||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

awesome start shagun loved it

you are an amaing writer you described jalal's feeling very well

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.
awesome start shagun loved it
you are an amaing writer you described jalal's feeling very well

Thank you Swara...lekin Jodha's Diary aur mera OS bhi padhna haan...😆

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Thank you Swara...lekin Jodha's Diary aur mera OS bhi padhna haan...😆

maine os par reply kiya jodha ki diary fursat se padhte hu😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

maine os par reply kiya jodha ki diary fursat se padhte hu😆

Haan I saw it...chal aaraam se padhna...😆

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Haan I saw it...chal aaraam se padhna...😆

haa varna mein sirf res karunge to😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

haa varna mein sirf res karunge to😆

Nahi nahi res ves mat karna...aaraam se padhke fir comment karna...😆

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Nahi nahi res ves mat karna...aaraam se padhke fir comment karna...😆

ha varna mujhe yaad he nahi rehta kedahr res kiya hai😆

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

ha varna mujhe yaad he nahi rehta kedahr res kiya hai😆

😆😆...haan haan thik h...will be waiting for your comment...😆

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago

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deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Nice update shagu.
Perfectly penned down ja pov.
This update remind the intial part of jodhakbar where ja potrayed himself like a jallad , a heartless person.
His past experience n betrayal ffrom his own family members make him so hard that its difficult for him trust them.
Bt still someehere it also showed that he also hadsome feelings which he cant share with anyone .
Nd now its more interesting to read the story frim his pov too.

So now ithout anydelay update the nxt partsoon..

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lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Nidhi dii...🤗
Thank you sooo much...😃
Love u for your bada waala post...😃
I also wanted to describe all that dii...but its just the 1st part...he'll describe his feelings in the coming chapters...😛
Luv u luv u luv u sooo much dii...🤗

welcum dear 😃
luv u fr bada wala post...mtlb mera cmmnt aacha nhi tha 😭
oops...sorry..hehe..i think m over excitd...hehe..i will patiently wait... 😃
me too luv u soo much baby... 🤗