||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Hey Awesome Shagun👏

Nicely written... It will be more interesting to read his pov about Jodha's beauty his beloved's first glimpse.

Originally posted by: 155pari

Congrats for your story dear...

Amazing start...

Similar to that of the serial

But then more expressive...😃...

Loved it baby...

Update soon...

And yeah... Thanx for the pm...

Originally posted by: manu26

Amazing nice one nd thnx for PM 😊

Very nice concept shagun

Thanks fr starting Jalal's diary with Jodha's diary...now we cn cm to knw about both of them together at the same tym... both the stories r fab... continue it n update soon asap...😊

Originally posted by: avika444

Very nice concept shagun

Wow jalal's diary and u penned down from his pov beautifully

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: AmanDeep21

Thanks fr starting Jalal's diary with Jodha's diary...now we cn cm to knw about both of them together at the same tym... both the stories r fab... continue it n update soon asap...😊

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Thanks a lot Namu...😃

I'm going to show his views on the events in the serial only...so some things are going to be same...I'll change the ones I didn't like...😊

Will update soon...😊

welcome dearie... But frankly, i found urs more expressive than the dialogues written by CVs...😆😊

Originally posted by: 155pari

welcome dearie... But frankly, i found urs more expressive than the dialogues written by CVs...😆😊

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

shagunnn darrliinngg update plllsss