. Then we'll go to the market." Sam breathed a sigh of relief. Now she wasn't one of those who didn't believe on God. But she wasn't one of those who believed in God's goodness ardently either. But right now she thanked whoever was upstairs that she got Lakshmi as a friend here.

She nodded and asked for the bathroom. Lakshmi led her to another door and opened it. Inside was a small bench with a bucket full of water in front of it. There was a small pot floating on the water of the bucket. Sam guessed this is how they bathed. She sighed and took her iPod and iPhone 6 out of her pocket. She looked at her iPhone in remembrance. Her father had got it for her as soon as it came to the market. Sameera Roy always got the best of everything.

She gave the iPod and iPhone to Lakshmi. "These are very important things of mine. Please take care of them." Again, Lakshmi was curious. But she just nodded and kept them on the bed carefully. Sam smiled and went inside the bathroom.

It took Sam all of 15 minutes to take a quick bath and wear her blouse and skirt. Then she took er previous clothes from where she hung them and came out of the bathroom. Lakshmi was waiting for her. She took the clothes from Sam and kept them on the bed beside the phone. Then she helped Sam wear the sari. Sam's eyes followed her every movement, memorising how to wear it. She was gonna need it here in the future ... or the past ... or whatever. Finally it was time to leave for the market.

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They were in the market. Well ... This market wasn't like those Sam was used to. Rather it looked like a fair that was held in villages. Stalls were set up under the open sky and people were running around under the scorching sun to buy and sell their necessary things.
Lakshmi had done a lot of buying. Apparently, the fever of shopping was prominent among the girls of this time as well. Sam didn't mind. She liked shopping. After all she was a girl.

Lakshmi bought a couple of saris for her as well as skirts and blouses. And also some bangles and necklace and ear rings and ... Well, you get the drill. Finally shopping was done. At least that's what Sam thought. But Lakshmi still had some shopping left. She had to buy some flowers for puja. Little did Sam know that going to buy some flowers would change her life forever and help make history.

Sam was talking to Lakshmi when someone smashed into her ... A strong someone. That hurt. Rubbing her arm she looked at the man. He was a handsome man with a a height of 5'10 and abroad chest and well built body. He had moustache and a beard. Even with that, Sam could tell that this man was in his early twenties. She analyzed all these in one second. Genius, remember?

But this was in the back of her mind. In the front of her mind though, she was very very irritated. "Watch where you are going, man." She said irritatedly. But the man didn't answer. Rather he kept looking on emotionlessly. What a weird man! Sam shrugged it off and turned around. Then it happened. She felt a weight on her back and hand on her shoulder. She turned around and saw the same man holding her.

Sam did what any 21st century girl would do. She pushed the man and slapped him hard. "Bloody characterless pervert." She said in English. Then she took hold of Lakshmi's hand and tugged it, "Let's go, Lakshmi." Lakshmi couldn't believe that Sam slapped someone. Seriously the girls of this time were too shy. Sam didn't know what kind of storm that one slap was going to bring to her life.

Sam and Lakshmi went to the flower stalls. Lakshmi took the flowers and Sam payed the shopkeeper. When she gave the money to the shopkeeper, his eyes went to the lightning shaped birthmark on her hand. His eyes widened. He took hold of her hand and began screaming, "The princess. The lost princess has come back."

Sam panicked and tried to free her hand. She looked at Lakshmi for help. But Lakshmi's eyes were fixed upon her birthmark. Hearing the man, many people came there and started saying the same. Sam freed her hand and turned towards Lakshmi. Lakshmi was still lost. Sam screamed at her face. "Lakshmi, what is happening?"

Lakshmi blinked and looked at her. "Sam, you are the princess. The lost princess." Sam didn't have time to ask what she meant. Because screaming had started outside the market. "Mughals. Mughals have come. Run. Run." Several people screamed. Everyone panicked and started running.

Lakshmi grabbed Sam and started running. "Sam, we need to get out of here. Its the Mughals." Sam turned around to see about 10 to 15 people clad in black and red uniform with swords in their hands. The Mutual soldiers. That were taking everything they could get their hands on and also hurting some of the running people. That couldn't go on for long. Soon other soldiers came. The Rajput soldiers. It was a bloody sight. Soldiers fighting soldiers.

Suddenly Lakshmi stopped running. All this time, Sam was turned around. Now she turned to look in front of her. A Mughal soldier was standing in front of them. Sam pulled Lakshmi behind her. Right now it was fight or flight. But there was no way to run. Fight was the only option now. Sam had a better chance for that. She was sure Lakshmi couldn't fight. Sam could. She had taken many extra classes in school. Classes that included self defence, martial arts, fencing and many others. If it came down to fight, Sam was the more capable one now.

The soldier looked at them with an evil smile. He grabbed his sword tightly and attacked. Sam pushed Lakshmi out of the way and dodged the blow only to find another blow coming her way. This time, she caught his hand and twisted it making the sword fall. The soldier grabbed her neck with her other hand. Sam grabbed that hand and tried to push it away. But her tries didn't work. So she opted for another way. She aimed a kick and landed it right on target. The place between his legs. He released Sam and grabbed the place dropping on his knees. Sam couldn't resist it. She landed a punch right on his face. He fell down on the ground, unconscious.

Sam turned around to see Lakshmi gaping at her. She shrugged and grabbed hold of Lakshmi to take her out of the market. When they came out of the market, they saw the Mughals taking their injured soldiers and going away on horseback. The soldier that fought Sam was one of the injured ones. The Rajputs drove away the Mughals. Everything was alright, for now. But it won't be for long. This was just the calm before the storm.

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A/N : So guess who the man was. I'll change some things. You'll know what later.
Edited by Agents - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is lovely... and soo interesting... liked it soo much... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read 2 chappis in a go

it was really awzum

was the man whom sam slapped was jalal

update asap

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