||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68 - Page 10

wow interesting start...showed ja pov...continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

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😆 priyu again same ques..hw mny times u r going to ask same ques dear...

Originally posted by: lovespari

welcum dear 😃
luv u fr bada wala post...mtlb mera cmmnt aacha nhi tha 😭
oops...sorry..hehe..i think m over excitd...hehe..i will patiently wait... 😃
me too luv u soo much baby... 🤗

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Nice update shagu.
Perfectly penned down ja pov.
This update remind the intial part of jodhakbar where ja potrayed himself like a jallad , a heartless person.
His past experience n betrayal ffrom his own family members make him so hard that its difficult for him trust them.
Bt still someehere it also showed that he also hadsome feelings which he cant share with anyone .
Nd now its more interesting to read the story frim his pov too.

So now ithout anydelay update the nxt partsoon..

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

wow interesting start...showed ja pov...continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Bada h toh accha nhi ho sakta kya...obvio dii...bohot hi accha comment h aapka...I love it when u post such detailed comments...🤗

😆 sorry...sacchi 😛
aww...thank u 😳 😃

Baby it was awesome!!
the way you penned down the thoughts of Jalal is outstanding...
enjoyed reading it darling!!
sorry shagu for late reply!!
yrr I got busy with studies!!
update soon Darling😉

Originally posted by: lovespari

😆 sorry...sacchi 😛
aww...thank u 😳 😃

Originally posted by: Monucute

Baby it was awesome!!
the way you penned down the thoughts of Jalal is outstanding...
enjoyed reading it darling!!
sorry shagu for late reply!!
yrr I got busy with studies!!
update soon Darling😉

lovely update...I was thinking abt this epi of wen jalal's jootis were stolen and how that feloow's legs were chopped off...it was truly khauf e jalal... 😉 u have neatly written about jalal's pov...do update soon... 😳